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Mother

A chill draft whispered in between the crumbling masonry, a tiny, shrilling whistle that gave voice to the insufferable bleakness of the mansion. The corridor echoed with memory, resonance of times long passed and people long dead. A small drip in the ceiling pattered out its incessant rhythm, rapping a cryptic message to the moss-ridden walls. Thirteen. It was a number that I was too familiar with – a number that pervaded my every thought and dogged me in fetid dreams, like a persistent illness that refused to wane, though its agent was long fallen into rest and obscurity. It nagged and tortured my subconscious, though most days I pai
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Smells Like Thunder

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Smells Like Thunder

The rain was coming down pretty hard. I trudged my way down the street, fast steps, pit-a-splosh in the puddles, little explosions of water. I liked that. It gave me a sense of purpose, like I'm headed somewhere important, with something to do. For a while I could make myself forget me, watching those tiny bullet-drops pound the asphalt, feeling the water mingled with cool sweat running down my back. For a while I could pretend like I'm back home, just another one of those slow summer nights, running out into the fields and lying there, belly full of food, lazing. It would be dusk. The air would be heavy and hot, hanging close to the ground.
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Guess who's back... back again

Guess who's back... back again

Alan's back. Tell a friend. Guess who's back. Guess who's back... ...and so on and so forth in that manner. Long story short: I've been away, and now am back, and angels no longer weep. It also seems that in the interim, the ever awesome Dan Kim has linked me on his page http://manga.clone-army.org/. This is a level of awesome that can only be expressed by fully extending my arms sideways and squealing, "THIIIS much!" (awesome, that is) Seriously. Dan Kim is the man. I love Dan Kim. Y'know. Heterosexually. PS. For extra LAWLZ, check out my crude-and-crass comics page: http://peazcomics.deviantart.com/
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Stars-Bread99Hobbyist Writer
i really loveee your ode to emos poem! it kicks ass and hits the nail right on the head!! great job on it :D
ARoseWithoutThornsHobbyist Traditional Artist
Ur ode to emos is very offensive. You dont know how their homelife isand besides haters make others famous.
love the emo poem, top stuff
I wish I could comment on your emo poem, bro! :D That was awesome. Thank you extremely much, you just made my day.
You have No idea what emo means. and Just because we are different, we shouldnt burn in hell, if such a place even exists! I will tell you what emo really means, only out of Pity.
It means you are not afraid of your emotions, and you arent afraid to cry when everyone is looking, and you arent afraid of pain. All Those FAKE emos who whine, and cry and cut, are not really emo, you only consider them to be. they are pussies.
no that's called "lack of self control" and "being a fucking faggot crybaby narcissist". Just fuck off you cunt.
You're right. Now I understand what 'emo' means. You're the real deal. Your tortured soul burns with the twilight of a thousand nights. Even other people who call themselves emos are posers when compared to you, because your pain isn't regular pain - it's super-special pain that they have to ship in from out of state.