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If no one's going to start, then I guess I will. I will say that you got everything on the nose. This little bunny girl is perhaps the ...


Initially, the beauty of this OC had me speechless. However, I think I've finally found my voice. Kaitou-Alice knew what she was doing ...


Remorse is a very potent emotion, as it shows that someone is human. It shows that the person has acknowledged the fact that what they ...

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The Seventeen Candles and the Fire Thief
Seventeen candles stood proud and alone
Their flames gave off a soft, warm glow
Then came the fire thief in the dead of night
And extinguished forever their soft, warm light
The lawmen came to put the thief's neck in the noose
But instead, lesser cooked was the thief's goose
in the jailhouse, he stirred up trouble left and right
But they're soon to catch up and he's soon to bid the world good night. 
Today we remember those candles who lost their flames
Never to be set alight again
Drifting among the winds, their wax now of pearl white hue
They left behind hearts a deep shade of blue.
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Little Black Baseball Bat
I played baseball with you for the longest time
Once good friends, now we're partners in crime
Crime-stopping, that is; serious is my voice
When I say that you're my weapon of choice
Inseparable, buddy cops, I know you've got my back
Once, you hit baseballs, now you'll have temples to crack
I have faith in you against even the most vile thief
Because I know you'll knock him out and put him right to sleep
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A Letter to Evan
Dear Evan:
It's been two years since you had to be put down. Life has gone on, but your absence hasn't gone unnoticed. The cat remembers that spot behind my desk where you used to lay during the summer. I remember that spot behind my chair where you would sit when you wanted to go outside. Your toys are also scattered all across the backyard, and they're mainly tennis balls. It makes my hands shaky to know that you're no longer here to greet me with your tail wagging when I got home. There's a big hole in everybody's heart, Luke most of all. You truly were Man's best friend when you were down here on Earth. I miss you, old friend, but I hope I'll see you again someday. After all, I don't believe in animals not going to heaven. I know you're waiting patiently for the day I die so we can be back together again. 
With a broken heart: 
Your earthly master. 
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Seventeen candles stood proud and alone
Their flames gave off a soft, warm glow
Then came the fire thief in the dead of night
And extinguished forever their soft, warm light

The lawmen came to put the thief's neck in the noose
But instead, lesser cooked was the thief's goose
in the jailhouse, he stirred up trouble left and right
But they're soon to catch up and he's soon to bid the world good night. 

Today we remember those candles who lost their flames
Never to be set alight again
Drifting among the winds, their wax now of pearl white hue
They left behind hearts a deep shade of blue.



The Seventeen Candles and the Fire Thief
In memory of the seventeen lives taken in Parkland FL, one year ago. May they rest in peace on high.
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"Greater love hath no man than this: that a man lay down his life for his friends." -John 15:13 

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Noah Whitehouse
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Authority figure, critic, poet, story writer, photographer. That sums me up pretty good.
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AchtIconoclast Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2018  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naomeen by AchtIconoclast By the wheel and will of the viral Naomeen, llamas shall be transmitted to those who are seen!:shakellama:
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phantomofmike Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: 
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shotsfiredimagedown Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2018
Thank you for the critique.... b.

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phantomofmike Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. :)
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darkparadies Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2018  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch! Daisy thanks for watch 
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phantomofmike Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
Daisy you're welcome 
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3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
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phantomofmike Featured By Owner Edited Dec 24, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
In truth, 3wyl, I lack the self-confidence to step up and be among your number. :( (Sad) 

As nice a man as I might seem, I have little to no confidence in myself. Lonely 

I only accepted your invite because I thought the group's mission statement was easy. That'll teach me to read the fine print of the contract... Sweating a little... 
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3wyl Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, how do you mean when you thought the group's mission statement was easy? It can be. :nod:
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phantomofmike Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe you're right. :)
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