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this one is also for class and its due in 14 hours and i just finished it i have one more poem i have to write bt now and then but im so tired and im falling asleep so i'll just habe to deal w it tomorrow during work i guess. also note 2 self i have to post the other poem from the last workshop but that was so unfinished i might as well wait until i do the final draft of it? anyways i love [redacted] with my whole entire heart its real crying hours
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incalyscent Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2018  Student Writer
i love.....the title of this one and also how there's no punctuation in that last stanza wow
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pansydiv Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2018   Writer
i love this so much!!
fun fact: it's Diwali, festival of light, and i know im reading this poem very late & much after it was posted but it is surprisingly fitting??? feels like magic <3
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PatchworkLynx Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018   Writer
:heart: that final stanza... no, this whole thing XD
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oviedomedina Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2018
from the comfort of your color house
you star to me,
This is one hell of an opening for an amazing poem!
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YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I love that second strophe.
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slenderblade Featured By Owner Edited Oct 29, 2018
i felt every breath of this in my mouth and it was cold and crisp to me but suddenly warm

and I'm whisked away in your paintings as always
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