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Zach has to visit his Aunt Vivian's three lovers before her ghost merges with him and transforms him forever. He'll have to confront his own demons if he's going to stop his chest from getting any bigger.

Contains WG and TG

Commissioned by :iconlordmattie:. Thanks for being awesome!
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ChubbaDubDubHobbyist Writer
My fetish is pretty cut and dry; I usually stick to vanilla WG erotica, but I still found a lot of the other transformation elements in this story really strongly erotic. Beyond that though, this is just a fantastically interesting story. By the end, I was invested in the plot and legitimately wanted to know what was going to happen, which is a real achievement when writing erotica. The action moves very quickly and excitingly from sentence to sentence. This story is bizarre, dark and mysterious in a really tantalizing way, and it's beyond well-written. Kudos!
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praedatoriusHobbyist Writer
I'm delighted to hear how much you liked the story, and that you were willing to enter the weird side of erotica for a little while. I can think of no greater compliment. Hope to hear from you again soon!
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I realize it was for commission but I just.. I feel sorry for him :/
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Forgot to comment on this story. One of your better (in my view, given my prefercences) stories, one full of hot scenes and some charming dialogue, though I admit the ending is rather bleak.
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Forgot to comment on this story. One of your better (in my view, given my prefercences) stories, one full of hot scenes and some charming dialogue, though I admit the ending is rather bleak.
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praedatoriusHobbyist Writer
I feel a little sorry for Zach but I feel more sorry for Vivian. She and Zach merged with each other, but if they had succeeded and Zach got rid of her, she would have just shuffled off to whatever afterlife she got sent to. I can't imagine how scary that feels.
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to absolutely lose yourself and slowly not be sure of whats actually real and what's in your imagination or even what your real memories are. That would be terrifying.. I kind of almost want to see a continuation of this just to see a happier ending lol.
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praedatoriusHobbyist Writer
You make a good point: it's terrible to lose your identity. However, I like to think of it as becoming a completely new person. I think of it as another form of transformation. Not only does Zach's body change, but his entire person undergoes a transformation.

On one hand we value our identity, but imagine how exciting it would be to swap parts of your identity, or to merge with another person and make them part of your experience.

Since you brought up the idea of a continuation, I'd like to tell you about an idea I have. Obviously Zach and Vivian's memories merge and they become one person, but one can't have conflicting memories or one would become schizophrenic. One half each of Zach and Vivian is repressed, and maybe sometimes those memories resurface in the form of a completely different person.
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troodon9999Hobbyist Photographer
That wouldn't be exciting.  That would be horrifying.  Complete loss of one's identity is no different than death.  Once you cease to be who you are, you cease to be period.
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praedatoriusHobbyist Writer
I see what you mean, how losing identity is practically a form of death. I feel that becoming a new person would be a form of rebirth.
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A-Magic-SandwhichHobbyist Writer
This is story is hella dark.
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