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October 4, 2009
Heaven Spot by =Pixelisto is a fun and happy little scenery that nicely detailed.
Featured by armaina
Suggested by Sinister-Starfeesh
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Heaven Spot

the little cute spot is finished :la:
be zen on this heaven spot

i hope you like it :dummy:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is my first Critique, so I'll try my best!

This is a fine example of pixel animation.
Everything shines, and the shading is perfect.
You did a great job with the pathway leading up to the house, the plants, etc.
But the thing that tugs my vision of the whole animation is the fact that it's not very smooth when the pieces of land come up and down. The bigger spots are okay, but the little ones seem to be very rough. Also the one with the three rocks on it looks like it's trying to lift off but failing. (I'm not sure if that came out right) What I would do is maybe make a few more frames up and down, just to make it a little more smooth.
A few more frames in the pink smoke coming out of the house would make it perfect.
So, just a few more frames would make it perfect.

My favorite part of the whole animation is the waterfall. I dunno why. But it is. <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":laughing:" title="Laughing" />
Very original idea, I really like it.
Overall, this would be an immediate +fav in my book. <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)" />
Pixelisto's avatar
hey tanks you very much!!! :dummy:
yeah i saw after about the island with 3 rock,is to jerk ^^*
thanks again
you are my second critique :glomp:
Noah-is-1337-at-art's avatar
No problem. I've always wanted to do a Critique. XD
Pixelisto's avatar
^^ and now is done :dummy:
BlissfullySarcastic's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Critique tiems. <img src="…" width="21" height="15" alt=":dummy:" title="I am a dummy!" />

Great pixel work. I especially like the pathway around the hill on the biggest, er...section, I suppose is the word? The little pebbles/rocks on it along with the dirt around it is great. I also love the way you shaded the house and made the base not entirely straight. Also a great job on the rainbow, love how you shaded it.
The waterfall and smoke animation are amazing. I like them a lot, especially the way the smoke poofs up and the way the water flows down the fall.
Only thing I didn't like are some of the smaller...sections...don't move right. The one with the three rocks jerks a lot, then pauses. The biggest of the three little ones has almost the same problem and so does the second smallest one. I'd play with them and see how it works out. <img src="…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" title="Nod" />
But overall, I loved it. Really. It made me smile big. <img src="…" width="18" height="15" alt=":eager:" title=":eager: by darkmoon3636" />
Emotikonz's avatar
Why don't you critique me when I ask? Puh-leeeeease? You have such good advice!
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Emotikonz's avatar
UNDERNEATH: "Critique Requested".

BlissfullySarcastic's avatar
That's not asking for a critique. That's offering a critique as an option. xD
Emotikonz's avatar
From now on, REQUESTED means just that. M'kay? know you're my pally, of course, I just don't want to miss out on your advice...
BlissfullySarcastic's avatar
Okay. xD I will try to critique you more. :la:
You just post things at very inconvenient times for me most of the time. xD
Pixelisto's avatar
yeah for the island with 3 rock i jsut see it, the animation it to jerk .
thanks you verry much:dummy:
you are my first critique :hug:
BlissfullySarcastic's avatar
:nod: Just needs a little tweaking is all.
Otherwise, it's really great. I like it very much.

You're welcome. :aww:

I try to critique when I see someone spends a lot of time or puts a lot of effort into something.
I don't critique as much as I'd like, but. :paranoid:
I just know I liked getting a critique that one time, so I try to spread the joy. :giggle:
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:hug:thanks again, and you have a good mentality :dummy:
BlissfullySarcastic's avatar
Welcome. :glomp:
Thank you again. xD
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I didn't like it...............I love it ^w^
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Oh, this is too cute! :)
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