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phoogho

aggressive sadness
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This account isn't really active but sometimes I pop in to check on it. So hello! If you need to contact me, you can dm me on twitter.


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graphic tablet, and sometimes random traditional art supplies
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sorry for the late reply, haven't really been active as of late

and yeah that would be pretty amazing

good luck with it!

akumatized lizbeth
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I think this is an interesting beginning for a comic. Although some might think of it as cliche. The dynamic poses add a sense of danger and excitement and the lack of colors and the lack of facial features just adds mystery into the mix and makes me want to read more of it.

Going onto the background, it's well made. The clouds look realistic and the buildings look very simplistic yet eye catching. The only problem I have is the line consistency. While the outline of the male is slightly messy the buildings are very clean edged and this makes the character almost look they don't belong. There are also places where the corners of the panels meet and go over each other and a lot of lines are crossing over each other where they shouldn't be.

Overall, it looks promising and I would love to see more of it. The only problems I've found are things that are easily fixed so, good luck!
E.N.D - Page 1
That is a very good critique, thank you very much Kokona Smile Icon 
started drawing this with my left hand
Thank you very much Gabriel Kokona Smile Icon 
started drawing this with my left hand