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I like the pose and the lighting that bring out the shape of her body. The cradling of the breasts combined with her facial expression leads to a real sense of the model enjoying herself and being swept up in the moment. Whether the joy is from the music or from something more erotic or perhaps both, the questions that it induces at to the impact of the piece. I dislike what seems to be poor choice of blurring in post production. Apologies if this is not the case. The foreground looks much to blurred and the blur should be more gradual as the focus recedes from the model. Overall a nicely presented image.
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I really like this image. A previous critique called into question the dof. This MAY be a little over done, the image MIGHT have been better with slightly less aggressive depth of field. Having said that, I feel that it does add to the dynamism and sense of 'moment' that the image portrays. The model does indeed appear to be caught in the instant very nicely. The tension in her legs is a good way to add immediacy to the image. I quite like the DOF, for a normal axial lens yes, the dof is wrong, but using a T&S lens might almost produce this effect. The lighting is lovely. Not soo bright as to diminish the feeling of intimacy but not soo dark as to cause problems for focus.
The texture of her tanned smooth skin is a lovely counterpoint to the rucked silk sheets. I like how the tension in the fabric conveys gives us a clue to the motion of the model

The only thing I can really point to and say there is a negative is the damned TV sticking out of the top of her head. The DOF ALMOST gives us enough separation between her head and the tv/picture frame but not quite. No location is perfect and I understand it was something that had to be 'lived with'.

Overall, a sweet composition that makes very good use of a lovely model in an imaginative way to not only give us an image of a pretty young lady but also convey a mood, a moment.
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:iconwestlylafleur:
WestlyLaFleur Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2018  Professional Digital Artist
:thumbsup: or :goodjob: 
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:iconkal-el4:
Kal-el4 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2016
DAY-UMM!
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:iconjleon323:
jleon323 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
Out of all the girls that the artist uses for his photos she is my favorite.
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:iconcpalamara:
cpalamara Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2015  Professional Filmographer
This playful and sensual shot is a favourite for sure. Thanks for sharing! #1 
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:iconalaaha:
alaaha Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
The photo and model are just perfect. Please, keep up such momentum and quality of work
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
great
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:iconnatsumi88:
natsumi88 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your gallery is very inspiring. I used this picture to practice drawing (hope you don't mind): the pose and the light are just perfect!
This is the result natsumi88.deviantart.com/art/D…
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:iconsegaua119:
SEGAUA119 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Nice!
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:iconfirestorm31z:
firestorm31z Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2014
I liked the DJ in bed series. 

it did take me  awhile to figure who the model was as I got confused by the names that were given to her; Irene, loli, lo & Irina.
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:iconcmoyl:
cmoyl Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What a cute little ass.  Muy linda pompes...
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:iconak1393:
Ak1393 Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
cut!!
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:iconazul8:
Azul8 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Just love the shot!
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:iconrastafairian:
Rastafairian Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Lighting...Focus..Model.. All perfect.
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:iconticianorocha:
Ticianorocha Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Beautiful work!
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:iconazael1332ragnarok:
Azael1332Ragnarok Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
greatWink/Razz 
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:iconsydneyrome:
sydneyrome Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Of the two I prefer this one where the model's eyes are closed. being a DJ myself I can appreciate that sometimes music can create a veritable feeling of ecstasy.
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:iconcomic-cywink:
Comic-Cywink Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
This is really very good
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:icongalinas-claim:
Galinas-Claim Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Thank you for the new one of this model!  If you have any more of her, please post! :)
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:icongalinas-claim:
Galinas-Claim Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
Will commision this for a DJ mix in the future! ;)  Music gets me hot, too! ;)  Love it!!!
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:icondarth-gerko:
darth-gerko Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Professional General Artist
Dude, I think this is one of your bests shots. :clap:
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:iconemerson-fialho:
Emerson-Fialho Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Professional Artist
Wonderful... :love:
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:iconmouse1982:
mouse1982 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
WOW.. Nothing else to say :-)

I like the perspectice and the effect of "Not showing something" ...
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:iconpinokkio696:
pinokkio696 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Brilliant The critique are spot on   
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:iconlumberjacck:
lumberjacck Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
So full of passion and desire... and the lights! Love 
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:icongonazar:
Gonazar Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Definitely like this version better.
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:iconjennybleach1996:
jennybleach1996 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
are thoose sol republic
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:iconurto74:
urto74 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Complimenti..
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:iconcromium:
Cromium Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely beautiful shot!
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:iconjoergjohannmueller:
JoergJohannMueller Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
So beautiful!
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:iconverocity-viper:
Verocity-Viper Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
That is one gorgeous bum, she is devine :P
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:iconvtec1800:
vtec1800 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
I didn't notice she was wearing headphones. My focus was elsewhere. Shame on me.
Great photo.
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:iconheartisnude:
HeartIsNude Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Blissful self hug
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:iconrtrooper:
RTrooper Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
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:iconmisakichanz:
MisakiChanz Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Very lovely lighting in this piece, I love the headphones as well as her expression! (:
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:iconbeastguyver:
BeastGuyver Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like how the light plays across the small of her back, the reflected light on her face is nice too. on a less artistic note, Damn!
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:iconsoul-daemon:
Soul-Daemon Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I always go for elfin lookin babes :giggle:
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:iconwhetsit-tuya:
Whetsit-Tuya Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student General Artist
It's not super blurry anymore
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:icongreyareark1:
GreyAreaRK1 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Are you asking for a comparison of the two photos?  If so, I prefer this one.  They're both technically excellent, but this one is more intimate.  She's off in her own world - a really good one by the looks of it.  There's a purity to it.  The other's 'come hither' look into the lens breaks that spell.
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:iconakizafan12:
akizafan12 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
she should totally turn around and have her whole body facing the camera
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DianArifin Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
awesome

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:iconuniedf:
unieDF Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so hott!!
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:iconat3mporal:
at3mporal Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Instant Fave 
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:iconcuteness-prime:
Cuteness-Prime Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
I love the headphones
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:iconmodiz:
modiz Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Professional Photographer
really good shot
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:iconmichaelcphotography:
MichaelCPhotography Featured By Owner May 1, 2014   Photographer
Gorgeous model and body!  Would like to see a little sharper focusing on the eyes.  Nice shot!
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:iconedwardv:
Edwardv Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
:)
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:iconfox-o-death:
fox-o-death Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
To sexualized, women are not objects. . . however the lighting is exquisite this  photo would be even better without the half naked chic. 
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:iconkerast:
kerast Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
being sexualized is not being an object...  ;) 
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:iconhelghan0:
helghan0 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014
Truly great
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