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Image details
Image size
3524x2433px 5.76 MB
Shutter Speed
1/54 second
Focal Length
6 mm
ISO Speed
Date Taken
Feb 18, 2012, 4:48:45 AM
Sensor Size
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JozJaeger's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

This is my first time writing a critique that isn't for one of my friends, so please have mercy on me.

When I first look at this piece, my eyes instantly go towards the deep blue and green colours of that beautiful eye you've done so well. The glitter and different shades around it compliment it and make the deep turquoise stand out, although after the initial "So that's where I'm supposed to look", I couldn't stop being distracted by the entire bottom left part of the photo. This area is too bright, maybe the individual hairs that I can very clearly see draw my attention to the wrong place.

I do realize that this is more of a makeup shot than a photo, and by spaghetti monster, you did a very good job on that. like I mentioned before, the colours compliment the eye very well. I think my favorite part is the bright green on the upper lid, because of how gorgeous it looks contrasted to the dark eye. The glitter adds a stunning effect, adding glamour to the picture.

I've always despised the little plastic flower things that you've added there, as I've always found them cheap. In my household my mother glues them anywhere and deems the area pretty, so I may be biased when I say they're a little to chunky, distracting from the eye. But, when it comes to putting them in a good light, I've never seen someone do such a good job with them. Possibly you could have put a few less into the work so that I could gaze longer at the eye than the flowers.

The paper around the eye adds a very nice, "Sharded" or "Broken glass" effect to the piece. It draws attention towards the eye, in a very good manner. I like it. The only negative thing I can say about it is that when it gets to the bottom right part of the photo, it's distracting because it's in a lighter shade and I end up looking opposite of the place I'm supposed to look.

All in all, this is a very nice piece. The colours are stunning and soft at the same time, and the added objects around the eye do a very nice job pointing towards it, although a bit distracting at times. You could have made the bottom right corner less distracting, but it's not overly distracting to the point that it drives me crazy. You did an an absolutely wonderful job with the makeup.
xChiyomiChan's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First of all, I'd like to say that I think all of your eye art is absolutely fantastic. Each piece I see from you brings something new and interesting to my eyes.

This piece in particular is astounding. I love the different color combinations, and how you used pattered paper around your eyes. The blue, orange, and red contrast very nicely, as my view was taken over every detail of this picture.

You have a gift for color and originality. Your imagination on this piece really shows, and I'm also glad you have the means of equally good photography to further show your creativity. Keep up the terrific work, and I look forward to seeing more in the future!
abbyanna101's avatar
this is really well done
auzamon's avatar
This is so beautiful. I would buy a print of this.
kittyttycasper's avatar
absolutely breathtaking <33333
CandyKnickerbocker's avatar
So beautiful, I've just been browsing your gallery and been blown away by the colour and originality. You are so talented.
TheClownNamedRaine's avatar
You're so creative with makeup! I'd PAY for you to do my makeup.
thegingerbreadshack's avatar
This reminds me of the clothing line, Matilda Jane. Very fun and beautiful!
MadamRedd's avatar
I've been going through your photos, and On my pandora, 'Total Eclipse Of The Heart' comes on, so I thought it was nice <3 Wonderful work
KandiViXenKHAOS-92's avatar
farther away it looks like a broken mirror =3
I like it =3
TheFaceOfJuu's avatar
This is amazingly stunning!
i love the colours :)
jainism1492's avatar
I thought this was drawn lol
phantasia8's avatar
Beautiful! What do you use to put it all on your face?!
Starlace's avatar
This is amazing.
RinNanashi's avatar
Wow. I mean... just.. WOOOOW!!!!!
BarebackRider2's avatar
so much colour!! AMZING
EyeOfEnigma's avatar
How in the WORLD do you put all of that stuff on your face???
Somehow you just manage to keep adding more and more flair to each of your works.
DorkyDesigns's avatar
Just.... Wow. That's all I can say, wow. It's just has that captivating quality to it that makes you want to look at it forever. WOW.
Bloom50's avatar
I would be afraid to have that much stuff around my eye.
MelancholyInTheRain's avatar
Does that hurt?

Good Job ^ ^
Amazing xDD
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