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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

A hundred words of criticism is hard when so much was done right. The foot, the face, the wing movements, the flow all great.

There's not enough and it goes by too quick and could be bigger. A download option where you get all the frames would let the viewer step through at their own speed.

A TF is a story, and this could be enhanced with some more context before and after and during. Who is he? Is he enjoying it or is he apprehensive? Where's he going?

A minimal background also helps "ground" the character as more real.

But overall, a really great TF!
Dragon Tomek TF
picklejuice13 commented on BlackPlateau's profile

LTNS

Can I republish anything of the art I did for you, or should I mark it as private and plan not to do anything with it?

I'm fine either way. I probably won't be making these animations for a long time. I just need to update my files and mark them as private or not.

The dream began when he was young and it never changed, while he grew old.

The rat is a symbol of death, and I had it hit a little extra hard having the rat take a bite out of his dead body.

I wrote a lengthy description.

Never