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found this on dA and decided to swing at it! lets see if glitch is a mary sue!
Mary Sue/Gary Stu test:

Appearance

[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[/] Their eyes are an unusual colour (does heterochromia count?)
[x] This happens to be red (yeah, one eye is red)
[] Their eyes change colour
[] (if a female) they have large boobs
[] (if a male) they are very muscular
[] They are very attractive to the opposite gender
[] They are very attractive to the same gender
[] They have lots of friends/no friends
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[] They have a guardian spirit 
[] Some part of their body glows(that isn't supposed to glow in their species/race)
[] They are emo/cutesy
[] They have wings 
[] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
Subtotal: 2

Relations

[] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
[] They have an evil nemesis
[x] Who is their sibling (Virus the fox)
[] They are from a very poor/lowly family
[] They are from a very rich/royal family
[] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[] They have lost one/both of their parents
[] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death/s
[] Who were killed by the OC's arch nemesis
[] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[] So they ran away from home, and somehow fell in with a famous hero, or bumped into an infamous villain who promptly became their arch nemesis
[x] Their parents were fine, but they ran away from home anyway, seeking adventure
[] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[] They never knew their parents
[] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[x] They are currently in a relationship
Subtotal: 3

Race/Species

[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] But they struggle to be good anyway
[x] They are a mythical creature (KITSUNE)
[] They are an alien
[] They are part mythical creature
[] They are part alien
[] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[] They are a mythical creature/alien who was raised by human parents
[] And they grew up thinking they were human
[] They are the last of their kind
Double your points if they are descended from two or more kinds of mythical creatures/aliens
Subtotal: 1

Powers

[] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[x] They have a special ability/power (Glitching, it runs in her family, excluding cp who wasnt born with the gene allowing her to inherit glitching abilities as well)
[] But they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift 
[] They are immortal(cannot be killed by conventional means)
[] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
[] They have a 'special type' of soul
[] Their soul is not the same as them
[] They can talk to spirits/ghosts (Anyone can talk TO spirits; it's getting them to talk back that is the hard part)
[] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
Subtotal: 1

Mentality

[] They have a mental disorder
[] They have an emotional disorder
[] They struggle to stay sane
[] They talk about their struggle to stay sane a lot
[] They are a psycho
[] They have multiple personalities(x2 if this is shown to be funny)
[] They are very intelligent
[] They are not smart, but in a funny way, and somehow always manage to find the hidden switch/secret door
[] They have hallucinations
[] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[] They are very patient
Subtotal: 0

Miscellaneous

[] They are physically strong
[] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit. For example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
[] They have a rare/unusual name
[] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[] They are connected with a certain element
[x] They are connected with a certain animal (foxes/kitsunes)
[] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[] They are hiding from someone/something
[] They have a rare blood type 
[] They cry blood
[] They are from a different country to where they live
[] They are from a long line of ninjas/magical princesses/paladins/ad nauseum
[] They come from two such lines
[] Which have been at war for all of history
[] But are now at peace because of the OCs parents who loved each other in defiance of their families' hatred, showing them there was a better way (my god, I can't count how many time I've seen this)
[] They have amnesia
[] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[] The have a curse upon them
[] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[] They are 'the chosen one'
Subtotal: 1

Total: 8


Point Reductions

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[] They smoke
[] They are an alcoholic
[] They are overweight
[] They are addicted to drugs
[x] They have a short temper
[] They enjoy bullying others
[/] They do not care much about others (doesnt care about people other than friends or family)
[] They are emotionless
[] They are stupid, in an unfunny way
[] They are unattractive
Total Reduction: 0


Final Total: 6.5

<5 -Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. No reason a character scoring this low can't be a a fascinating and exciting character, but generally if they are scoring this low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit.

6-15 -Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.

16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
You probably need to tone your character down; characters that score this high tend to annoy people.

26> -Mary-Sue 

This is not a definitive test: with all the variety of people there are, a character could very well score a 26  on this and not a Mary-Sue; but these are all things that Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus tend to have in common, so if your character scores high on this test, it is likely(not definite, but likely) that said character is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
Any icon- 5 Points 
transparent ref sheet- 10 Points
ref sheet with background- 11 Points one point extra
plain ol' pic (no shading or background) 9Points 
w/ background 10Points 
full package- 20 Points 

if you want soft or cell shading it will cost 2 Points extra



CHEAPEST COMMISSION IS A ROBLOX DECAL WITH SHADING IS 2 Points 
Name: boa
badlander: no, but visits
crush: FiFi
personality: Boa loves toplay pranks involving ballons filled with paint. she cares about the ones she loves but tries never to show it.
animal: pygme jerboa
appearance: orig00.deviantart.net/7b4d/f/2…
Do YOU like Alternate universes?!
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well, i've- not really i've but my friend PinkieKilledRD has an au called seperated

we are looking for members and hope you can join! (an maybe rp)

FNAF-AU-Separated 


-poke 2018 |-/
Any icon- 5 Points 
transparent ref sheet- 10 Points
ref sheet with backround- 11 Points one point extra
full package- 20 Points 

if you want soft or cell shading it will cost 2 Points extra


hopefully you guys understand I'm trying out commishies
cya

CHEAPEST COMMISSION IS A ROBLOX DECAL WITH SHADING IS 2 Points 


Tagged by: Ho0dle 

basically    The rules are you must spell out your username and write a song beginning with each letter. Then tag as many people as there are letters.

you will see a theme with the songs I choose

C- car radio

A- a car, a torch, a death

T- Thunder

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BlackQuartz-Shards 
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AUTHORS NOTE: i was looking back and realized "i need to make another installment" so here it is||


Cristian and shadow were shocked. Shadow tried spin- dashing her and she dodged it, escaping. Sonic and the others started planning, and then Knuckles brought up the fact of her chaos emerald. "maybe thats how she has her power" tails sighed, the others seemed to agree. knuckles looked out the window and seen glitch return to normal. "remind me to do that again when needed......" glitch sighs. Knuckles told the others which meant they ran outside, trying to do a group hug (idk...)but she protected herself with a glitchy shield. "NU UH! TO MUCH SOCIAL INTERACTION!" she yelled, going inside. once she got inside she started playing video games. the others watched and sighed. when they were eating glitch had left for her reasons. "im back after only a day, that over bloated beach ball needs to up his security" glitch laughs, getting pulled into some bushes. "oh.... hey" glitch didnt look amused as cristian sighed. "sorry about last night, eggman's orders" he explained. "understandable, how mad was he when i escaped?" glitch asked. "pretty mad, yelling at me and shadow for 'letting you escape'". the two started talking and she heard sonic. "cya" she runs out of the bushes. "there you are, its time to train!" he hollered. the two got to training. "why arent you using your full power...?" sonic asked. "you are my friend, and i dont hurt my friends" she simply answers. "well.... unless they turn into a robot". after training glitch fell asleep, tired. the original gang before glitch came started talking.



to be fucking continued if i remember XD

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This guy, MLGProHeadshot doesn't seem to want this through their thick skull that THEY CANT DRAW    
Glitch had sat at home. her eyes gazing over to the tv screen while she played super smash bros. just then Tails came in and asked her.
"uh, Glitch, what are ya doing...?" tails asked.
"just wait a second!" she kept playing the video game.
Tails walked over to the cord that powered the tv and ripped it out from the plug. "TAILS! YOU LITTLE-" sonic entered the room. "come on guys! eggman wont beat himself!" sonic hollered.

                                                                                                    ~At eggman's base~

upon arriving at eggman's base glitch summoned her scythe. "ya know you don't need your weapon yet, right?" Tails asked. "it doesn't hurt to be prepared!" glitch looked at tails. They rushed into eggman's base, realizing no robots were there to fight them. "something isn't right!" sonic exclaimed. the 3 separated and each went separate ways. Glitch walked down a dark hallway, feeling as if she was being stalked or watched. A robot built be eggman grabbed her and pulled her into a room. Fear surged through her body as she seen eggman. "well well well... if it isn't my experiment Glitch" Eggman laughed. Shadow looked over at eggman with a death stare. Eggman stopped laughing and looked at glitch. "find out any secrets, Glitch?" Shadow asked. Glitch hesitated and answered. "Sonic is afraid of water" she replies. Shadow and eggman nod. "now get outta here, before they find us!" shadow ordered. Glitch nodded and went back to Sonic and Tails. "did ya find Egg head?" sonic asked glitch. "no" she answers simply. "now lets get back before Twigs, knuckles, and amy notice us missing" glitch continues. 

Once they got home Glitch walked over to the water's edge. She remained silent as twigs walked up. "hey! wanna go explore...?" Twigs asked. "sure" Glitch replied. They walked out into the forest and they got talking. "Don't pretend I don't know" twigs told glitch. "W what do ya mean by that...?" Glitch asked. "that you're created by eggman" Twigs teased. "i just don't want the others finding out..." glitch sighed, looking over at Twigs. "Don't worry, your secret is safe with me!" twigs smiled. they soon enough got home and the others were having pizza, and chilidogs.  At the sight of chilidogs glitch gaged. "How can you stand those things!" Glitch complained. knuckles looked over and sighed. "Glitch, shut up!" Knuckles yelled.



                                                                                                       To be continued...!
When glitch awoke she notice she was taped to the bed. "IM GONNA KILL YOU GUYS!" she screamed, waking knuckles up. he walked over to her and prepared to punch her but instead took the tape off. "Dare scream again and I wont spare your-" she kicked Knuckles right in the face. They started fighting, which was almost on a regular basis through the day. Sonic came in, as he was ready to train with Glitch when he seen her beating up knuckles. "TAKE THAT SPIKEY ANT EATER, AND THAT!" she kept punching him but then, knuckles was pushing her by the head. "we allowed her to join the group why?" Knuckles asked. "Because! since we first encountered and fought glitch, she had power! but the power was quite, odd..." Sonic told knuckles. Knuckles moved away from glitch and she fell. on the couch amy and twigs were talking and Cristian was outside. Knuckles left the room when sonic hauled glitch up, she turned and slapped him, thinking it was knuckles. "SONIC! I'm sorry, I thought you were knuckles!" she apologized. Sonic sighs and they both leave the room, going to train. Once they got outside the trained, noticing that Glitch wasn't using her full power. Something grabbed glitch, it was eggman, alongside shadow and Cristian. "I'm taking my experiment back!" Eggman yells, going to his base. Sonic panicked as he seen  Glitch get carried away, literally. Upon arriving at the base Glitch was thrown in a cage. "let me out!" she exclaimed. "no can do" shadow replied. Glitch sighed, knowing nothing could stop Eggman, at least she thought. Her cage was placed in the lab and Cristian studied her. he had wires attached to her head and arms, studying her power. Knuckles and sonic were talking. "she was holding a chaos emerald, that she still has" Knuckles pointed out. they continued chatting till they had gone inside. Shadow and Cristian watched glitch suffer with the wires she was trying to rip off. When testing ended for the night gltch curled up into a ball, her tails covering her face. In the morning the shocked her and finally, she revealed her Dark form (like mewtwo from mewtwo strikes back) she blasted the cage apart and the wires off.




...TO BE CONTINUED
Glitch summoned her scythe and sonic ran between the two. "NU UH, NOT AGAIN!" Sonic yelled. Glitch sighed and her scythe disappears. Being a fairly new member of the group she always remained alone. That night she snuck over to eggman's base. Shadow greeted her and they walked in, Shadow grabbed a light blue hegdehog's arm. "come on! your prisoner till further notice." shadow exclaimed as glitch grabbed the other arm. They walked the hedgehog down a hall to eggman. Two robots grabbed the prisoner's arms as Glitch and shadow stood on each side of eggman. "i'm so sorry, sir!" the hedgehog exclaimed. "Sorry won't cut it, Cristian, Glitch, help Cristian out" eggman demanded, Glitch nodded. Shadow was shocked " I thought they were an intruder!" he panicked. Eggman face palmed and glitch walked over to Cristian. they walked over to the lab where Cristian worked. Glitch seen the computer and glitched into it, she was an 8-bit thing in the top right corner. "i need help making robots and eggman said you had an emerad" Cristian said. She glitches outta the computer in shock. "HOLD UP! you want my emerald...?" she questioned, glitching. "well... I need to make the lead robot out of it..." Cristian sighed. Glitch became her dark form. "who needs a lead robot when I'm around?" her scythe appeared, a blade facing away from each other on each end.

                                                                            ~Back at the club house~

The gang got a movie set up and realized something. "where is glitch...?" Tails asked. Everybody stormed the house, yelling to find glitch. "Maybe she went to eggman's base..." Knuckles pointed out "THERE IS A NOTE ON THE FRIDGE!". Everybody looked over "your right, knuckles" Amy points out. The gang rushed over to Eggmans base and broke in, Glitch heard them and went to hide. Sonic rushed in and seen her in her dark form, alongside Cristian. Sonic panicked and got the gang. Glitch returned to her normal form and a fight broke out, she mainly aimed at tails first. She injured tails badly but the gang + glitch and Cristian got to the club house. As usual she was tapped to her bed so she couldn't get up because she tends to sneak out and Cristian slept on the couch.



                                                                                     ~To be continued~
FUCKING SAVE ME! I CANT DRAW SONIC (that well)



expect me to use sonic bases



so until I CAN draw sonic digitally, I need bases ;-;
so...
its Canada day for me and one other user I watch
Ma-Cherii 

I think I font have enough time so I just made this short journal


bai!

-Poke 2017
Name: Bruise

Gender: Female

Nicknames: Dipshit

age: 16

sexuality: Bicurious

Relation ship: N/A (but feel free to ship her with OC only. I'm not some fucking bendy fangirl)

likes:
-watching epic fails on youtube
-bendy (as a sibling)
-listening to youtube while drawing

dislikes:
-art thieves (lol, this oc is me in BATIM pretty much...)
-Own cringy art
-Hamilton (don't get butthurt like my sis did)

Bio: joey made her to be a lover for bendy, but it backfired, she only likes bendy as a sibling. she does not know if she likes boys or girls so that's her reason for her sexuality.  She isn't like the others, for she prefers to wear clothing that she likes, not a dress, trousers, or bow tie. Bruise doesn't really like boris, yet she doesn't hate him, so, she is neutral around boris and alice


ok, so, rules if you ship her with your oc

1. you may NOT ship her with main characters
2. stay true to her design
3.and finally, no vore, gore, or porn (gore only done by me)
4. woops, cant forget, DO NOT STEAL HER
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-Poke 2017
okay
*ahem*
FUCKING WATCHERS GET YOUR BUTTS OVER HERE!
I might be geting


*drumroll intensifies*

I MIGHT BE GETTING A WACOM intuos TABLET
there is one at my local staples for $105

if I do it will take 2-3 months to get the money but it will be worth it!

poke |-/ 2017
SHE IS FINALLY GONE!
SIMPLY-GONESHITTY IS GONE!
I WILL HOLD A LIVESTREAM TONIGHT TO CELEBRATE!

(comment down below if I should do digital art or minecraft)


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