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this one is also for class and its due in 14 hours and i just finished it i have one more poem i have to write bt now and then but im so tired and im falling asleep so i'll just habe to deal w it tomorrow during work i guess. also note 2 self i have to post the other poem from the last workshop but that was so unfinished i might as well wait until i do the final draft of it? anyways i love [redacted] with my whole entire heart its real crying hours
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incalyscent Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2018  Student Writer
i love.....the title of this one and also how there's no punctuation in that last stanza wow
pansydiv Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2018   Writer
i love this so much!!
fun fact: it's Diwali, festival of light, and i know im reading this poem very late & much after it was posted but it is surprisingly fitting??? feels like magic <3
PatchworkLynx Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2018   Writer
:heart: that final stanza... no, this whole thing XD
oviedomedina Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2018
from the comfort of your color house
you star to me,
This is one hell of an opening for an amazing poem!
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2018  Hobbyist Writer
I love that second strophe.
slenderblade Featured By Owner Edited Oct 29, 2018
i felt every breath of this in my mouth and it was cold and crisp to me but suddenly warm

and I'm whisked away in your paintings as always
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