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Ravenstar {Tooth-and-Claw-RP} by pianofinqers Ravenstar {Tooth-and-Claw-RP} by pianofinqers
I need to finish some parts. Please be patient with me.

Here he is, the leader of Fireclan, for Tooth-And-Claw-rp I SWEAR I'M DOING COMMISSIONS I PROMISE --holds hands up in surrender--

I hope you don't mind, I kinda altered the background so it wouldn't totally clash with Ravenstar's color palette ^^;

Names : Ravenkit / Ravenpaw / Ravenshadow / Ravenstar
Gender : Male
Clan : Fireclan
Rank : Leader
Parents : Fawnstep (mother, deceased) and Alderstrike (father, deceased)
Sibling(s) : Sunnykit (brother, deceased)
Mentor : Ashfeather (mentor, deceased)
Apprentice(s) : tba
Friend(s) : tba
Mate : none (yet ;^) )
Former Mate(s) : n/a
Kit(s) : n/a
Sexuality : Heterosexual

Likes : Thrushes, funny cats, taking walks, climbing trees
Dislikes : Deep water, bossy cats, voles

Personality : 
:bulletgreen: - Loyal; Ravenstar really takes one for the team, putting his life on the line if it means saving his clan-mates.
:bulletgreen: - Charming; Ravenstar is very polite and charismatic, easily winning over the ladies, although he has yet to find one he has an interest in. ;^)
:bulletyellow: - Observant; Ravenstar notices tiny details that are easy to miss. He is always alert and aware of his surroundings, causing him to be overly cautious.
:bulletyellow: - Stubborn; Ravenstar tends to get his way, giving pointless arguments. If he has his mind set on something, he will do anything to get what he wants. He, however, will not go as far as to hurt someone.
:bulletred: - Hostile; to those outside of his clan, Ravenstar can be very hostile if it means protecting his clan-mates.
:bulletred: - Sensitive; Ravenstar has had a rough past, and he hates when people tug on those strings. He is quick to judge.

Backstory : 

Kithood: Born to Fawnstep and Alderstrike alongside his brother, Sunnykit, Ravenkit was a very lively kit. He was very close to Sunnykit, and would often mess around with his shy brother, helping him to become more and more confident in himself. When a hawk carried Sunnykit off, Ravenkit fell into a fit of grief, hiding in the shadows and revealing himself to no one. Later, as he was apprenticed to Ashfeather, he vowed he would be the best warrior Fireclan had ever seen, and that he would make Ashfeather proud.

Apprenticeship: Later as an apprentice, Alderstrike blamed Fawnstep of Sunnykit's death claiming that she should have saved him. In a fit of rage, Alderstrike blew a strike to Fawnstep's neck, killing her. After realizing what he had done, Alderstrike backed off a cliff in horror, ending his life. Ravenpaw, having watched the whole scene unfold, fell into a new fit of depression. He took his rage out in battle practice, never hurting anyone, but burning his energy in being the best he could. He became a warrior early, acing all the assessments. He earned the name Ravenshadow, and bore his name proudly in honor of his dead family.

Warrior: TBA

Leader: TBA


Strengths : TBA

Weaknesses : TBA

Bullet Guide:
Bullet Bullet; White = Doesn't Know Well
Bullet; White Bullet; White  = Curious About
Bullet; White Bullet; White Bullet; White  = Sort of a Friend
Bullet; Green = Likes
Bullet; Green Bullet; Green = Friend
Bullet; Green   = Good Friend
     = Best Friend
  


Fawnstep | mother | female | Bullet; Purple Bullet; Purple Bullet; Purple Bullet; Purple | Bullet; Blue Bullet; Blue | Bullet; Orange Bullet; Orange Bullet; Orange | Bullet; White | Bullet; Green Bullet; Green Bullet; Green | Death
"I miss you so much... I'm sorry you had to die that way..."

Alderstrike | father | male | Bullet; Black | Bullet; Red Bullet; Red | Bullet; Blue Bullet; Blue | Bullet; White | Death
"I... You killed... Fawnstep? B-but I still miss you? I-I..."

Ashfeather | male | Bullet; Orange Bullet; Orange Bullet; Orange Bullet; Orange | Bullet; Green Bullet; Green Bullet; Green | Bullet; Blue Bullet; Blue | Star! Star! 
"I miss you... I hope I made you proud..."

Coldpaw | female | Bullet; Black Bullet; Black | Bullet; White | Bullet; White Bullet; White | Bullet; Orange | Star! 
"Ah, my feisty little apprentice. She's... something. She's very stubborn for sure, and hostile. But I'm sure somewhere in there is a caring kitty."
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016
Would you like to RP with your new apprentice?
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure! Would comments work? If you could start that would be great
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016
Awesome!


Coldpaw sat outside the apprentices den. She glared at Tawnykit who was walking by. The kit quickly sped up and raced into the nursery. Coldpaw grumbled. She knew that everycat was afraid of her. Not very easy to make friends that way. But she didn't want friends. She didn't need anycat. She remembered her apprenticing ceremony the day before.
I wonder if Ravenstar will want to go train...? She wondered. 
She rolled her eyes. 
Of course not, he's probably just as afraid of me as the others are. No cat likes a cold soul. She resolved herself by licking her paw and drawing it over her white ear. She remembered Bloomingkit doing that to her. Her eyes narrowed at the thought of her sister. She rolled her eyes and shook the memory out of her head. She twitched her blue ear and wrapped her tail around her paws. Keeping any cats away with cold glares, hence her name.
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ravenstar perched on a rock at the edge of the camp, his dark eyes watching the bustle of camp activity. The fresh-kill pile was well stocked for early new-leaf, so he was sure he had nothing to worry about. His deputy was in the center of the camp, calling out warriors to go on patrols. And near the center of the camp, outside the apprentices' den, was... Coldpaw, with her piercing gaze and sharp tongue. He wasn't sure what to make of his new apprentice; she was a strong and feisty little she-cat, and she would make a good fighter. But her attitude, he wasn't sure of. He hadn't known her for very long, but he figured it was about time he began training her.

He hopped off his ledge, making his way to Coldpaw. His lean legs easily showed his muscle, his long tail and well-kept pelt glinting in the sunlight. "Hello, Coldpaw." He greeted, her angry stares not bothering him. "Nice day outside. Care to do some hunting practice? It's nice weather, there's surely some prey to catch."
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016
Coldpaw raised her eyebrows at him. 
"Yes your majesty." She mocked. 
She snorted and padded toward camp entrance. 
"Where are we going?" She asked, daringly.
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ravenstar narrowed his eyes. Her attitude could be a problem. Refraining from scolding her like a little kit, he rolled his eyes and turned the other direction, leading the way. "Into the territory," he fired back, not wanting to show himself as a soft kitty who was easily manipulated.
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016
Coldpaw smiled a little. She liked cats who stood up for themselves. 
What are you saying you idiot? You don't like anycat! She scolded herself. 
She followed her mentor through the shrubs and trees. 
"Are you sure we are going the right way?" She asked, not recognizing anything.
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When she said nothing, Ravenstar smirked to himself. Ha. When she finally broke the silence, he looked over his shoulder with a disbelieving look. "What, do you think I accidentally became leader? Yes sweetheart, I'm very sure." He turned his head around, continuing in the same direction.
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2016
I'm sorry the apprentice is taking so long.
Ive had other things on my mind. 
Just two questions.
Who was the leader before Ravenstar? 
And
What was Ravenstar's warrior name?
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No, that's fine!
Lionstar
and
Ravenshadow!
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2016
Thank you so much!
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016
OMG this bab is so cute! 
I could make him an apprentice or something?
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh thank you! And yes, feel free to!
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016
Yaaaay!
Maybe they will get closer in the future?
...XD
So cryptic
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sure! We'd have to wait until you finish haha
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016
I'll be as fast as possible
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iiiChairs98 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sunnykit... T.T DUDE NOW I'M SAD, POOR RAVENSTAR!
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SORRY
I know :'c
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Blizzardstar120 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016
Welcome to the clan, Ravenstar!
You have earned 20 points.
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks <3
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ScarlettRuby551 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016
YAAAY!!!!
NOW DA ICON WILL START!!!!
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Blizzardstar120 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016
Yesssss
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whoowhoo!!
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Rivers-Of-Red Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
ITS.
BOOTIFULLLLL
:^))))
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pianofinqers Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THANK
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Rivers-Of-Red Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
YW
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