Hello everyone.
I don't know how many of you know, but I have been helping out gnome-oo (https://www.deviantart.com/gnome-oo) in his Infinity Warp series by writing little stories that accompany the images he has drawn. You can find (what I hope is a complete list) these stories here. Since I have been doing this since 2018, I'm looking for some feedback. Although I would accept any comments, I'm looking for some specific feedback to the following questions:
-Is there any aspects of my writing that you like? What are the strong features?
-Is there anything that you think I could improve in my writing? (n.b. I am looking for comments on tone, style, how I describe transform