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don't forget

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just a quick upload!
i really hate it how people in my school always remember the bad things that people did, not the good deeds that they've done. when someone does something wrong, everybody starts talking about that person. but when somebody does something good, hardly anybody notices.

better in full view <3
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/83 second
Aperture
F/6.3
Focal Length
55 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
May 9, 2011, 4:08:36 PM
Lens
EF-S18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 IS
Sensor Size
11mm
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Vision: I see what you did thar--ahah. What I really like about it is that the letters are clear for everyone to read and follow. The message is able to get through to everyone easily, though I don't see much relevance with the image to the actual message--though it doesn't bug me. It's still a great piece of art.

Originality: I bet a lot of people really do feel this way. I completely understand it, because when I spend a whole day cleaning the house while everyone's gone, I just get complaints about the few little things I've missed instead of being told how well of a job I've done on everything else. It's unfortunate that the world is a place where you're really judged on your mistakes rather than your good qualities....

Technique: The technique has been done again and again by a lot of people. A note being pinned up, or taped up, or magnet'd up onto a fridge. But it still doesn't take away from the message, since the message is the main focus.

Impact: So all in all, it's a fairly descent picture, though I wouldn't have it as a poster in my room because it's kind of depressing (and I'd like to think that positive messages are more poster worthy) but it's still something neat.

All in all, it's nice. It's something everyone can relate too, no matter what circumstance (at least that's how I feel).
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

An amazing peice of art. So simple yet so meaningfull... Your handwriting is breath taking (since i cant write good for my life)
The focus is epical and the two heart clips make it just the icing on the cake! I absolutely adore how you can see every texture of every thing! The paper, the clips, even the rope thing It's on! This is just simply amazing.

Once again all I have to say is that... It's so simple yet the impact is like "WOAH -Text to self connection-"
And the quote isnt a meme quote or someting popular It's something completely true and something that should be noticed.

Good job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt=":meow:" title="Meow :3"/>
Keep up the good work! <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/o/t…" alt=":icontobiapprovesplz:" title="TobiApprovesplz"/>
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DullfaceHobbyist Photographer
Worst critique I've ever seen..

The hand writing is breath taking?! LoL

The text on there is in fact not new at all, it's a common saying and there's nothing remotely artistic about this..
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Well then I havent seen it. :p

And this is my first premium membership I only just started doing critiques :iconotlplz:
Thanks for the confidence boost.
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That wasn't a confident boost. This feature is there to provice constructive critisism, not just slap 5 stars one everything you love.
kailathefox's avatar
Well no shit sherlock!
And there was nothing to improve on that peice in my eyes.
l:l
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lol, don't write critiques if you don't know what you're talking about.
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Wow.
Just wow.
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thank you so much! :hug:
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no problem! ^W^
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This is only my second, maybe third critique, so bear with me. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> (Please feel free to tell me how I did. ^.^)

This statement is very true. It's hard to find people who remember the good people have done. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>

I don't see much along the lines of bad an this. The only thing I'd like to point out is that the D's should probably be just a little taller, as they are capitalized.

I love the inclusion of the hearts. It helps make a bigger impact. As does the background a bit. Overall this is a fabulous piece! It really makes me want to try and remember the good people have done, and put the bad on the back burner. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt=":meow:" title="Meow :3"/>

Vision: With vision, my only complaints are that it's a little blurry to the left and the capitalized D's are the same size as the lowercase letters.

Originality: I'm fighting with myself on whether or not to give this a full on five stars, or four and a half. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/> The reason is I'm sure that there are other deviations, stamps, etc. with sayings similar to this. So I think I'll go with 4 and half.

Technique: The background, the colors surrounding the piece, the hearts, even the wire help to make it even more thought provoking. As well as the saying itself. All the little details help. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)"/> I don't really know what there is that might help it be better. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="^^;" title="Sweating a little..."/>

Impact: This really makes you think. It makes you think about what you yourself have remembered, whether you remember the good or the bad more often. Whether people have pointed out only the wrong in things you have done, or if they only point out the good. Or maybe a nice mix of both.
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Naww thank you so much! :huggle:
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You're welcome! x3 :icongwompplz:
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its true.
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How true.
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True story.
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so true!
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That's so true! I feel like that all the time!

 

BTW:Great job!

 

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