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Concept of scifi gun - electric rifle -  for fictional scenario. No ammo, but energy pack-battery. Worked in 3ds max, used vray rendering engine and finished it in photoshop. Concept is meant to be series with this one: DLUGOV , Model is highpoly. I did only one picture but it is big as usual. 

So what do you think. Do you like it or not? tnx for comments if any. bye.
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Critique by oakstudios Mar 16, 2016, 5:50:08 PM
Overall this is a pretty good 3d model of a futuristic gun. I like the precision in the modeling with no artifacts. It's well lit and certainly conveys a feeling of solidity.

The gun however gives off a child-like vibe, like a toy. I think this is due to the bright blue gun clip and clean lines. I would suggest changing the texture of the gun clip to something metallic. Also maybe add more crosshatching texture in the inwardly beveled areas. Finally, unless it's supposed to be brand new, add some scratches and dirt, as if this is a gun that has been used often.

Otherwise this is definitely a piece that can go into a portfolio.
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I really like what you were trying to do here, but I want to share a few thoughts if this is intended to be a military weapon and not a law enforcement weapon (I'm assuming that this is a lethal weapon and not a crowd control device):

The battery should be a darker color. While dark gray and light blue is a really cool color combination, if this is to have practical military use, it should be much darker, perhaps even a warmer color, like a very dark, brownish-crimson. Too many light colors on a weapon would draw too much attention to it.

Additionally, the battery gauge should neither be so large nor on the side as this would give the enemy an idea of how much fight the wielder has left. The battery meter should be simpler and perhaps inset at the foot of the sight or perhaps even within the sight itself so that the wielder knows how much power she or he has left if looking through the sights.

The scale of the weapon also seems too small for such a high tech weapon. The trigger guard should be made just a little bit larger, perhaps extended forward a little bit to accommodate someone wearing thick or armored gloves. Also, while the battery is obvious, how this weapon works is not. I feel as though this weapon should be a little bit larger and bulkier behind the trigger assembly. This would give it a sense of weight and also give the impression that there are redundancies and safety systems built into it to protect the wielder from misfires or problems associated with overheating.

I really like this a lot, though, keep up the good work!
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Ryuk20 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
I wanna all your guns for the Counter Strike 1.6
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xserek Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016
It definitely does give off a solid non-lethal aesthetic without, ideal for first responders'. but on the subject of critiquing and design concept will it have other variants (Marksman/Artillery/CQB) considering you are drawing its features from the DLUGOV line.
Oh and on the subject of electric based ammo economy will it have a battery charging function generated from the users movements and with solar energy etc.

Would definitely love to see more CQB Designs from you in the future :D
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peterku Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2016
yea. Sometime I have to make some rifle design with solar panel on surface just to be green ;)
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SlantedJonas Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Is this a model?
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peterku Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2016
yea.
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LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner May 21, 2016
Cool gun
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peterku Featured By Owner May 21, 2016
tnx
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LETMESEEBEUTY Featured By Owner May 21, 2016
Your welcome 
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noasborne65 Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
looks like a futuristic vector with a barrel attached. I like it
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peterku Featured By Owner May 17, 2016
tnx mate.
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678091 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love the sight, the gun itself though, I don't like the thumb hold stock, bullpup=Great for me
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peterku Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2016
tnx mate.
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GreyAreaRK1 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
Excellent design and detail.
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
tnx you
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templar127 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
Looks sweet! :D
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
tnx.
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DeRezzurektion Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
At first I was a little thrown by the design but on realization the bull-pup design makes a lot of sense and overall adds practicality, especially in a combat situation. Gotta love your work!
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
tnx you man.
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Conceptbro Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I think it looks pretty cool personally.
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
tnx you man.
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Darkswag Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job!
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
tnx.
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Agacora Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Student General Artist
Looks like the lovechild of a KRISS Vector and P90
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
When I started I thought on KRISS ;)
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DeadWeight69 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
Same! 
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Stargazzer811 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Totally agree there
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TiaranDracodar Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Cool concept, seems amazing for CQC, the only thing I'd miss is somewhere to put my left hand. I'd suggest some kind of grip on the trigger guard (p.e. FN P90-esque).
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
yea. front grip is ask to be apply ...
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nemisisbeta Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Professional General Artist
Your weapon designs are pretty fucking inspiring. I love it. You've got an excellent eye for greebles. XD Keep up the badass work.
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016
tnx. I preffer minimalistic design then those overwhelming.
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nemisisbeta Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2016  Professional General Artist
Your welcome. Keep it up! XD
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Jonot Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
It looks like it would work well as a security weapon.
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
you are correct. originally I designed it as security weapon. Therefore it is also shorter and lighter then my usual ones. 
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prokhorvlg Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like it, but why show the main view upside down?
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
hi. just to be different and dont use usual setup -  flowing in the air...
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prokhorvlg Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Interesting, I get it. Although a lot of times I have to twist my head to "understand" your weapons (like how they're held, etc)
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peterku Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016
:) probably not easy to look at that in opposite direction one of the reason Why I place on the picture also ghost print. 
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prokhorvlg Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see it, but the main render is far more beautiful :P
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