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The secret life of the Angel - NEW!
Beauty uncensored 1
Beauty uncensored 3
Sensual nudity
My favorite models
Railway novel​
Naya+Italy
Lo​
Italian holidays Hotel romance​
Hong Kong. With love
Weekend in Apokryfo​

Ok, here you go. Compared to the other image I commented on from this set, this one has much better lighting on the face and eyes, although it looks like it might be post-production. The direct gaze is wonderful and the posture is excellent, although it is a little more modest and uncertain, not quite as powerful as the other image. Unfortunately, it looks like the focus is on the sleeve of the gown wrapped around her arm and not her face...either that or the face has been softened (or perhaps she moved). This is really bright light, so the DOF should include the door maybe all the way to the table (which is a slight distraction). Again, her face should be a major highlight in at least one third of the images in a set. A good gauge of clarity is being able to count individual eye-brow hairs in the raw high-resolution image. The gown in this image is glowing from the backlight, which provides a nice contrast, creates the perception that she is in a shadow. A couple of reflectors would have helped here. My apologies to the model about her tightly crossed legs in the other critique. I can see from this shot that she has nice muscle tone in her legs.
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Marta’s standing position in front of the vertical glass doors in a portrait orientation gives the image a vertical flow. The model is contrasted by the background’s muted greens with the sun reflected in patches of lighter yellow-green as well as creating strategic highlights in Marta’s robes. The wooded landscape remains in an unfocused background silhouette. The model appears satisfied with the hint of a smile while her head is positioned in a manner of arbitrary scrutiny. Her long red hair adorns her face flowing below her shoulders. The white cabinet at the right lower portion of the image is the one detractor, if the viewer is able to look away from Marta’s captive gaze.
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:iconspaghetti42:
spaghetti42 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2018
well done
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:iconthemexicanduck:
themexicanduck Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
great lighting
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:iconnimbue:
Nimbue Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2018   General Artist
Beyond perfect.
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:iconaciddmaus23:
aciddmaus23 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
stunning image!!!
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:iconthemexicanduck:
themexicanduck Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing
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:iconhcklebery1:
Hcklebery1 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2017
her eyes suck you in and good bye heart
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:iconkal-el4:
Kal-el4 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2017
SEXY!
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:iconenonorez:
enonorez Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
A beautiful model and you've captured her so well.
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:iconarokhrynn:
Arokhrynn Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2017
So beautifull
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:iconslyfxz:
SlyFXZ Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She looks like she's ready to kick ass and chew bubblegum.  And she's all outta gum...
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
great
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:iconsurdy78:
Surdy78 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017
Sweet red Marta :D
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:icongezim1885:
GEZIM1885 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2017
Pretty Marta .
:) (Smile) :D (Big Grin) :) (Smile) :happybounce: Heart +fav 
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:iconascott001:
Ascott001 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017
A young woman, her beauty enhanced by the draperies and the light fro the window, which throws a shimmering halo around her. Composition and light marvellous here.
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:iconmike-mash:
Mike-Mash Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017
A lovely lady beautifully photographed. Thank you.
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:iconedgyitaly:
edgyitaly Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017
Fucking hell
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:iconserendipity1st:
Serendipity1st Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017
256x256bb by RespectfulRamone  
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:icongoomuin:
Goomuin Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Gorgeous :dummy:
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:icontvtable:
tvtable Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
yesh! She is perfecto! what i like is that difference of hilt's. Love that foto
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:iconporthos-01:
Porthos-01 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful
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:iconkechumboomboom:
KechumBoomBoom Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017
Gorgeous
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:iconarrog:
arrog Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017
Lovely.
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:iconpudenda:
pudenda Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2017
Simply gorgeous.
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:iconimustbedead:
IMustBeDead Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
yikes gorgeous
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:iconsegura2112:
segura2112 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Love! Thank You 
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:iconpvalle:
pvalle Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017
The use of the natural light is brilliant! The model, perfect!
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:iconeclipsewolf201:
Eclipsewolf201 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
This is an amazing picture and it has amazing quality
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147CombatMedic Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017
What a cutie!  :aww: :nod: :aww:
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:iconschwabpm022750:
schwabpm022750 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017
An exceptionally composed photo of an exceptionally beautiful young woman!!!  Bravo!!!
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017  Hobbyist Photographer
She beautiful. Wonderful work. Perfect light.
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:iconhobu4ohok:
hobu4ohok Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2017
I can't begin to tell you! It's excellent!!! Gorgeous!!!
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