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A Bumblebee Among The Poems

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By Pr0metheusUnb0und   |   
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A pale hand's reach
for long forgotten poets
unearths
dust soaked wings
sewn
on a stripped jacket.

Snown by ashen rays,
they soar towards
their birthplace.

Even my lantern
does not uncloud
the ash they long for.

They are looking
for their flower.
Not the sun.
© 2012 - 2020 Pr0metheusUnb0und
Weird occurrence: I took up a book that I haven't touched for a month. From behind it a black-and-yellow drone buzzed through me rushing for the window panes. How did it get there? When? Can they survive that long in the darkness, surrounded by nothing but words?
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0hgravityHobbyist General Artist
lovely first stanza.

interesting inspiration.

congrats on the DLD.
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Thank you! (you should read my Radiohead inspired ones.)
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just so happens Radiohead is my favorite band.
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Sammur-amat General Artist
congratulations on the DLD, lovely soul! :huggle:
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We are slowly creeping there. Thanks for the push! :D
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Sammur-amat General Artist
always a pleasure! <3
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Concora Writer
Beautiful. Congratulations on the DLD!
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Thank you dear.
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Thank you kindly.
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camelopardalisinblueHobbyist General Artist
This is lovely! :)
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Why thank you. :)
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You're very welcome!
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Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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You featured the hell out of me man. Thanks! :)
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BelaRoseWolfStudent Writer
This is a very interesting piece... It's unique, and has some nice emotion here. Great work!
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Gracias Bela, eres muy amable.
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BelaRoseWolfStudent Writer
De nada! :blush: Y gracias tambien!
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Me2Smart4UStudent Artist
The emotion within this poem is strong.
for it engages me as the reader to deeply feel the true emotions expressed...
This is very well written...I enjoyed each word :clap:
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Thank you kindly.
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Me2Smart4UStudent Artist
you are most welcome :hug:
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