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Shibari Constrictor

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By prettypunkae

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Shibari Constrictor

Freestyle, by Punkae

Heated, heart beating,
Twisting, turning.
My breath on the air
ike ghosts in the wind.


Chill surrounds me,
fire within me.


Ropes like snakes,
coiled around me.
Twisting, turning,
suspended above.
From my work in progress book, Punkae's Little Book of Poetry Erotica. Enjoy! ♥
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SecretSketchbook's avatar
This is very amazing, from personal experience?
prettypunkae's avatar
Heh heh heh... something something mystery, something something intrigue! Bunny Emoji-86 (Sneaky) [V5] 

:XD:
SecretSketchbook's avatar
Where is my detective hat this is a mystery worth solving
Fal-Den's avatar
I really like the middle section, Chill and Fire. Chilly can be cold and hot at the same time! I can imagine being bound in a shibari is torso tight, my lungs wouldn't be able to bear it.
prettypunkae's avatar
Oh thank you! I was thinking embarrassed/aroused (hot on the inside) but in a very cool room, but it's up to the reader to determine how it's interpreted. I am so glad you gave it a read! ♥
Fal-Den's avatar
Interpreting poems is why I lovez poems. Your welcome gurl!
SecretSketchbook's avatar
Pretty apt comparison, especially with thin rope, it takes one or two pulls to make that thing tight, one at the start one near the end
Fal-Den's avatar
I thought so too!
SecretSketchbook's avatar
The glory of the box tie, it can gentle or rough, and it works so well, no way to get free from a well done shibari
Fal-Den's avatar
I'd like to think I could, I'm like a fox~
SecretSketchbook's avatar
Even foxes can be caught, just requires the full body harness kind then
Fal-Den's avatar
Body Harness escapeble?
SecretSketchbook's avatar
Not really it ensnairs the entire upper body and , personal opinion anyway, should include ever through leg bindings, simple and effective
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Cristosius's avatar
Certainly a good beginning :D
Enticing ^^
prettypunkae's avatar
Many thanks! It's my favorite one so far. (:
Cristosius's avatar
I can see why it's your favorite ^^
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