So, no one's reviewed about the choice of Chapter 13 being rewritten or not so I think I'll keep it the way that it is.
When I called for Jax to transform, my suit came back, my tail swishing, fangs glistening like snow, and my gold eyes twinkling like liquid amber and my blue eye icy like a winters embrace. It was nice to be so free. Climbing out of the window, I ran to where I had heard the screams and I growled a bit, seeing the culprit. It was a girl who seemed to be young, with blue eyes as dead and cold as ice and skin looking as fair as snow. Her hair was curly and light brown, pulled back but some strands were loose around her shoulders. She was short, unusually thin, and seemed to have sharp, pointed nails. When she smiled, she had pointed teeth like needles. Her eyes looked like snake eyes, just blue and I jumped up on the opposite ledge of her, saying.
"You know, I usually don't mind when someone decides to try and fuck up the city. But you? You're downright disturbing."