Shop Forum More Submit  Join Login
i am without shoes by Piarvi-Recherreen i am without shoes by Piarvi-Recherreen
i don't think i need to stare, please help me, i am without shoes, i wouldn't be selfish, i cursed myself and they laughed
PLEASE
i am without shoes
Add a Comment:
 
:iconstrayedmusician:
Critique by StrayedMusician May 3, 2009, 10:00:09 AM
I very much adore the mute colors in this photograph. It has such a light-heart effect on the eyes of the viewer, drawing him or her to the dream-like aspect of it all. Given the angle, it makes the feeling of the photo more personal. The soft and sharp contrasts between the blurs adds also that more "dream-like" and personal touch. The bleached-out head of the figure in the back also adds a haunting vibe but surrounded with a comfortable glow. There seems to be several stories laced into this once photo. This is simply a very gorgeous capture. Well done. :aww:
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
8 out of 9 deviants thought this was fair.

:iconsd-stock:
I love the many layers here. I know that sounds weird, so I'll explain. At the very front, there are blurred plants. Then plants in focus. Then blurry ones again. Then the figure. Then the sky. It makes the whole image very interesting, as the focus in the camera and the focus of the shot seem to be in two different spots.

Also, the colors are very nice. I really like that the figure's head is obscured. It adds a lot of mystery. I think the only thing I'd like different is for a larger square crop, as right now some plants on the right side are cut off at the top.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
9 out of 9 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:icondisrhythmic:
disrhythmic Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
I've used the title of your beautiful piece in a found poem. :heart:

[link]
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
very original way to express your creativity :aww:
Reply
:iconbrutalanarchy:
BrutalAnarchy Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Incredible shot. Exactly the sort of photography i'm delving into. Wonderful.
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
awww thanks :aww:
Reply
:iconvampiremidnight:
Vampiremidnight Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2010
hello ^^. your photo have been featured here :)
I hope you like the collection :)
:heart:
Reply
:iconwishihadglasses:
wishihadglasses Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2010
beautiful.
really really love this.
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
oh ! thank you so much :aww:
Reply
:iconwishihadglasses:
wishihadglasses Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2010
Ahaha, no probs. Keep up the beautiful photographs!
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2010
^___^
Reply
:icon5letters:
5letters Featured By Owner May 26, 2010
:heart: :love:..how is that possible...twice a night ;D
Reply
:icondesigntu:
designtu Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
featured -> [link] :aww:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
oh ! thank you :aww:
Reply
:iconxfact:
xfact Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured.......
.......................
.........[link]

:flowerpot:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2009
:shamrock:
Reply
:iconmy-plastic-existence:
My-Plastic-Existence Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
Featured [link]
:aww:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2009
:rose:
Reply
:iconheresthebasssolo:
heresthebasssolo Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2009  Professional Interface Designer
beautiful work, i really like it :ahoy:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2009
thankies :D
Reply
:iconoro-elui:
oro-elui Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
unique and captivating.
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
thankies :D
Reply
:iconpaulmachikhin:
PaulMachikhin Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Very nice! I like tones here... Hilights are warm, shadows are cold... This contrast makes the picture very interesting, and also blurred objects in front - creates an impression like the eyes of spectator are tearful, and he falls with author into a dramatic story.
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009
wow thanks for your nice words
Reply
:iconpaulmachikhin:
PaulMachikhin Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
u're welcome ^^
Reply
:iconmeerwasser:
Meerwasser Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
tones and colours and blur :heart:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2009
aww thanks :aww:
Reply
:icondarkandtwistyy:
darkandtwistyy Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
i've featured your beautiful photo in my tiny journal. :huggle:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
aww thank you, that's so nice of you :aww:
Reply
:icondarkandtwistyy:
darkandtwistyy Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009
my pleasure :aww:
Reply
:iconkittifer:
kittifer Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
this is very interesting to look at
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2009
thanks ^__^
Reply
:icona-parrot:
A-Parrot Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Professional Photographer
Bien belle image.
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009
merciii
Reply
:iconthetragicoffense:
TheTragicOffense Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
That looks really cool. Props.
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2009
thanks a lot :)
Reply
:iconi-meghan-i:
I-meghan-I Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009
:heart: :heart:
just wonderful
pulls at the heart strings
focus is lovely
sharp and then soft.

:heart: faved
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009
aww thank you so, so much :aww:
Reply
:iconi-meghan-i:
I-meghan-I Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009
my absolute pleasure :)
Reply
:iconhaila-ourfarewell:
Haila-OurFarewell Featured By Owner May 19, 2009
:heart: featured here -> [link]
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner May 19, 2009
thank you so much :blowkiss:
Reply
:iconsparkbearer:
sparkbearer Featured By Owner May 15, 2009  Professional Photographer
Featured on my page :heart:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner May 15, 2009
aww thanks a lot :aww:
Reply
:iconjasmina-s:
Jasmina-S Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
featured here [link]
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner May 8, 2009
aww jasmina, you must be an angel :heart:
Reply
:iconjasmina-s:
Jasmina-S Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
i am not :giggle:
you are excellent artist my dear :love:
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
you are an excellent artist and an adorable person jasmina :blowkiss:
Reply
:iconzanasoul:
ZanaSoul Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
Featured here sunshine: [link]
Reply
:iconpiarvi-recherreen:
Piarvi-Recherreen Featured By Owner May 7, 2009
aww thanks dear zana :rose:

i comeback after work seeing all this

have a sweet day :blowkiss:
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×





Details

Submitted on
May 3, 2009
Image Size
149 KB
Resolution
600×600
Link
Thumb

Stats

Views
7,951
Favourites
627 (who?)
Comments
125
Downloads
191