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from the comfort of your color house
you star to me, i feel it
all the way to streetlights flitting
on the front panes of my own

so i take it in my teeth
to taste the light while i am dreaming
from your breaths i build my own breaths
from your glow i make a home

(what about it being hungry open-
coated in the moonlight when i
love you when you tell me you will
listen if you ask me for a poem so
we promise with the tickets pressed
like silver in our hands.)
this one is also for class and its due in 14 hours and i just finished it i have one more poem i have to write bt now and then but im so tired and im falling asleep so i'll just habe to deal w it tomorrow during work i guess. also note 2 self i have to post the other poem from the last workshop but that was so unfinished i might as well wait until i do the final draft of it? anyways i love [redacted] with my whole entire heart its real crying hours
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pansydiv Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2018  Professional Writer
i love this so much!!
fun fact: it's Diwali, festival of light, and i know im reading this poem very late & much after it was posted but it is surprisingly fitting??? feels like magic <3
PatchworkLynx Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018   Writer
:heart: that final stanza... no, this whole thing XD
oviedomedina Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2018
from the comfort of your color house
you star to me,
This is one hell of an opening for an amazing poem!
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2018   Writer
I love that second strophe.
slenderblade Featured By Owner Edited Oct 29, 2018
i felt every breath of this in my mouth and it was cold and crisp to me but suddenly warm

and I'm whisked away in your paintings as always
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