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:iconavitus12:
Hi, I don't normally critique photography but I do see some improvements that could be made so here we go :)

for the most part, the lighting on the model is good, though a slight backlight might be good, how it is now her arm and neck are very flat.

The yellow on the lamp is a spot color that draws a lot of attention, personly I would either change its color or remove it.

Motion blur on the hands isn't good try to keep that to a minimum.

It sorta looks as though she is dancing, and to go with that theme a pose where her hands were above her head might work well...

I see some overexposure going on, try to keep that to a minimum it tends to look unnatural and pulls you out of the scene.

A little bit of hair in her face might be cute... just a few strands from her fringe...
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First of all, this is a very beautiful photo. The lighting is exquisite and the arch of her back and tilt of her shoulders is very feminine. It's casually taken, so a formal critique seems a little unfair, but these comments might help you in the future.

The tip of her nose breaks the line of her cheek. In formal portraiture this is considered a fault. You get a more attractive effect to either see more of the far eye or have her face in profile.

She's not paying attention to her hands, and they detract. Personally, I'd retouch out her right hand. Tell the model to curve her wrist back a bit and curve her fingers. It'll look more graceful.

All that said, it's a lovely photo of a stunningly beautiful woman.
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CharlieProut Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2019
What a great model! She takes all the place on that picture! 😍
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:icondarknesscallin13:
darknesscallin13 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2019
Very beautiful a model its a b
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:iconargynnis:
argynnis Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2019
Erotic....not really; the little mole on her left breast attracts a lot of interest...she's gorgeous
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:icongalinas-claim:
Galinas-Claim Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2019
Neat shot!
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:iconbind4pleasure:
bind4pleasure Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2019
pure sensuous beauty  
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:iconpablo-klik:
pablo-klik Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2019  New Deviant Hobbyist Photographer
BELLA  MODELLO..ECCELLENTE  FOTO..OTTIMO  LABORO
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:iconpablo-klik:
pablo-klik Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019  New Deviant Hobbyist Photographer
BELLA  MODELLO....ECCELLENTE FOTO......OTTIMO LABORO!!!!!!!!!!!1
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:icondanydeviant:
DanyDeviant Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2019  Hobbyist Photographer
Magic... 
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:iconlesbian-tiffany:
Lesbian-Tiffany Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Dam she's one beautiful young lady!
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:iconglenh865:
glenh865 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
She is beyond beautiful!!!
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:iconfmtfluver:
FMTFluver Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Lovely young woman.
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:iconletmeseebeuty:
LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Thanks for sharing the very beautiful lady 
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moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
I like it. :)
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:iconriaverobenthil:
RiaVeroBenthil Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I admire the model's dedicated gaze downward.  She appears confident in herself as sensual being, unafraid of judgement.  She has embraced the idea of romance and carnal pleasures of the hotel.  I see that there are books involved in this photograph.  That has peeked my interest.  Thank you for sharing!
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Mavrick67 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2019
Very nice assessment of the photo, RiaVeroBenthil. Leave it naturally
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:iconkaze26:
kaze26 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Beautiful
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Hobbyist Photographer
super
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:iconsadistyk08:
Sadistyk08 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
lovely work of art!
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:iconluanmonta:
LuanMonta Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019  Professional Filmographer
Very delicate photo! :)
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:iconsnicker1:
snicker1 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
beautifully done image, lovely woman
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:iconbluewingfairy:
bluewingfairy Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
Good morning friend, beautiful+fav+fav+fav+fav.   
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:iconmoscalifar:
moscalifar Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2019
awesome model and image
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:iconmaitretigre:
MaitreTigre Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
Hmmm... very nice
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:iconpheenix42:
Pheenix42 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
Sleek, well lit and a sculpture in picture form.
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:iconbribesdemoi:
bribesdemoi Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
Those shades... magnificent picture !
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:iconbubul1986:
bubul1986 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
now that's room service
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:iconsotu31:
sotu31 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
Extraordinary!
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:iconsweetdreamz12:
sweetdreamz12 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist Filmographer
Simply Amazing!
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:iconbeaktvart:
BeakTVArt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful image. Beautiful model too :)
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:iconskipshot:
skipshot Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist Photographer
Hurt me, hurt me.... with your love. 
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:iconnotofthisearth:
notofthisearth Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
Pulchritudinous...

Billy
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:iconkevlar31:
Kevlar31 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gorgeous!
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:iconrush-2k:
RUSH-2K Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
Gold Star Sticker Icon  Great work, Thanks for sharing ! Gold Star Sticker Icon 
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:iconhachimakix23:
HachimakiX23 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Professional Artist
HeartUHeart 
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OrganicPic Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019
amazing figure!
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:iconjigmedatse:
JigmeDatse Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not really much I know of this genre of photography, so can't really give a formal critique.  I wonder if you might want "better lighting" as I see motion blur that I don't think is desired...  
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:iconulliart:
Ulliart Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Hobbyist Photographer
An awesome picture and a breathtaking - beautiful woman!
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:iconvibra-lynx:
Vibra-Lynx Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2019  Professional Photographer
Superb beautiful stunning photography and gorgeous model
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