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OC ~ Tachi kun by pikinipiki OC ~ Tachi kun by pikinipiki
Omg im sorry i had to do this ;u;
I had been so stressed and this was so good for me. <3

This is my bab Tachi-kun.
I made this sketch some weeks ago and here is the digital version
New old Babes by CherryBunn
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Hi :3 , this is my first critique ever so excuse me if I say something incorrect about your drawing. One of the things that pop out the most in this piece is his hair, Im in love with it. I suggest trying to match the color of his eyebrows to his hair, as his hair appears to be a little more peachy. Also, the eyes are wonderful but be careful with the position of the iris. The roses could use more detail. I think the lips are beautiful because of how tiny they are along with his beauty marks but, I think if you position the mouth a little bit closer to the nose it could look better. After all, his cat ears are really cute and go along really well with the hair :3 Good job.
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January 13, 2017
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