Binbouda Momiji

First the Good.
Its a great pose and a nice choice for a vector, I like the eye and the glasses as well as the colored outline.
For issues with the image, the outlines are all a little rough, it looks line you used way to many points and that makes for a jerky line.
The tips of a lot of the lines are blunt tapered at odd angles or not connecting to lines they should.
The color in some spots does not fill in to the point it should.

This is preference but you should have probably done the rest of her hat thing or at least cut it off properly.

All in all not terrible and I can see potential looking forward to more.

In love with this anime, so hilarious xD