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With melmë we should all walk, [melmë] should be contained in our hearts
We can walk the twilight path, of silvery skies with luminescent moons to be forever greeted by the Valar in our individual search for the imaginal realm, our personal experiences of gnosis follow.
Melindo is from the language Quenya and is the masculine noun for lover; melmė means love.
This is a Valarin poem (adj. means Valian, of or relating to the Valar). For more information about the Valar: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vala_(Mi…

Gnosis: en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gnosis

I would say that the reason I chose the title I did is to address it to my love, as oddly as that would be considering it's Valian content and my love's lack of knowledge and interest in such subjects.
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
good, just needs more space and stanza.
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phoenix-raven Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Agreed, I'll have to go back later and do some editing.
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TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yep! oh, would you wish to read a poem i made?
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phoenix-raven Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course :)
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phoenix-raven Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome
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phoenix-raven Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:icontaoandthen: What do you think?
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TaoAndThen Featured By Owner May 16, 2014
I LOVE the imagery and, well, you know me and foreign languages :)  I can't wait to see the edits you make to it (referring to above comment).
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phoenix-raven Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, always appreciative of your positive feedback. Foreign languages are still one of my greatest passions in life- sometimes I feel like we could easily share a brain. That probably sounds really weird... Oh well it's probably true. I don't know when I plan to make the edits. Tomorrow perhaps. We'll see.
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