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:iconlester-the-quaestor:
Ah, another picture of Iren. If you do nothing else as a photographer, I hope you can have more sessions with this model. I hate to sound like a complete twerp, but your pictures of this woman have changed my life.

The layout of the photo is very good. The background perfectly matches the subdued limited pallet of the model. The color of the jeans keeps it from being too monotone.

Her pose is unusual, sort of a relaxed exotica. She expresses a bored indifference to the camera and by extension the viewer. Her hair, although not at all feminine, matches her face and overall appearance very well. It gives her a feeling of youth, energy, and even a radical intelligence. Overall, as I have said in a previous critique, she is almost impossibly attractive.

I'm not extremely fond of the jeans with the rope belt. The blue color goes with her hair, of course, but I think it looks just a little too modelly. OTOH, I can't think of anything better.

Technically, this picture was taken in slightly too little light, I think. It comes through in the general graininess, and the detail of her hair below the ear is lost. There is also a defect below her elbow which is quite visible. Was that a spot on the lens, or perhaps an accidental click in the 'shop? There doesn't seem to be any need for the blotch.

Otherwise the technical aspects are very good. If there was any retouching of her face it was done with a light touch and doesn't show. Her features are brought out very well, I only wish there was more texture visible.

Overall it is very good for a simple portrait. Perhaps not the pinnacle of your work technically but quite exceptional on an absolute scale.
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:iconjunkyardrose:
Junkyardrose Featured By Owner May 2, 2018
wonderful! expressive! extraordinary!  WOW!
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:iconrichardely:
RichardEly Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2018
Gamine
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:iconjay-afterdark:
Jay-AfterDark Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2016
I can't work out if that is natural light or a soft box but either way it's spot on. A beautiful natural looking model and pose. Great work.
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:iconzhen-sama:
Zhen-sama Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2015  Professional General Artist
es hermosa <3 
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:iconrdp451:
RDP451 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is an amazing photo. I found it on another site and liked it so much I made a 3d render in tribute to it. The model is beautiful and my 3d remake of her is now one of my favorite characters.  I happy to have found the photographer, truly an inspiration and a vary beautiful model.

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:iconyawal58:
Yawal58 Featured By Owner May 26, 2015
The combination of her short hair and small breasts give her a boyish look, make her do by that some boyish stuff, like taking hours fixing problems with the engine of some machine, no matter how dirty she will become with that. But then again, looking into her face, the soft roundings of her hips and shoulders, give her back the shape of the girl she is... but still like to take hours to fix that one problem that blocks the machine to work again well.

After all, most guys would be happy with her if she joins the team to repair the damage... and offcourse to watch and admire her beauty. In that case boys still will be boys, and she knows it, sneaky enjoy their eyes staring at her. 
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:icondegravone:
Degravone Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great shoot and bokeh use !
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:iconrasmus-art:
rasmus-art Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Congratulation. This wonderful work was the winner of our "A-Cup-Club-Contest "Best out of 10". We moved the image to the "Best of..." folder. Dance! Party Dance!
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:iconrerumfontis:
rerumfontis Featured By Owner May 8, 2014   Traditional Artist
This is an amazing work! :heart:
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:iconyumisensei:
yumisensei Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
the way she looks, really cool :3
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:iconworldsasuo3o:
WorldSASUO3O Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student General Artist
wow....she is beautiful OAO she looks like Emma Watson in The Perks of Being a Wallflower
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:iconkoopakidds:
KoopaKidDS Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
I wonder if I'm the only one who clicked on this pic just to see her face...:P
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:iconalyxz:
Alyxz Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
Love it. I know you requested critique, but I've got nothing for you.  Just a great photo of a beautiful model in a great pose.  I even like the lighting.  And the jeans.
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:iconsteckyx:
SteckyX Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
only nice, verry nice
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:iconnilvirgil:
nilvirgil Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014
cute , beauty & pretty :iconheartglompplz:
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:icondarkcorpuscle:
darkcorpuscle Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Beautiful.
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:icondarth-gerko:
darth-gerko Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
Nice model.
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:icontman300:
tman300 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
The background and clothes look somewhat shabby and definitely set the "lost waif" mood. Iren with her "pixie" face really pulls off the look and is the icing on the cake so to speak. I ask you who could ever refuse helping her? Also makes the point that teh clothes do not make the woman. Very well done and worthy of a fave. :)
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:iconwaypasthadenough:
waypasthadenough Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2014
I'm not sure what 'fair' vs. 'unfair' means since 'art' is usually in the eye of the beerholder and I've known some who can't seem to see it at all.

It would help to know your technique and tools before I 'critiqued.' Otherwise the portrait is fine and the model finer. Too bad most of them don't look that way...
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:iconmichaelcphotography:
MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014   Photographer
Really cute, and what perfect little breasts!
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:iconblackvalentino:
blackvalentino Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014
Is it weird that I find her attractive? I'm a dude btw.
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:iconfreeza-frost:
freeza-frost Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
she's so cute n boyish! :)
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:iconpeterws:
peterws Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
She looks like she`s gonna help Dad out on the farm . . .dressed for work, nice sunny day. 
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:iconadrolyn:
Adrolyn Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This model is so pretty.  I like the relaxed look of this shot.  Nice.
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:iconbig-olaf:
BIG-OLAF Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Oh wow, she's cute. I love that haircut. Gals with short hair are way underrated. Excellent image.
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:iconmarkwalker69:
MarkWalker69 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
What a beautiful photo and beautiful model. Simply fantastic...
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:iconrojpix:
Rojpix Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
simple unassuming and refreshing
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:iconartisanimage:
Artisanimage Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Photographer
Stunning shot and beautifully lit
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:iconabsoposi:
AbsoPosi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
She is very much like the main actress in Silent Hill movie. Good tones and depth.
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:iconjohankoops:
JohanKoops Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great pose, lovely color and look. 
Johan
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:iconwildwest62:
wildwest62 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Very nice.
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:iconqd30quiet:
qd30quiet Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Tiny and firm!!
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:iconmarty4110:
Marty4110 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
Yep, very beautiful and very simple.
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:iconpegasus998:
pegasus998 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
loving this pose with the head flat against the wall
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:iconmainthegap:
Mainthegap Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
a simple but beautiful pic, gorgeous model :)
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:iconforgedfromvhs:
ForgedFromVHS Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
She almost has an identical body type like my RP char...Beautifull pic btw! 
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:iconsmog-monster:
Smog-monster Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Professional Photographer
Excellent image, well shot and the model has done an excellent job at portraying the emotion of the image.
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:iconcrafty424:
crafty424 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
She is very Beautiful
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:icondracolupine:
dracolupine Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow... just wow. I usually pass by these revealing photos but... It doesnt look like she cares much about what gender she is. Her body isnt shown in a sexual manner like most of these photos. I found myself just staring thinking "holy shit" her eyes definitely caught me. That stare really is something else. Like she is just watching you, doesnt particulary care that you are here but, just watching.

God damn though, applause to her and applause to the photographer
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:iconbornintodarkness:
BornIntoDarkness Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
absolutely beautiful
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:iconmecengineer:
mecengineer Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
so pretty
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:icondevvinzz:
devvinzz Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
What else to say but this is an amazing work! Perfect Art! Thanks for having shared such an emotion with us.
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:iconedwardv:
Edwardv Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
:)
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:iconwest-kis:
west-kis Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Professional
Замечательно
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:icongabrielbb:
GabrielBB Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Beautiful, sweet, pretty girl
Hugs and kisses
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:iconjoshartisticgenius:
JoshArtisticGenius Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm very drawn to her eyes, not sexual, she is simply beautiful and natural. I really like her.
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:iconsoul-daemon:
Soul-Daemon Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
she is so my type... :iconlesighplz:
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:iconwhetsit-tuya:
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student General Artist
I love yaoi
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:iconrezuko:
Rezuko Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist
thats a girl
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