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Chapter 4 finally begins!  Okay so I've been a little side tracked this month, but I'm going to try and be a bit better about getting updates out.  I can't commit to a set schedule, but I'll be focusing on MJY for the next few updates.  When I need a break from writing MJY I'll return and finish A Hefty Heist.  That's all for now.  Let me know what you think of the story, feedback is greatly appreciated.
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Getting a bit more into Kate’s mind is interesting. She really isn’t a happy person and it somehow persists into Fat Wife. Too bad we never got to see Jay’s thoughts. Insight into her home makes me wonder where her stepmom is at in Fat Wife. She plumped up?


It’s so weird the way Mia and Kate think they’re friends. Trying to save their sorority might help with that. Wonder what happened to it?


Probably the worst bet so far. Using people like that is not cool. I think I saw Mia letting Kate off the hook, but getting fat over this would be lame. Kate rebounding should happen more naturally.


Mia used the wrong word in her text, she should‘ve said she got “fatter.”