You're welcome!

I really liked her expression and pose, I think they did a good job of showing her personality. Plus, I really like the way your interpretation of pressure!
I suppose if you want any tips it's that maybe erasing the outline of her body beneath the belt and just letting the shading convey her shape since usually in real life when you're looking at something that's see-through you'll be able to make out the basic shape but not the clear outline of the object.... I hope that makes sense.
But then again I tend to work using color instead of black and white so feel free to ignore me...