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Age Appropriate

:bulletred: Part 1: Age Appropriate: You are here!
:bulletgreen: Part 2: Age (In)appropriate: Link
:bulletblue: Part 3: Age (In)appropriate: Love Gone Wrong Link
:bulletyellow: Part 4: Age (In)appropriate: Spike Vs. Caramel Link
:bulletorange: Part 5: Age (In)appropriate: The Love Trap Link
:bulletpurple: Part 6: Age (In)appropriate (Part 6): A Faustian Bargain 
:bulletblack: Links to further parts in descriptions of next pages

Spike, think about it this way: Sweetie Belle will be a grown up mare someday. Maybe she can even curl her mane like Rarity?
Also, Wingboners are passe, so welcome heart-shaped pupils

Everything drawn by me in ArtRage. Lettering done in Inkscape. MLP and its characters belong to Hasbro
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Outlaw-Marston's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Out of all the "My Little Pony" comics a person can find, it is rather difficult to find one which has an original sense of humor and stellar art style in it too. This is one of those comics that you had in you head for a long time but never was able to format it into a funny comic strip. The vision in my opinion is 4.5 out of 5. It has its few flaws in the artwork here and there, but for a tablet drawn comic instead of typical vector art, I am quite impressed. The originality has to be a 5 since honestly, I didn't see this before. The technique in terms of presentation is brilliant. From Spike guessing a reason to him hoping Sweetie isn't there. Overall, the impact of the picture amazing, humorous, and most certainly cute. I give it a five!
ZombieFX's avatar
Not to be a stick in the mud but... a critic has to be critical, not?

Lets put aside that its drawn like 'most comics'... - 'fitting the need' so to speak.
The joke isn't good or new... and impact? what impact? 

Just an example for a 'impact'
Final by doubleWbrothers
The ending raises LEGIT questions. 
Twilight IS immortal... and for such a dumb (in a funny way dumb!) yet for such a dumb comic the ending is very emotional and clever ! You could write an entire fanfiction about that ( a drama in fact ! ) 

Here however? Hm. No. He brought flowers. Friendzoned like in the show *shrug*

IF you like something, that's a good thing, but critics should have a more neutral base. 5 of 5 for everything... i can't see how is that more then a 'pinned comment'

There isn't much i can relate to or say "ok, you got an interesting angle to look at this" which then again (as i think critic should) changes my own view on things. Doesn't mean i have to agree but, can open my point of view in the future.

Pony did a lot of incredible comics
(like  Lesson Learned by Pony-Berserker

However... this one might not be his best. All i'm saying :)
Might consider my critic of your critic for the future. There is always room for improvement. 
Jakeifan20071015's avatar
Amazing! Keep the work up!
Pony-Berserker's avatar
Thanks for the critique :)
Outlaw-Marston's avatar
It was my pleasure.
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Godzilla278's avatar
Hahahaha got 🍨
Xan07's avatar
Would it be alright to dub this comic with my fellow VAs?
ArcRoyale's avatar
You're not wrong... XD
Nautilus18's avatar
Who does Sweetie Belle think she is? Being at her own house.
lizardboy123's avatar

this isnt her house she lives with her parents

AwesomuPowah's avatar
Bronies don't know anything about the term "Age Appropriate".
DrWhoFan611's avatar
This would have been perfectly fine as a one shot. But it isn't. And there's Button Mash. Let us begin...
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taemart's avatar
didn't understand a thing, maybe because i am not a watcher of the show 
That's an Ed, Edd n Eddy quote at the end, isn't it?
ZombieFX's avatar
Sweetie will look like Rarity one day Oo Besides... spike is like 3 or so
Pony-Berserker's avatar
3?? Twilight got him when she was like 4-6 y.o. Now Twilight is a young adult pony. Spike is clearly a teenager right now...
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