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Amdarais - Captive Demon
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Published: October 20, 2012
© 2012 - 2019 PetboyJoshua
"Clean" version. You can see the "uncensored" version of the picture on my tumblr(well, it's not a big deal, just a little change, but apparently Deviant Art ToS don't allow pictures showing "toys" :'p).

Also... I have a short story coming with that one, for once. :)
It's supposed to happen just before the picture. I made my best to do that properly, but eh, English isn't my mothertongue, so I guess there's a lot of mistakes, weird sentences and stuff. Don't hesitate to tell me, I'd be glad to know where I did some things wrong so I can avoid it next time !
That, and also I'm not a good storyteller, hence why I usually just write descriptions about how my stuff works and nothing more.

Btw, the word Bradium is totally ripped of Ragnarök Online, though is just an ore used to make armors and weapons in the game. I just had no idea for a name.

So, yeah, if you want to read the short story and see the "deviant art does not want" version, here they are :

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Comments (22)
TabbyHoney's avatar
Yo, je viens de lire l'histoire. Très sympa!
Mais pourquoi ne pas rendre justice à ce pauvre démon? Il mérite sa revanche sur le sorcier, non? ;p
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Satoshi-no-Cosplay's avatar
J'adore ce dessin... vraiment! *^*
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NotRealNice's avatar
Oh niiiicccceeeeee
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PetboyJoshua| Digital Artist
Thanks !
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L0rd-Black|Professional Digital Artist
Cool. Didn't know about the TOS thing. Did you got reported?
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PetboyJoshua| Digital Artist
Nope, I just have the habit to read the ToS of every gallery I'm joining, since I've been banned 3 times from Y!gallery before D:
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L0rd-Black|Professional Digital Artist
Wow... well, I knew Y! can be a pain in the ass when it comes to TOS, that's what I watch'em quite strictly, but here at DA I'm way more... relaxed about them :P
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lordoffog's avatar
j'ai bien aimé l'histoire^^ et ce dessin est vraiment érotique je trouve O.o
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trinfan|Hobbyist Writer
Any chance I can have that demon when he's done with him?
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PetboyJoshua| Digital Artist
Mmmmaybe ? :)
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trinfan|Hobbyist Writer
I shall wait most patiently for my turn, then. X3
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PupLeo's avatar
oh nice, really awesome :)
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Paradox-Dream's avatar
cool story =D
there were a couple of mistakes, but nothing bad enough to take away from the quality of the story XD
in the 1st paragraph "He (had) learned everything he had to know before trying to summon..." would make more sense
also "but with the ton of money he (had) asked for [(in)or(with)] his first wish," would flow better
"He was tied ud(up)" but i think that was just a typo
"He was merely stronger than a normal human being at this point." (He was merely as strong as a normal human being) i think is more of what you were going for there, but if i'm wrong please don't feel obligated to change that, well that goes for all of this you're the author, not me XD you know what's best for your story
"Amdarais let escape a worried moan" i think that's correct gramatically, but (Amdarais let a worried moan escape) flows better so...
"the other one was way much bigger" you should take out (way) in that case, it makes the sentance a bit awkward
anyway the story itself was cool, and quite well written if i may add ^^
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PetboyJoshua| Digital Artist
THANK YOU.
I know it's a very, very very late compliment, but I mean it : thank you. It really helps me.
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RowanFiretamer|Student General Artist
I like the color choices in the picture, awesome perspective too. Great picture. ^^
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PetboyJoshua| Digital Artist
Thank you very much !
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Asomatica's avatar
I want his muzzle :3
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Thomasyaoi's avatar
YES me too *^*
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StevenKauk|Professional Photographer
I like his outfit. ~
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PetboyJoshua| Digital Artist
Thanks :)
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StevenKauk|Professional Photographer
Well what little outfit he has on. Lol
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