Elizabeth Afton - Character Concept

The problem with Elizabeth, is that she ACTUALLY could’ve become a part of the Silver Eyes team, straying from her father’s machinations, with or without her mother.

But instead, the “Fourth Closet” (her first and only appearance) is full of pointless nonsense that wasn’t foreshadowed at all.

1: William having a daughter was never explained beforehand.

2: Charlotte’s “robotic reveal” was never mentioned previously, and it’s incredibly frustrating how John was built up, as he never actually showed any sort of character development, and as such, fell for Elizabeth instead of Charlotte.

3: Another thing, Jessica should have served as Charlie’s REAL love interest, as unlike John, she could see Fake Charlie for who she actually was.

4: You had already created a drawing depicting Sammy’s kidnapping and offscreen death, but you could have done something between Elizabeth and Charlie before William struck, like having them bond or something.

Hope you enjoy.