What I love about your series with this model is it is more than just than a group of pictures, it is a celebration of life and the vitality of life. She brings her vivaciousness to the shot and you capture it beautifully so that we can all delight in the joy that is here. These are pictures that are more than just modeling shots or portraits, they are the brilliance that beauty can convey.
Well as everyone else has already said... YOUR MODEL IS GORGEOUS!!! Anyways since you want a some critique all i can say is that your photography is very good. Your model is great as well, as you have probably already told her. The only issue, which is kinda dumb is that the bra and stokings don't match. This is odd to say but it seems a little wierd to me :/. It's a very lame problem and to be honest it doesn't subtract from the work at all. Again, your model (insert name here) dispays a natural beauty which makes it an amazing picture and your photography is right there with her. Good Job!
All the photos of her are beautiful but this one and "A smiple guide to falling in love" are my favs. Thank You ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Einstein was wrong, God does play dice.
Absolutely gorgeous. Love the outfit and pose. Lighting leaves a bit to desire. Personal choice, of course, but I think I would have tweaked the saturation up a tad, just to bring out more colors. Everything looks too grey, bland, and blending. Or put her in something black bra oriented, or beige, and then really put a bright color of lipstick on her, to make something pop. Like the pose, and place/backdrop. Model is 10++, just lacking something. Shadowplay? Light? Every time I look at it, the bra is the only thing, after the face, that attracts. Not because of boobs, but color.
Overall pic, I'd give it a solid 7.5 out of 10. But take my opinions with a grain of salt. I'm a fan of light and dark mixing almost completely, look at my work, and you'll see what I mean. Sometimes only one subject, and just complete darkness. So look at my stuff quick, then come back and see what I see.
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Einstein was wrong, God does play dice.
Overall pic, I'd give it a solid 7.5 out of 10. But take my opinions with a grain of salt. I'm a fan of light and dark mixing almost completely, look at my work, and you'll see what I mean. Sometimes only one subject, and just complete darkness. So look at my stuff quick, then come back and see what I see.
Thomas