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Poopsy was a normal girl who was 11 years old but she had a special mind. The other girls were all not as special and teased Poopsy. The main bully was called Bertha and she wore a purple cardigan a and had blonde hair.
It was lunch at school and kids were eating when Bertha walked up to Poopsy. "Poopsy you are ugly and no one loved you" said Bertha to Poopsy's face. Poopsy sat on her own as she had no friends, she was an underdog, a stray wolf, a black sheep if you will.

Poopsy cried "it's not my fault" as Bertha laughed at her. Poopsy threw her tacos in the bin and went home.

At home she cut herself because she was depressed. Her mother walked in and asked her if she wanted anything from the shop.
Poopsy declined and went to bed, but the tragedy was she really did want something from the shop!
She wanted a knife to stab Bertha but she sighed and figured it wasn't worth it. But the thought of it gave her a feeling in her heart. She wanted to kill Bertha but she wouldn't...not yet.

It was the next day and the sun was shining. Poopsy had cereal for breakfast but when licking her spoon clean and putting it back in drawer she took a knife. It was a brutal ominous sharp knife. She imagined it in Berthas head and got the feeling again.
At school she had the knife in her bag, at any moment she could whip it out and slice everyone up. But she didn't...not for now.
Lunch came and she sat next to a boy named Grubs. Grubs had black hair and a bike which he rode to school on.
Suddenly Bertha walked up to Poopsy. "So Poopsy have you seen any ghosts recently?" cackled Bertha. "I didn't wish to be born like this" sighed Poopsy as she clutched the knife. Bertha spat in her face and walked away.
"You can't let Bertha talk to you like that" said Grubs.
"You don't understand, I have a special mind" sighed Poopsy as she flicked her hair out of her eyes.
"Embrace it" smiled Grubs, "I see ghosts too".
Poopsy spat out her milk, "you see ghosts too?".
"Yes that is what I said" said grubs as he smiled.
Poopsy finally had a friend, she and grubs went to the cemetery together and saw ghosts. "I am finally happy" she cried with joy as she threw the knife at the ground. "I don't need to kill Bertha" she thought to herself as she rode away with grubs on his bike.

2 months went by and Poopsy and Grubs were officially dating. Poopsy strutted into school with a smile on her face "time for another day of kissing grubs" she smiled.
Suddenly she heard a scream. A scream that sounded both lovely yet horrifying. She ran to find what the scream was and she saw grubs lying on the floor with rocks on his head.
Bertha stood opposite him, throwing rocks at his head.

"Stop it!" cried Poopsy "I love him".
"I know that's why I'm throwing rocks at him" said Bertha.
Poopsy ran all the way too the cemetery to get the knife. She found it and ran back to school and jumped at Bertha. The two were fighting a battle of good vs evil.
Poopsy had a knife, Bertha had rocks. Poopsy was obviously the better fighter!
But then Bertha threw a rock and hit the knife out of Poopsy's hand.
"That the best you got? I can just pick the knife back up" chuckled Poopsy. She had a good mind so analysed situations well.
As she went to pick it up she gasped. The knife had landed on Grub's face.
"You MONSTER!" screamed Poopsy. "Me? You were the one who dropped the knife into his head" smirked Bertha as she walked to class.
"Grubs, you were the only one who understood me" whimpered Poopsy.
"Poopsy" moaned Grubs as his life ended.
Poopsy was left by Grubs dead body in tears. She pulled the knife out of his face and saw blood on it, grub's blood.
"The only way I can clear Grub's blood from my hands is with Bertha's blood" smiled Poopsy as she got the feeling again.

That night Bertha climbed into bed. She snuggled up in the blanket and started to snooze off before she noticed a pair of eyes watching her.
"Who's there?" Bertha yelled.
"Oh I have a name" the voice said, "but you people tend to call me other names.. crazy, weird, fat"
"Poopsy?" muttered Bertha.
Suddenly the figure jumped at Bertha, revealing herself as Poopsy and stabbed Bertha with the same knife that killed Grubs.
Bertha let out a scream as she died and Poopsy whispered in her ear "I'm sorry I kill you...."
Poopsy's creepypasta story of how she become killer and about her special mind 
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Frostedspace Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
gold star literature
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NightPapilio Featured By Owner Edited Aug 14, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Well, she doesn't look like 11 years old, your mind and writing techniques are!
(Edit: PLEASE tell me that this is a joke oc, cause it will be epic if it is)
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mttsnail Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2018
"Poopsy you are ugly and no one loved you" im screaming
this is prime literature
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Mega-hax Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2018
I'm crying rn this is truly real literature 
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AnimeGirlInAToaster Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Excuse me, would you mind if I re-write this and try to improve the quality? No offense, I just think I see some points where it could be changed for the better.
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UnderfellSamantha34 Featured By Owner May 9, 2018  Student Digital Artist
*inhales*BOI!
Okay, I'm not sure if this is supposed to be a TrollPasta. But I'm just going to point out everything that makes NO SENSE!
   1) So Poopsy's cutting herself. And her mom walks in on her. HOW THE HELL CAN YOU ASK YOUR DAUGHTER IF SHE WANTS SOMETHING FROM THE STORE WHILE SHE IS CUTTING HERSELF?! Even abusive, alcoholics, drug adics, or parents just dont care about their children will have some sort of reaction!!!
   2) WHY THE FUCK! WOULD YOU LICK A SPOON CLEAN AFTER USING IT?! WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU?! 
   3) If she had a knife, why would she want to ask her mom to get her one from the store?
   4) WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU ASK YOUR MOTHER FOR A KNIFE?! You'd have to be a very stupid parent to get your child a knife without asking.
   5) What kind of 11 year old are you if you think you can take on and kill the whole school with a single knife by yourself?
   6) What kind of parent would name thier child "Poopsy" or "Grubs" 
   7) How is Bertha not seeing the knife in Poopsy's hand? 
   8) How is NO ONE seeing the knife?!
   9) How has the knife not cut her hand?
  10) Why didn't Grubs do anything while Bertha spat in Poopsy's face if he was there the whole time?
  11) When and how was Poopsy drinking milk?!
  12) LIAR! She threw down her knife and said she didn't want to kill Bertha. She want from "I want to kill this bitch" to "I don't need to kill this bitch" in 15 sentences
  13) Two 11year olds in a relationship in only two months and start kissing already? WHERE THE FUCK IS THE FBI?!
  14) Um...how the fucking hell can a scream sound both lovely and horrifying? 
  15) How close is the cemetary from the school, and HOW CAN THE KNIFE STILL BE AT THE CEMETARY AFTER TWO MONTHS?! WHERE THE HELL IS THE CARETAKER?!
  16) Who is the good in the "The two were fighting a battle of good vs evil"
  17) Just becuase Poopsy has a knife dosent necacaraly make her the better fighter.
  18) If you think logically, you know how rock beats scissors? How do you think a rock will effect a single scissor?
  19) Why didn't Poopsy just pick up the knife instead saying it out loud? I just laughed so hard. 
  20) So the knife lands ON his face? and not IN his face?
  21) How could Bertha walk to class after all this? WHERE THE FUCK ARE THE TEACHERS?! AND WHERE THE FUCK IS THE CROWD OF KIDS YELLING "FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!"
  22) Oh yeah, becuase the only way to get rid of Grubs' blood is to get Bertha's blood on it totally make sence.
  23) And why does every oc that ends with "The Killer" always have some kind of catch phrase
  24) "I'm sorry I kill you...." Bull shit. Poopsy's wanted to kill Bertha from the start
  25) and this story is no where near being an "xreader" or a "jeffthekillerxreader"

I'm sorry, this story was just so frustrating. And is Poopsy a Mery Sue oc? Just asking.
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AndriodKitty Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2018
r/wooosh
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UnderfellSamantha34 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2018  Student Digital Artist
wat
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UltraFuri1 Featured By Owner May 22, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
13) Two 11year olds in a relationship in only two months and start kissing already? WHERE THE FUCK IS THE FBI?
have you seen my old elementary school rofl.
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equinoxii Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
okay


all I've gathered from this story is that an 11 year old girl with D cup tits killed someone because she was called fat

and she licks spoons clean then puts them in the drawer


(honestly the latter deed is more animalistic and cruel)
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Bekoningda Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2018
This is.......crappy absolutely crappy just stop get some help[Spongebob Emote] breath in. boi. Peridot Boi HERE COME DAT OWL! 
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SailorVelvet Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2018  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
best story 420/10, would get the feeling again
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cocoKisses112 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2018
Ummm...ok. i was reading a rant book from someone and i came across this. Oh joy
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okachan1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
JEEF SHOULD MARRY YOU RIGHT NOW BITCH LASAGNA
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WierdGirlCameIn Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2018
He kinda did.
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mochidarklight Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2017  Student Artist
Poopsy was a normal girl who was 11 years old but she had a special mind. The other girls were all not as special and teased Poopsy. The main bully was called Bertha and she wore a purple cardigan a and had blonde hair.
It was lunch at school and kids were eating when Bertha walked up to Poopsy. "Poopsy you are ugly and no one loved you" said Bertha to Poopsy's face. Poopsy sat on her own as she had no friends, she was an underdog, a stray wolf, a black sheep if you will.

Poopsy cried "it's not my fault" as Bertha laughed at her. Poopsy threw her tacos in the bin and went home.

At home she cut herself because she was depressed. Her mother walked in and asked her if she wanted anything from the shop.
Poopsy declined and went to bed, but the tragedy was she really did want something from the shop!
She wanted a knife to stab Bertha but she sighed and figured it wasn't worth it. But the thought of it gave her a feeling in her heart. She wanted to kill Bertha but she wouldn't...not yet.

It was the next day and the sun was shining. Poopsy had cereal for breakfast but when licking her spoon clean and putting it back in drawer she took a knife. It was a brutal ominous sharp knife. She imagined it in Berthas head and got the feeling again.
At school she had the knife in her bag, at any moment she could whip it out and slice everyone up. But she didn't...not for now.
Lunch came and she sat next to a boy named Grubs. Grubs had black hair and a bike which he rode to school on.
Suddenly Bertha walked up to Poopsy. "So Poopsy have you seen any ghosts recently?" cackled Bertha. "I didn't wish to be born like this" sighed Poopsy as she clutched the knife. Bertha spat in her face and walked away.
"You can't let Bertha talk to you like that" said Grubs.
"You don't understand, I have a special mind" sighed Poopsy as she flicked her hair out of her eyes.
"Embrace it" smiled Grubs, "I see ghosts too".
Poopsy spat out her milk, "you see ghosts too?".
"Yes that is what I said" said grubs as he smiled.
Poopsy finally had a friend, she and grubs went to the cemetery together and saw ghosts. "I am finally happy" she cried with joy as she threw the knife at the ground. "I don't need to kill Bertha" she thought to herself as she rode away with grubs on his bike.

2 months went by and Poopsy and Grubs were officially dating. Poopsy strutted into school with a smile on her face "time for another day of kissing grubs" she smiled.
Suddenly she heard a scream. A scream that sounded both lovely yet horrifying. She ran to find what the scream was and she saw grubs lying on the floor with rocks on his head.
Bertha stood opposite him, throwing rocks at his head.

"Stop it!" cried Poopsy "I love him".
"I know that's why I'm throwing rocks at him" said Bertha.
Poopsy ran all the way too the cemetery to get the knife. She found it and ran back to school and jumped at Bertha. The two were fighting a battle of good vs evil.
Poopsy had a knife, Bertha had rocks. Poopsy was obviously the better fighter!
But then Bertha threw a rock and hit the knife out of Poopsy's hand.
"That the best you got? I can just pick the knife back up" chuckled Poopsy. She had a good mind so analysed situations well.
As she went to pick it up she gasped. The knife had landed on Grub's face.
"You MONSTER!" screamed Poopsy. "Me? You were the one who dropped the knife into his head" smirked Bertha as she walked to class.
"Grubs, you were the only one who understood me" whimpered Poopsy.
"Poopsy" moaned Grubs as his life ended.
Poopsy was left by Grubs dead body in tears. She pulled the knife out of his face and saw blood on it, grub's blood.
"The only way I can clear Grub's blood from my hands is with Bertha's blood" smiled Poopsy as she got the feeling again.

That night Bertha climbed into bed. She snuggled up in the blanket and started to snooze off before she noticed a pair of eyes watching her.
"Who's there?" Bertha yelled.
"Oh I have a name" the voice said, "but you people tend to call me other names.. crazy, weird, fat" "Poopsy?" muttered Bertha. Suddenly the figure jumped at Bertha, revealing herself as Poopsy and stabbed Bertha with the same knife that killed Grubs. Bertha let out a scream as she died and Poopsy whispered in her ear "I'm sorry I kill you...."
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StarPunch64 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2017
Quality writing at its best.
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GebruikerLotte Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2017
693282/10 :D
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Ronacaine Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
poopsy666, the moment I saw the title of the story I fell in love with you, please marry me.
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SaviourSplash Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2017
Now I'm afraid that Poopsy is gonna go to my house and lick all my spoons before putting them back in drawer...
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TaffyLaffyProduction Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2018  Hobbyist Artist
OH SHEET! I THINK SHE ALREADY DID IT TO ME!
(jk it was just wash XD)
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lollpoplove220 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2018  Student Digital Artist
Iconic.
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WolfieCrafting Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
4,000/10
Best story ever *Claps*
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littleluv04 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2017  Student Filmographer
Special mind...? 😈
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atlasgamer Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2017
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH POOPSY IS NOT A BADASS I'M MR. TORGUE AND DO NOT APPROVE OF POOPSY 
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CeltyMcMelty Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2017
poopsy ommmmg
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creepy-girl2366 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2017
Beautiful !*claps* lol
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Sonics-Number-1-Fan Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm sorry I kill you
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ItsNotNomo Featured By Owner May 31, 2017  Student Artist
there was a girl that killed a student because they were called fat
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AllIWannaDoIsSleep Featured By Owner May 13, 2017
wait. . .

she fucking licked the fucking spoon clean and put it back into the fucking drawer.

gERMMS.

aND THOSE POOR TACOS WTF
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littleluv04 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017  Student Filmographer
Random stuff yee! Xd
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ScaredSanity Featured By Owner May 12, 2017  Student Artist
She wanted to kill Bertha because She called Her ugly? God learn to control anger, you should not kill someone because they called you ugly.
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Wieczornica Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
PUZNO
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MadMaddiey Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wait so nobody cared that Grubs died? *Betha struts off to class while Grubs is dead*
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brainfreezeB00g Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
11/10
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Skeleton-Ghost Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017
meh
1/10
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KitKat2345 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2017  Student General Artist
Uh.. I need to say some things. 
First of all, the main character seems... not exactly the best. First, change the name. Try to make the figure of the character more realistic. And maybe tone down on the special mind and analysis thing. 
Second, the plot seems very rushed. Slow down a little bit. Give us some information about her life at home. Not too much, but enough to make the rushed plot feeling disappear.
Lastly, give the character a better reason for some stuff they do. If the bullying has been going on for a long time, enough for them to cut themselves, then state that. And please leave the tacos out of it.
I know that they have a relationship with Jeff, but please don't do that. That is overused apparently. Also, dial down on the odds, like Grubs just getting the knife stuck in his head somehow for drama. 

Now I'm gonna run away because someone will say it isn't constructive criticism and I'm hating ok bye now.
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CrazyHermine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a joke story.
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KitKat2345 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Student General Artist
Oh.
Well...
that was a waste of five minutes... :\
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CrazyHermine Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, This story was so bad that it was a great story.

0/10 and 11/10 at the same time, whould read half the story again.
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KitKat2345 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Student General Artist
True, true.
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NightwolfRandomness Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Not scary at all to be twas slightly pathedic sure the story had climax but it wasn't adding up and if you are going to do a time skip at least state it, also if ya don't mind please try to improve on the creativity, thank you.
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mimioubara Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
9/11 would read again
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Memeytv Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
same
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LivmiAlon Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2017  Hobbyist
wow, such good climax. a normal girl somehow became insane in a snap. Because a bully. If i were poopsy, i wouldnt kill bertha, i would smack the bitchyness out of her. Or back to her mothers womb where she can learn her lesson, but you know what ever you think is best. This story and its character can be improved tremdously.  Wheres the reason she went insane though? she just had "The feeling" sounds familiar. any how, im not trying to hate. Im just saying if your going to make a story make sure to provide reason and details. OH.. and second thing, im not saying its impossible for an 11 year old to have big breasts, i had a friend who was 10 years old with big breasts but you have to think about fitting throught the crack of a window or a cat door. How are those bosoms going to fit. to be honest with you, there is definently ways you can make it scarier. look up phobias and boom. I mean, how many people say they're afraid of spiders or snakes. OR GHOSTS. I USED TO HAVE TO CHECK THE BATHROOM IF THERE WAS ANYTHING IN THE CLOSET FOR CRYING OUT LOUD. also... you  can look at horror movies to see. I think poopsy would be a good character if, She was atleast a teen, her breast size is deduced from a Double D to a C-cup or lower and her attire was better for combat. If you want people to stop giving you criticism, watch oc reviews and youll understand whats right or wrong.
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CrazyHermine Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It is a joke story
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kittybabyshoes400 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
This wasn't scary, I'm sorry.
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LivmiAlon Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Hobbyist
You should be improving this character, not making more storries about it. I mean, i will in me arse (refuse) stop changing and upgrading my character, im doing it now, i could sketch a picture of an idea if you want me to. Comment on my page if so, but that is true. Try and make this character more grotesk. Be a little more creative with the killing methods
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LivmiAlon Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2017  Hobbyist
Yes, yes so spine tingling. To0o 5po0ky 4 m3 *o*...

O)-(0
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