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  • Listening to: "The Piano" Soundtrack.
  • Drinking: No, no, I'm driving.
There is no more prologue to Luc's Hope. It's just too long and too integral to the story. I'm of the opinion that prologues should be bonus material; you can skip it if it's not your thing, but it will provide new context to the story you're reading. A good example to point to is the stained-glass sequence in Disney's B&tB. It's a pretty sequence, and it gives us the ticking clock (ticking rose), but if you start watching the movie at the title screen, you'll understand the story just fine. You will not understand Luc's Hope if you skip the prologue, so I'm making it a proper chapter. Hell, at this point, it's probably going to end up being the entire first act; it's too important to the development of Lucias's character.

Other changes to be made: Two of the bodyguards are now ladies, and they will talk. Well, they'll communicate telepathically. The point is, they'll have dialogue. Oh, and they get names. And the Hound is now a Shark. Here's the rundown.

Shark (male Whitetip reef shark), "Shynrak"
Bird (female Steller's Sea Eagle), "Yrrath"
Monkey (female Red ruffed lemur), "Lepntenth"

Fanart now being accepted, but be warned, I may steal your design ideas.

Yes, it's sad, no more dog that runs up the side of cliffs. I thought it would be funnier to just have Shynrak grab Lucias, jump out the window into the sea with him, and then morph into his True Form underneath him. Funnier for me, anyway, I'm trying to make the scene scary as hell.

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Current Residence: With me mum and da.
Print preference: Matte Prints, 8 by 10
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Personal Quote: "It must be True Love... nobody else would take this shit."
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shipain Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbummiesplz:Happy Birthday! Have your cake and eat it too
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shipain Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbummiesplz:Happy Birthday! Have your cake and eat it too
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shipain Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbummiesplz:Happy Birthday! Have your cake and eat it too
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shipain Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbummiesplz:Happy Birthday! Have your cake and eat it too
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shipain Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbummiesplz:Happy Birthday! :cake:
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Rosengeist Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the fave!
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shipain Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:iconbummiesplz:Happy Birthday! :cake:
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CloudineTibaut Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Hello!
How are you? :)
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CallistaUrsa Featured By Owner May 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I just spent a lovely day reading Luc's Hope :) I quite enjoyed it, and I thought you should know! Plus, Luc's gained another fangirl lol. I really love his design. Anyway, great work! :hug:
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LaTopazora Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you for the :+fav:
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