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The moonless evening
turns its back against the sky
and leaves it empty.

Perhaps the morning
will come back with its hands full,
holding up the sun.
December Form Challenge, 2012 :iconkiwi-damnation::iconprojectdfc:

Sedoka

The Sedoka is a Japanese form. It centers around the
idea of Questions and Answers. The syllabic count is
that of haiku (5,7,5) and there are 6 lines, 3 in each
stanza. The content can be of any theme but one
must question or mention something in the first, and
then either contradict or answer in the second. It's all
about leaving you guessing and making people think. I have also
read that each verse should stand alone as a haiku. Others say
it should be one verse of six lines.


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Given 2012-12-16
Moonless by *Scarlettletters as an exploration of poetic forms, *Scarlettletters provides us with a beatiufiul Japanese Sedoka ( Featured by BeccaJS )
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sevvysgirl Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
I've only just found this - and I LOVE :heart: it!! :+fav:
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AnnieHi Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh! I love this!
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015  Professional Writer
Thanks very much.
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DameOdessa Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well-deserved DD, dear :clap:
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Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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caddman Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Professional General Artist
...very nice work wonderful balance! ...:heart:
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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:iconcaddman:
caddman Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
...your welcome Bro...I wish you the
the best holidays ever...Merry Christmas and may 2013 be the best ever.
...Skot
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UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Writer
congrats on the epicly deserved DD :heart:
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Congrats on your DD, dear!
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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blackstar707 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely imagery and word choice. :clap:
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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StellarFairy Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well done on writing such an interesting sedoka, though I have not written one at all.
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Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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:iconstellarfairy:
StellarFairy Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :)
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:iconzenscout:
ZenScout Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wonderful an congratulations on the very deserved DD
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Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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FluffyLover1986 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
An excerrent dispray! Congraturations on the dairy deviation.
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Traditional Artist
Congrats on the DD!!! You deserve it! :D
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Beautiful! Congrats on the DD!
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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spoems Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Writer
Wonderful interpretation/execution of the form, Brendan. Congrats on the well deserved feature! :clap:
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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halcyonshores Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sincerest congrats to you Brendan. :rose:
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Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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Shasta-Rose Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very beautiful, short, simple, and extremely effective. Although you talk about nature, I come away with many emotions, too.
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Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks - I appreciate it!
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IyraEMM Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
This is lovely. Congrats on the DD :)
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much
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IyraEMM Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
You're welcome.
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Obsidian-Nightfall Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
Congratulations :)
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks, my friend
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Obsidian-Nightfall Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student Writer
My pleasure.
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beeswingblue Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Writer
How did I miss this? Beautiful work -- congratulations on the DD.
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks. It was a complete surprise...I did not expect it.
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:iconbeeswingblue:
beeswingblue Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012   Writer
That's the charm of it. All of a sudden your inbox gets spammed. :D
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Lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on the DD! :heart:
Have a nice day! : )
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much.
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:iconlintu47:
Lintu47 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure :happybounce:
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:iconrlkirkland:
rlkirkland Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Now there, many can be appreciating your gift with words!
Congratulations Brendan. :sun:
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks very much, my friend.
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:iconrlkirkland:
rlkirkland Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Or I shuld say many MORE. :blush:
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Jade-Pandora Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Either way works. :hug:
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xeena-dragonkizz Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
Big congratulations for the well deserved DD award!!
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:iconpoetrymann:
Poetrymann Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks!
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Villenueve Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow!,my Magician of words,your work is superb!,congratulations for this new DD!
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