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Come Out, Henry! - RE-WRITTEN
The Railway Series/Thomas the Tank Engine and Friends
Volume I: The Three Railway Engines
Story III: Come Out, Henry!
Original Story and Adaptation by
the Rev. W. V. Awdry, Britt Allcroft and David Mitton
Re-Written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)
Once an engine attached to a train
Was afraid of a few drops of rain.
It went into a tunnel,
And squeaked through its funnel,
And wouldn't come out again.
The engine's name was Henry.
She was a 4-6-0 tender engine that resembled a hybrid of the LNER Gresley A1/A3 Pacific and the LNER Ivatt C1 Atlantic but painted in the licensed version of the LNER's apple green with red stripes standard to the North Western Railroad/Railway of Sodor with the number 3 on her tender.
She was taking a local passenger train of green and cream bogie express coaches from Vicarstown to Tidmouth along the Ballahoo line when it began to rain - and the rain seemed to sting Henry's boiler like acid.
W
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Superman Reborn: ROTS - concept movie treatment
SUPERMAN REBORN: REIGN OF THE SUPERWOMEN
written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)
Based on "Superman" Characters and Situations
printed in Action Comics created for DC Comics
by Jerome "Jerry" Siegel and Joseph "Joe" Shuster
30 East Trillium Circle
The Woodlands, TX 77381
936-231-8467
2006.cosmo@gmail.com
NOTE: This proposal is to become the property of New Frontier Cinema (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:'s production company), DC Films and Warner Bros. Pictures. Any unlicensed exhibition, copying or redistribution without written consent of the mentioned parties is strictly prohibited. All rights reserved.
Superman Reborn: Reign of the Superwomen
Story Treatment
The Logline
When the Man of Steel dies destroying the reborn evil Doomsday, his two beloveds Lois Lane and Lana Lang sacrifice their mortality to become Kryptonian superwomen. As they hope to carry on Superman's legacy, they must inherit the
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PL94 presents HIWWAM - HPATGOF (2005)
Hello faithful DeviantArt artists and deviants, and welcome to another interesting edition of How I Would Write & Make, where I or any one of you takes a piece of popular culture (a film, television series, novel, video game or whatever) and imagine an alternate perfect universe in which the piece is still successful and or influential to the culture at large, but you list 26 total differences in which the new version would differ from the original and therefore appeal to you. This week, I am tackling the fourth installment in a series about a young wizard and his friends at a prestigious magic school. Yes, I am talking about J.K. Rowling and Mike Newell's 2005 epic fantasy Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire.
How much of a Potterhead are you? Read all the books and watch all the movies back to back? Sort all characters from your fandoms and or OCs into a Hogwarts house? Still, I cannot help but wonder if certain events from the books and movies played diffe
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Percy's Predicament - RE-WRITTEN
The Railway Series/Thomas the Tank Engine and Friends
Volume XVI: Branch Line Engines
Story IV: Percy's Predicament
Original Story and Adaptation by
the Rev. W. V. Awdry, Britt Allcroft and David Mitton
Re-Written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)
Daisy the Diesel Rail-Car's work in the countryside was full of surprises.
But she was frightened of bulls and cows, and she remained very lazy and stubborn.
One day, Toby brought Henrietta and Elsie to Elsbridge Station where Percy was grumpily shunting freight cars around the carriage shed.
    "Hello Percy. I see Daisy's left the milk behind again."
    "I'll have to make a special journey with it, I suppose. Anyone would think I had nothing to do!" grumbled Percy.
    "Tell you what." replied Henrietta. "We'll take the milk, you fetch Toby's freight cars."
The engineers and stationmaster agreed.
With that, Toby and his coaches began to shunt themselves to collect the milk tanke
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Sailoranger Conceptual Character Guide I
GALAXY SENTAI SAILORANGER
/
POWER RANGERS: GALAXY GIRLS
written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III (aka. PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)
Inspired by "Super Sentai" created for Toei Company and Bandai
by Shotaro Ishinomori and Marvel Comics; and "Power Rangers" adapted from "Super Sentai"
by Haim Saban and Shuki Levy
Based on "Pretty Soldier Sailor Moon"
created by Naoko Takeuchi
for Toei Animation, Kodansha Ltd. and TV Asahi
30 East Trillium Circle
The Woodlands, TX 77381
936-231-8467
2006.cosmo@gmail.com

THIS SERIES PROPOSAL IS THE PROPERTY OF ROBERT BARNES III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:), TOEI COMPANY, SABAN BRANDS, HASBRO STUDIOS AND BANDAI. ANY PUBLIC EXHIBITION, COPYING OR REDISTRIBUTION WITHOUT THE AUTHORIZED, WRITTEN CONSENT OF THE OWNING PARTIES IS STRICTLY PROHIBITED BY LAW. ALL OTHER RIGHTS RESERVED. EYES ONLY!

MEET THE INNER SAILORANGERS
♀ Serena Usagi Tsukino - Princess Serenity/Sa
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THX 1138: The HBO Series - proposal
THX 1138
Adapted for Subscription Cable and Satellite Television
by Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)
Based on the feature film "THX 1138"
written by George Lucas and Walter Murch,
produced by Francis Ford Coppola,
and directed by George Lucas
Inspired by the short film "Electronic Labyrinth: THX 1138 4EB"
written and directed by George Lucas
30 East Trillium Circle
The Woodlands, TX 77381
936-231-8467
2006.cosmo@gmail.com

NOTE: This proposal is to be the property of New Frontier Cinema (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:'s production company) produced in partnership with American Zoetrope and Warner Media, LLC via Home Box Office, Inc. Any unlicensed exhibition, copying or redistribution without written consent of the mentioned parties is strictly prohibited. All rights reserved.


The Story
The series takes place in the 25th Century with two diametrically opposed
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Lion Voltron I: ALR - potential filming locations
If someday a live-action Voltron cinematic universe comes to fruition with my Lion Voltron I: A Legend Reborn as one entry in the series, here is an example of the location scouting I have done for what sets could be built and what could be filmed on location to make the movie.
INTERIORS
ARUS/ALTEA
Castle of the Lions - Pinewood Studios in Buckinghamshire, England
Grand Assembly ChamberControl RoomEntrance FoyerStaircasesRoyal TombLion Cockpits - Pinewood Studios in Buckinghamshire, England
Black LionRed LionYellow LionBlue LionGreen Lion
GALRA (PLANET DOOM)
Castle Galra - Pinewood Studios in Buckinghamshire, EnglandRoyal ChambersCorridorsDungeonsCastle RoofGalran Arena - Pinewood Studios in Buckinghamshire, EnglandSpectator StandsRoyal BoxArena PitGalran Spaceport - Pinewood Studios in Buckinghamshire, EnglandCorridorsEntrance HallVentilation ShaftsHa
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SMB II - Act I - Bedtime Phone Call
SUPER MARIO BROS. PART II - FALL OF SEVERAL KINGDOMS
"A Bedtime Phone Call"
Written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III
Based on "Mario" Characters and Situations
created for Nintendo
by Shigeru Miyamoto

SCENE NO. TBD - INT. HOTEL DELFINO - HEROES' SUITE - NIGHT
Everyone is getting set to turn in for the night.
Yoshi takes a chair near the windows as he kicks off his shoes and saddle to the floor to prepare to doze off.
As she turns the cooling fan to their room on, Peach is in a set of long sleeve/long legged pink pajamas (shirt and pants) with a long and pointed old-time pink sleeping cap with a white fluff ball on the end.
She turns to Mario who is just getting ready to turn in as well.
PEACH: (softly, points to Toad) Toad's all tuckered out, isn't he, Mario?
Mario muffles a slight chuckle as he smiles and puts on his blue sleeping cap (a counterpart to Peach's).
MARIO: (nods, then lost in thought) Yes, he sure is, Princess.
(looks to w
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Thomas Comes to Breakfast - RE-WRITTEN
The Railway Series/Thomas the Tank Engine and Friends
Volume XVI: Branch Line Engines
Story I: Thomas Comes to Breakfast
Original Story and Adaptation by
the Rev. W. V. Awdry, Britt Allcroft and David Mitton
Re-Written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)
FOREWORD
Dear Friends,
We never have a dull moment on our Branch Line. Thomas was silly and got into trouble, so a Diesel Rail-Car called Daisy came. She caused trouble, but has now promised to be good, so Sir Topham Hatt has kindly given her another chance.
Meanwhile Toby chased a bull, Percy got into a predicament and...
But you must read the stories for yourselves.
The Author
Thomas the Tank Engine has worked his branch line from Tidmouth and Knapford to Ffarquhar and Ulfstead for many years, and knows it very well.
One day he brought Annie and Clarabel to Tidmouth.
    "You know just where to stop, Thomas." laughed his engineer. "You could almost manage it with
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Sailor Moon V: Homecoming - Concept Scene Script
SAILOR MOON V: HOMECOMING
"The Return of Sailor Moon"
Written by
Robert D.C. Barnes III
Based on "Sailor Moon"
created for Kodansha and Toei
by Naoko Takeuchi

SCENE NO. TBD - INT. PALACE OF THE SOLAR KINGDOMS - MAIN ATRIUM - DAY
Serena Usagi Tsukino arrives inside the main atrium of the Palace, where it is warm and snug inside; as opposed to the open and bitter cold of the Antarctic frontier outside.
She walks over and sees what is left of the control desk, having somewhat flashed with explosions in Queen Beryl’s demise.
She is now frostbitten, naked, bruised and bloodied as she looks over the smashed control desk.
SERENA
(whistles in surprise)
Boy, what a wreck.
She clumsily walks around the Palace, calling out for her mother while ruminating on how she has doomed the planet by having her friends and boyfriend give up their powers.
SERENA
(Voice raised, calling out)
Queen Serenity? ... Mother?
(Voice lowered, softly and guiltily)
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FCC has voted but we still have a chance!
December 14, 2017 was the day that the FCC voted to repeal Net Neutrality. In the end, it was a 3-2 vote to repeal.
Many people were ashamed of this decision. This not only includes the citizens but officials too. Commissioners Jessica Rosenworcel and Mignon Clyburn did their part to defend Net Neutrality through their speeches. Sad to say they were the only two to defend free internet.
However, this is not the end. This still has to go to Congress. Which means we still have a chance.
Make sure you contact your officials to support Net Neutrality. Many states are already prepared to sue the FCC as well as officials. Do your part into making sure your representatives will support Net Neutrality. Congress has listened to us before, make sure they do again.
Call Congress:
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Text RESIST to:
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Text BATTLE to:
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The Railway Series/Thomas the Tank Engine and Friends

Volume I: The Three Railway Engines

Story III: Come Out, Henry!


Original Story and Adaptation by

the Rev. W. V. Awdry, Britt Allcroft and David Mitton


Re-Written by

Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)

Once an engine attached to a train
Was afraid of a few drops of rain.
It went into a tunnel,
And squeaked through its funnel,
And wouldn't come out again.

The engine's name was Henry.

She was a 4-6-0 tender engine that resembled a hybrid of the LNER Gresley A1/A3 Pacific and the LNER Ivatt C1 Atlantic but painted in the licensed version of the LNER's apple green with red stripes standard to the North Western Railroad/Railway of Sodor with the number 3 on her tender.

She was taking a local passenger train of green and cream bogie express coaches from Vicarstown to Tidmouth along the Ballahoo line when it began to rain - and the rain seemed to sting Henry's boiler like acid.

Worried for her passengers, she rolled into the coming Ballahoo Tunnel and stalled there.

Her engineer/driver and fireman were arguing with her, but she would not move.

"Not only will the acid rain spoil my lovely green paint and red stripes, but it will melt the coaches' roofs and soak the passengers!" she said.

The conductor/guard blew his whistle until he had no more breath and waved his flag until his arms ached, but Henry still stayed in the tunnel and blew steam at him.

"I'm not going to go out in this rain and melt my coaches' roofs for you!"

On the opposite line came Eagle the Red Engine with his local passenger train of orange branch line coaches.

Along with him came Sir Topham Hatt I, the man in charge of all the engines on the Island of Sodor.

The engines all called him The Fat Director.

"We will pull you out!" said Sir Topham Hatt/The Fat Director, but Henry just blew steam at him.

Everyone pulled except 
Sir Topham Hatt/The Fat Director, "Because," he said, "my doctor has forbidden me to pull with my current asthma."

But still, Henry stayed in the tunnel.

Then, they tried pushing from the other end.

Sir Topham Hatt/The Fat Director said "1, 2, 3... PUSH!"

But he didn't help.

"My doctor has forbidden me to push." he said.

They pushed and pushed and pushed, but still, Henry stayed in the tunnel.

Meanwhile, the conductor/guard had sent for one of the other engines that had helped to build and unite Sodor's railroads/railways to help push Henry out.

At last, Bronwyn - another Red Engine - came along.

The conductor/guard waved his red flag and stopped her.

"Oh, Henry, you clod!" groaned Bronwyn.

Everyone argued with Henry.

"Look! It has stopped raining!" they said.

"Yes. But it will begin again soon." said Henry. "And what will become of your coaches' roofs then?!"

With a mighty whistle, Bronwyn buffered up to the end of the rear coach.

Bronwyn pushed and puffed and pushed as hard as she could, managing to move Henry a foot or three, but still Henry stayed in the tunnel.

Eventually, even Sir Topham Hatt/The Fat Director gave up for the day.

"We shall take away your rails, and leave you in there until you are ready to come out of the tunnel and brave acid rain again." he said.

This made Henry feel very remorseful.

As the other tunnel carrying the opposite line was double tracked, there was no need for the tunnel Henry was in anymore.

So the workmen took up the old rails and built walls in front of and behind Henry so that other engines would not bump into her.

The line Henry was on had switches built in front of and behind the walls to divert trains off and into the other tunnel.

All Henry could do was to watch the other trains running through the other tunnel.

She was very sad because she feared nobody would see her lovely green paint with red stripes again - all because she became overly paranoid about a potential acid rain.

As time went on, the other engines like Edward and Gordon would pass by.

Edward would say "PEEP PEEP! Hello."

And Gordon would say "POOP POOP! Serves you right!"

Poor Henry had no steam left to answer.

Her fire had gone out.

Soot and dirt from the tunnel had spoiled her lovely green paint with red stripes anyway.

How long do you think it will be before Henry overcomes her fear of rain and decides to journey out again?
Come Out, Henry! - RE-WRITTEN
This is the first re-written The Railway Series story I ever wrote that has just now been published that reflects my new head-canon about the Island of Sodor, its people, history and railways. I have decided to tackle The Sad Story of Henry/Come Out, Henry! whilst elaborating on some of the characters in the story and making Henry to be paranoid about a very real danger of acid rain and fearing the worst of its corrosive effects.

Based on the Railway Series books created by the Reverend Wilbert Vere Awdry, Christopher Awdry and the Reverend Edwin Richard "Teddy" Boston; Thomas the Tank Engine & Friends created by Britt Allcroft, David Mitton and Robert D. Cardona; and Shining Time Station created for PBS (the Public Broadcasting Service) by Britt Allcroft and Rick Siggelkow

The Railway Series ®, ™ and © The Reverend Wilbert Vere Awdry, Christopher Awdry and the Reverend Edwin Richard "Teddy" Boston for Random House via Heinemann and Egmont Publishing

Thomas & Friends ®, ™ and © Britt Allcroft via Gullane Entertainment (Thomas) Ltd., David Mitton and Robert D. Cardona via Clearwater Features, Mattel via HiT Entertainment

Shining Time Station ®, ™ and © Britt Allcroft via Gullane Entertainment (Thomas) Ltd., Rick Siggelkow and Quality Family Entertainment for New York City's WNET 13. Funding was provided by the Corporation for Public Broadcasting (CPB) and by contributions to your PBS (Public Broadcasting Service) station from Viewers Like You.

Bronwyn the Other Red Engine by TheIndustrialGarratt :icontheindustrialgarratt:
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R63 - Hook Chased by the Crocodile
This is my own Genderbend/Genderswap/Rule 63 (female) version of Captain James Bartholomew Hook of the "Jolly Roger" from the 1953 Walt Disney Productions animated adaptation of J.M. Barrie's Peter Pan - Captain Johanna Blair Hook who is more inclined to use human and animal sexuality to try and escape the Crocodile. Here she is in the water at Skull Rock shaking in fear as she tries to fight off and escape Tick-Tock the Crocodile.

I took inspiration from this picture by malphasbcs :iconmalphasbcs:Captain Jacqueline Hook 3 in which the full Version can be found at malphasbcs' Patreon account. Taking an existing screenshot of the Crocodile in GIMP, I then added Hook in and adjusted some things in the background to make her fit in and not stand out poorly. As you can see, poor Hook has lost a great deal of clothing and is trying to escape with her life, albeit somewhat nude in the process.

Also included in the ZIP file are variants on the exposure levels - the original base file, a clothed but barefoot variant, a topless variant, a bottomless variant, a nude but wearing socks and shoes variant, and a fully nude variant. You will need a program like WinRAR or WinZIP to extract these files, though.

Here are DeviantArt's rules for nudity - which are very self-explanatory.

Nudity - Fairly self explanatory. While not all nudity requires a tag, if your work displays a penis, testicle, vagina, (female) nipples or anus you should assign this tag.

Sexual Themes - Use of clear sexual terms or references, including sexual based humor. This category may also cover images involving models in explicitly sexual poses or erotic scenes.

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• Masturbation
• Sexual Intercourse
• Vaginal, Penile or Anal Penetration
• Sexual body fluids (actual or simulated)
• Erections
• Vaginal or Anal Spreading
• Adult oriented (sexual) toys

Since there is none of the previously mentioned no-nos and Hook here is of the consenting age of 42 years old, this should be okay with the proper filters!

Tracing Base for poor Hook is Sailor FAIL 6 by SenshiStock :iconsenshistock:. Check out her base pieces for your works, but make sure you read and agree to her rules!

Johanna Blair Hook - me, PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:

Tick-Tock the Crocodile ®, ™ and © The Walt Disney Company via Walt Disney Studios Motion Pictures.

Captain Hook and Peter Pan ®, ™ and © The J.M. Barrie Estate and The Walt Disney Company via Walt Disney Studios Motion Pictures, Walt Disney Studios Home Entertainment and Walt Disney Feature Animation.

Inspired by the Stories and Pictures of TickTockCroc :iconticktockcroc:Ticktockk :iconticktockk:OtherTickTock :iconotherticktock:, Huttify :iconhuttify:, TheShockermaniac :icontheshockermaniac:, MsHook :iconmshook: and DragnusArtWork :icondragnusartwork:.
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"Did you miss me, Captain?" snarled Peter Pan as he eyed his opponent, Captain Catherine James Hook.

"How did you escape my beast?!" gasped Hook in anticipation of the renewed aggression ready to happen.

They stood atop the deck of a fully rigged (three-masted) 74-gun pirate ship of the line Hook and her first mate Mr. Smee had commandeered and christened the Jolly Roger II moored on the oceans around a rather empty Neverland. 

For a while, it seemed that Hook and her crew would have left Neverland forever - but that was not the case.

Pan had tracked the progress of Hook ever since she tried to feed him to the crocodile long ago in hopes of retaking Neverland and avenging his lost honor.

Just then, Pan spied something in the water - something that would provide a useful distraction.

"This is for feeding me to the crocodile long ago!" gnashed Pan as he stretched his arms out, using what remained of his pixie magic to pull something out of the water beneath the ship they were on.

As Hook turned to see what Pan was lifting out, she gulped when she saw that it was the big orange Octopus of Neverland. 

It had eight suckered tentacles and two eyes protruding from its body. 

But she didn't have time to think; for as she turned back to face Pan, Hook soon felt herself inside the maw of the Octopus which had just been dropped down on her. 

Realizing what was happening, she stretched her arms and legs out to pry herself free.

"SMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!" Hook screamed as hard as she could, lifting her head out.

After having extracted herself and retreated to the other side of the ship, Hook grimaced and cringed at the sight of the Octopus licking its chops, getting excited and cupping its tentacles back and forth to make a Plip-Plop sound as it drew near.


"Nuh uh! Stay away!! I command thee, beast!!!" snapped Hook weakly, trying to assert dominion over the beast. 

But her fear soon took hold as she wrapped her arms around a deck railing for safety. 

Hook began to whimper as the Octopus wrapped its two forward tentacles around her purple long trousers over her stockings and black boots. 

After three seconds of being stretched by the beast; Hook's pants, stockings and boots came off to leave her bottomless with her bare feet, rump and genitals exposed. 

She tried to regain footing, and as she did, Hook drew her sword to successfully slice off two of the Octopus' tentacles. 

She didn't care about the exposure, as long as she could assert some command over it all.

"Two down, six to go..." sighed Hook, hoping that this would give her a lucky break. 

She soon found out wrong.

Two more tentacles wrapped around her legs as the beast began to drag Hook over the port side of the Jolly Roger II, as she noticed the hero-turned-coward Pan fleeing across the sky. 

She suddenly found herself underwater, overboard, and in the maw of the Octopus as the maw acids began dripping. 

The acids melted her hat and began dissolving her clothes before Hook plucked herself out of the maw of the beast and in the waters around Neverland.

Hook almost lost holding her breath and swimming up towards the surface to the sight of the Octopus' tentacles rushing after her. 

As the beast began to surface, Hook was now utterly nude and being subjected to some bizarre pleasure at the tentacles of the beast. 

One tentacle was squirming its way into her birth canal to make love to her, while another slithered its way up her abdomen and over her navel to fondle her cornsilk breasts and rosy pink nipples.

Gasping in horror, Hook called out once again: "SMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!"

The one tentacle kept thrusting in and out as two more tickled Hook's bare toes until the captain suddenly climaxed.

It was the burst of energy she needed to escape!

Summoning the last of her strength, she stretched the creature's tentacles into flinging her up in the air and over the starboard side of the Jolly Roger II to land in the water. 

Coming back up to the surface, skinny dipping, Hook saw the Octopus begin to sink back towards the bottom when its eyes spotted her. 

Screaming in fright, she began swimming faster and faster to escape the beast now chasing her as she would not shake off the beast until nightfall when her crew aboard their ship would pick her up...

Catherine Hook and the Octopus
Featuring Catherine Hook, a villainess by Huttify :iconhuttify: and Ticktockk :iconticktockk:. Check their works and favorites out! Picture is www.deviantart.com/huttify/art… by Huttify :iconhuttify: as well. If any of you two want me to remove this piece, I will graciously do it no ifs, ands or butts (pun intended) about it!

This must be Pan's revenge on the Hooks for her trying to feed him to the Crocodile!

Story Inspiration found from this GIF provided by malphasbcs :iconmalphasbcs::
    1. Captain Jacqueline Hook 4

The Octopus of Neverland ®, ™ and © The Walt Disney Company via Walt Disney Studios Motion Pictures.
Catherine HookHuttify :iconhuttify: and Ticktockk :iconticktockk:.

Inspired by the Stories of TickTockCroc :iconticktockcroc:Ticktockk :iconticktockk: and OtherTickTock :iconotherticktock:.
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SUPERMAN REBORN: REIGN OF THE SUPERWOMEN

written by

Robert D.C. Barnes III (PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:)


Based on "Superman" Characters and Situations

printed in Action Comics created for DC Comics

by Jerome "Jerry" Siegel and Joseph "Joe" Shuster


30 East Trillium Circle
The Woodlands, TX 77381
936-231-8467
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Superman Reborn: Reign of the Superwomen

Story Treatment


The Logline


When the Man of Steel dies destroying the reborn evil Doomsday, his two beloveds Lois Lane and Lana Lang sacrifice their mortality to become Kryptonian superwomen. As they hope to carry on Superman's legacy, they must inherit the mantle if the Earth is to stop a Cyborg Superman.


Main Characters


1.    LOIS LANE ♀ - Age: 37. Species: Terran (later Kryptonian). Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Black hair in a Long Hime cut, Fair skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Chief reporter of the Metropolis Daily Planet newspaper and fiancée to Clark Kent/Superman/Kal-El. Having figured out Clark was Superman/Kal-El on her own long ago, she and Lana are asked by him to fulfill his dying request - inherit his powers and become the next Kryptonian protectors of Earth. At first needing some time to adjust to being turned into a Kryptonian, Lois and Lana will have to fight the evil Cyborg Superman in order to keep their beloved's memory and legacy alive for a return.

2.    LANA LANG ♀ - Age: 35. Species: Terran (later Kryptonian). Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Red hair in a Long wavy cut, Fair skin, and a Medium register voice. Chief anchor of the Metropolis WGBS-TV Galaxy News television station and an old childhood friend to Clark Kent/Superman/Kal-El. Having figured out Clark was Superman/Kal-El on her own long ago, she and Lois are asked by him to fulfill his dying request - inherit his powers and become the next Kryptonian protectors of Earth. Growing up with Clark/Superman/Kal-El in down home Smallville, Kansas, Lana is able to provide a human perspective for Lois when they team up to continue their beloved's mission.

3.    KELEX ♂ - Ageless. Type: Kryptonian-based Hologram with Humanoid Proportions. Base: Fortress of Solitude. Tall and Athletic build, White Helmet with Black Eye Holes, White Bodysuit, Black Belt, Black Gloves and Boots, and Low-Medium register voice. Upon hearing of Kal-El's death in killing the evil Doomsday from Lois and Lana, Kelex becomes their guide to all things Kryptonian around the Fortress of Solitude. He introduces them to the spirits of Kal-El's long deceased parents Jor-El and Lara and helps initiate them in the process of turning humans into Kryptonians. He and Kal-El were close like brothers, so any friend or ally of Kal-El's would most certainly be within reason a friend of Kelex's.

4.    RICHARD WHITE ♂ - Age: 33. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Brown hair in a Short-Medium cut, Fair skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Reporter and Assistant editor of the Metropolis Daily Planet newspaper and coworker to to Clark Kent/Superman/Kal-El and Lois Lane/Superwoman. Recently widowed, Richard is now a single father with a young son named Jason White, trying to get a fresh start and keep his son in school. He, Jimmy and Clark used to form a Daily Planet bowling team to go out on Friday nights and give Jason some good times, and looked up to Superman and Clark even though he sometimes pined for Lois Lane's affections.

5.    JASON WHITE ♂ - Age: 6. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Age-appropriate build, Blue eyes, Brown hair in a Short-Medium cut, Fair skin, and an age-appropriate register of voice. Jason White is a very shy boy who worships Superman even in death due to the Man of Tomorrow himself bravely trying to save him, his father and mother from a nasty accident. Clark/Superman/Kal-El and Richard comforted each other and Jason after his mother died. In trying to move on, he is in the same first grade with Cat Grant's son. When Lois introduces Cat to his father Richard, Jason and Cat's young son Adam bond over their most cherished memories and adventures of Superman.

6.    PERRY WHITE ♂ - Age: 61. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Dark Grey hair in a Long-Medium cut, Fair skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Chief editor of the Metropolis Daily Planet newspaper, he is saddened to lose Clark and Superman in one fell swoop having figured out Clark was Superman and Kal-El on his own. Having thought of Clark, Jimmy, Lois and Cat as though they were like his own children, he cannot bear to lose another and his usual gruff demeanor becomes much sadder, softer and gentler. After Lois becomes one of the two Superwoman, Perry hopes to contact General Lane and the President in order to start reviving Superman.

7.    JIMMY OLSEN ♂ - Age: 34. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Auburn Brown hair in a Short-Medium cut, Medium Dark skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Chief photojournalist of the Metropolis Daily Planet newspaper and best friend to Lois, Clark, Richard and Cat. Having figured out Clark was Superman/Kal-El on his own long ago, Jimmy helps direct Lois and Lana in the direction of the Fortress of Solitude with his Superman Watch that Kal-El made for him. When it appears that Cyborg Superman - an Army creation - goes out of hand, he decides to confront his old flame Lucy Lane about it and begin work on reviving the Man of Steel.

8.    CAT GRANT ♀ - Age: 33. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Blonde hair in a Long wavy cut, Fair skin, and a Medium register voice. Chief gossip and Opinion-Editorial columnist of the Metropolis Daily Planet newspaper and coworker to to Clark Kent/Superman/Kal-El and Lois Lane/Superwoman. Recently divorced from Joe Morgan, a husband who had driven her to drink, Cat is now a single mother with a young son named Adam Morgan, trying to get a fresh start and stay sober. At one point very much interested in Clark Kent, Cat is barely able to function with the tragic deaths of Clark and Superman. Lois tries introducing her to Perry White's son Richard.

9.    LUCY LANE ♀ - Age: 32. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Medium-Tall build, Blue eyes, Brown hair in a military bun, Fair skin, and a Medium register voice. Her full title is Major Lucy Lane of the Judge Advocate General's Corps, United States Army. At first her father's assistant in the project to develop Cyborg Superman with young CIA agent Hank Henshaw to replace the real Man of Steel, she has doubts about whether they can control it which are soon realized. At first, she and Lois have a strained relationship while she takes comfort in joining the dating scene being torn between Richard White and her old flame Jimmy Olsen. But Cyborg Superman draws her back to Lois.

10.    SAM LANE
 ♂ - Age: 64. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Tall Athletic build, Blue eyes, Dark Grey hair in a Medium cut, Fair skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. His full title is General Samuel Lane of the United States Army. At first quite resentful of the relationship his daughter Lois has with Superman, he had been working on a project to create a Cyborg Superman to replace him should the Man of Steel ever be killed. Hoping that with governmental control the Cyborg Superman could be better, he soon regrets having been a part of the project when the Kryptonite-fueled Cyborg Superman begins a spree of destruction and aids Lois and Lana in trying to destroy his creation.

11.   
SUPERMAN ♂ - Age: 36. Species: Kryptonian. Homeworld: Kryptonian. Physical Features: Tall Athletic build, Blue eyes, Black hair in a Medium Regular cut, Fair skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. He is also known by other names like Clark Kent the Big Blue Boy Scout and Kal-El the Last Son of Krypton. Either way, he is the Man of Steel we know and love and is here to protect all of us. At the beginning of the movie, he dies killing the evil Doomsday and his body is sent away into the Yellow Sun of Earth (Terra Sol). His spirit looms over the rest of the film until he is able to recover and return to life in the final act to stop the evil Cyborg Superman run amok. His beloveds are Lois and Lana.


The Background


The trappings of the film have some hallmarks of the original Christopher Reeve Superman movies produced by the Salkinds and directed by Richard Donner, Richard Lester, Bryan Singer and Sidney J. Furie - the planet Krypton being a stark crystalline planet with holograms, crystal technology and wardrobe which carries over into the Fortress of Solitude at the North Pole. Smallville is portrayed as being a Middle American town along Interstate 70 in Kansas along the old Santa Fe and Union Pacific lines through the area as seen in old Superboy comics. Metropolis is something of a cross-section between 1930s New York City and present day New York City with elements of Toronto and Vancouver as well.

The story itself takes elements of the Post-Crisis on Infinite Earths story "The Death of Superman" and the DC Rebirth to DC Universe comic book storyline of "Superwoman", as well as elements of the television series Supergirl. It is from the former where we get Superman's final battle with Doomsday and the arrival of Cyborg Superman around the same time. From the middle we get the evolution of Lois Lane and Lana Lang into the two Superwomen. And from the latter comes the inclusion of General Sam Lane and Major Lucy Lane in the U.S. Army with the Department of Extranormal Operations - with the creation of Cyborg Superman spearheaded by Sam Lane and CIA agent Hank Henshaw.


The Premise


The double girl power of Thelma and Louise along with the 2017 Wonder Woman come together in a spiritual continuation of the Christopher Reeve Superman movies with this four-quadrant five-act action-adventure superhero fantasy chick flick with 20% of the combined overall box office, merchandising, television advertising, home media sales and rentals going to support the National Organization for Women and the Christopher and Dana Reeve Foundation if the film is successful. As the title suggests, the two beloveds of the Man of Tomorrow's life - Lois Lane of Metropolis and Lana Lang of Smallville - become the two Superwomen and protectors of Earth in awaiting the rebirth of Superman.

When he is killed in destroying the reborn evil known as Doomsday, Superman is mourned by the two loves in his life at one point or another - two he trusts deeply with his last request. Having proven the goodness and potential in them, Lois and Lana make the journey north to the Fortress of Solitude and request the help of Jor-El, Lara and Kelex in continuing Kal-El's mission. Undergoing a powerful transformation, Lois and Lana become Kryptonians and the two Superwomen needed to protect the Earth. When the U.S. Army's experimental Cyborg Superman threatens to destroy the world, Lois and Lana have to come into their own if they are to save Earth and resurrect their beloved Superman.


The Nemeses


Aside from their own human concerns of how to adapt to being transformed from humans into Kryptonians as a result of their vowing to fulfill Superman's last dying request to leave Earth in good hands (Man vs. Self), Lois and Lana will face several challenges in becoming the dynamic duo of Superwomen to protect the Earth and its inhabitants from disaster (Man vs. Nature). Some will come from Lois' strained relationship with her father General Samuel Lane, and sister Major Lucy Lane, in the U.S. Army (Man vs. Society). But ultimately, her and Lana's enemy comes in the form of the Cyborg Superman who frees two criminals from the Phantom Zone to wreak havoc and tarnish Superman's legacy.

1.    CYBORG SUPERMAN ♂ - Age: 35. Species: Terran. Homeworld: Earth. Physical Features: Tall Athletic build, Brown eyes, Dark hair in a Short cut, Dark skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Formerly a CIA agent and NASA astronaut named Hank Henshaw, he chose to become the Cyborg Superman in order to show up and replace the Last Son of Krypton. In truth, his envious, paranoid and egomaniacal mind seeks to conquer the Earth and claim either Lois or Lana as his bride and queen. He is soon accompanied by Quex-Ul and Mala - two Kryptonian villains long sentenced to and now set free by him from the Phantom Zone (flat rhombus-shaped tumbling mirror) before General Zod, Ursa and Non.

2.    QUEX-UL ♂ - Age: 45. Species: Krypton. Homeworld: Kryptonian. Physical Features: Tall Athletic build, Red eyes, Dark hair in a Short cut, Tanned skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Quex-Ul was once a member of the Military Guild and Defense Council under General Zod, but was convicted of killing Rondors, an endangered species once native to the planet Daxam, to use their healing horns for the purpose of profit. Lobotomized into a wrathful brute by the Science Council and sentenced to the Phantom Zone, Quex-Ul slowly begins to recover his intelligence and eloquence upon being freed by the Cyborg Superman. With it comes a sense of chivalry in not wanting to hurt women if he can help it.

3.    MALA ♀ - Age: 40. Species: Krypton. Homeworld: Kryptonian. Physical Features: Tall Athletic build, Grey eyes, Silver hair in a ponytail, Fair skin, and a Low-Medium register voice. Mala is a former member of the Kryptonian Science Council. Some years before Krypton and its sun Rao exploded she attempted to take over the planet by removing a great deal of moisture from the atmosphere with her inventions. Sentenced to the Phantom Zone alongside Quex-Ul by Jor-El and Vond-Ah - and freed by Cyborg Superman, she becomes the new Ursa - replete with the bizarre fascination with authoritative-appearing badges and is also driven by Faora/Ursa's "perversions and unreasoning hatred of all mankind."


The Heroes and the Twist


Understandably for a film about Superman, the Last Son of Krypton himself only shows up in the first and fifth/final acts of the movie. With his depicted death in saving the Earth from the evil Doomsday and the effect it has on everyone on Earth who knew him best, the film follows his two beloveds Lois Lane and Lana Lang as they band together to try and carry on Kal-El's mission and legacy. As some work to bring the Man of Steel back to life, a few set about the task of not only killing him but tarnishing and destroying his legacy to leave his work all for naught. With Lois and Lana coming to terms with the near-Kryptonian goodness they had deep down, they need to harness it to honor Superman's legacy.


The Story Breakdown


Prologue

    1) We open on various animated versions of old Superman comic books as well as the Max Fleischer and even Hanna-Barbera Superman cartoons which evolve into colorized scenes from the old Kirk Alyn Superman movie serials, the George Reeves Adventures of Superman television series, the Dean Cain Lois and Clark series, the Tom Welling Smallville series, the Tyler Hoechlin appearances on Supergirl, and finally moving into the Christopher Reeve followed by Brandon Routh and Henry Cavill Superman movies. All the while, the John Williams theme to Superman plays under a title sequence evocative of the Christopher Reeve and Richard Donner films based on the Man of Steel...

Act I

    2) After that, we find ourselves at the Daily Planet offices where Clark Kent, his fiancée Lois Lane, their friends Cat Grant and Jimmy Olsen, and their editor Perry White are celebrating Perry's son Richard becoming the associate editor of the paper. The celebrations are broken up by a report coming in across the citywide television news feeds. WGBS-TV's Galaxy News' chief anchor Lana Lang is the first to report that a flying mysterious presence has wreaked havoc across Smallville and is now barreling straight for Metropolis. Lois, Jimmy and Perry nod to Clark that this looks like a job for Superman, and he ducks away to change into his signature blue, red and yellow suit of the Last Son of Krypton.

    3) It is a vile and demonic presence from ancient Krypton known as Doomsday. He has come to Metropolis to seek out the only presence on Earth capable of putting up a decent fight and maybe destroying him. As Lois and Lana each leave the confines of the offices or studio to cover the pending fight for Earth, Superman tries to reason with Doomsday at first. Enraged by the memories of how many times he was destroyed and recreated, Doomsday demands the cycle end with the destruction of everything. Resigned to having to kill the poor creature to protect the people, Superman gets to work by using tactics to his advantage. But the raw power Doomsday is able to harness is taking its toll on him.

    4) The fight is long and brutal as Superman and Doomsday wear each other out and start beating each other to death. A weary Doomsday tries to kill Jimmy, but he is saved by Superman being forced to throw a shiv of green Kryptonite to cripple the Kryptonian monstrosity. In doing so, he finally is able to beat Doomsday down and hard in the middle of Centennial Park after every bone in his body is broken and being forced to absorb some of the Kryptonite radiation. A horrified Lois and Lana rush to Superman's side as Lois bestows his Clark Kent glasses on him to try and wait for paramedics. It's too late, but Superman begs the two loves of his life to fulfill his last request as he dies in their arms.

    5) Metropolis and the rest of the world find out Clark Kent and Superman are one and the same, and that they both died to save the city - all on the same day and night. At the Daily Planet offices and Galaxy News studio, it is clear that Lois and Lana are taking the deaths of Clark and Superman hard, but also stressing over how to keep their promise to honor Kal-El's legacy. What began as a joyous day to celebrate Richard White becoming associate editor of the Planet turns into his hardest assignment to date in memorializing the Man of Steel. Perry tries to comfort Lois by saying she will not be able to keep her promise just standing around there, so Lois calls Lana and tells her to meet her soon.

    6) As she gets up to leave, Lois comforts a distraught and inconsolable Cat who was hoping to take her son Adam to meet Superman some time or another. A little while later, Lana arrives at Lois' apartment where she and Jimmy are waiting. While Superman's body is going to be interred at a facility outside Metropolis for the time being, Lois and Lana need to know how to honor his legacy and prove that his four parents' (Krypton - Jor-El and Lara; and Earth - Jonathan Kent and Martha Kent) faith in humanity was and is justified. Jimmy says that they really need to go back to where it all began. Lana has already arranged for them to be on the next train out of Metropolis for Clark and Lana's hometown.

Act II

    7) Returning to the Kent family farm in Smallville, Kansas; Lois, Lana and Jimmy find five glowing Sunstone crystals in the remains of the baby Kal-El's space pod which rocketed him to Earth from the dying planet Krypton years ago. These five crystals (red, yellow, green, blue and white) form five keys through which any human could access the Fortress of Solitude. Lois worries that they might be Kryptonite, but Lana reassures her that Jor-El must have put them in the rocket before the planet exploded. With the keys in their possession, they head to the North Pole in order to find the Fortress of Solitude - all empty yet warm inside. They put the keys into the control console to access Kelex.

    8) Back down at a secret U.S. Army and Department of Extranormal Affairs installation in the Mojave Desert, news of Superman's death has traveled far and wide to reach the ears of Lois' family - USA General Samuel Lane and his daughter Major Lucy Lane, USA JAG Corps. General Lane tries hard to be indifferent and somewhat dismissive of Superman's death - believing he can create something better to show the world they did not need him. At first Lucy volunteers for this project, but someone speaks up and volunteers in her stead - CIA agent Hank Henshaw. In a grueling 112-hour operation, Henshaw is transformed through advanced cybernetics into the Cyborg Superman to replace the real one.

    9) 
Lois and Lana explain to Kelex the circumstances surrounding the death of Kal-El and his last request that they honor his legacy. Upon hearing these words, the spirits of Jor-El and Lara unveil to Lois and Lana two crystal chambers that could fulfill Kal-El's request - to turn any human beings into Kryptonians with red and yellow solar radiation. Jimmy watches nervously but hopefully as Lois and Lana each step into a chamber and are subjected to a near-painless process of their molecular structures and physiologies being altered into those of Kryptonians on Earth. Emerging from the chambers, they don't feel any different until Jimmy tests them with knives. They truly have become Kryptonians.

    10) 
In a twelve Earth-hour process that feels like twelve Earth years, Lois and Lana are educated by the spirits of Jor-El and Lara in celestial knowledge attainable by Kryptonians to complement their salt-of-the-Earth common sense and morality. During this process, two costumes are created to Lois and Lana's measurements. Lois' is the blue suit with yellow belt and red cape, boots and outer underwear - all adorned with a red and yellow S-shield House of El family coat of arms on the chest and cape back. Lana's is a two-tone blue and yellow long sleeve leotard with red gloves, cape, boots and S-pendant cape collar. Both are now adopted into the House of El, readied to continue Superman's legacy.

    11) When Henshaw comes to as Cyborg Superman, he has all the strength and powers of the real Superman and even all of his memories - Krypton, Smallville, Metropolis, all of it - barely indistinguishable. His first test will be in destroying some test nuclear ICBMs with his strength, his hurricane breath and heat laser vision. In preparing to destroy the final missile, the very fragile and blackened mind of Henshaw takes over Cyborg Superman and goes rogue - taking the missile up with him far into outer space. He focuses on a tumbling flat rhombus-shaped mirror in which sit two criminals banished from Krypton - not the Phantom Zone of Zod, Ursa and Non. He then shatters it and frees Quex-Ul and Mala.

Act III

    12) Returning to the Daily Planet and WGBS-TV Galaxy News in Metropolis, Lois and Lana begin the process of getting acquainted with their new abilities and lives as humans-turned-Kryptonians. By now, both the city of Metropolis and the town of Smallville recognize that Clark Kent and Superman - both dearly departed - were one and the same. Lois, Jimmy, Cat, Perry and Richard White all agree to leave Clark's cubicle office empty while others come to decorate it with tributes to the fallen Man of Steel. Lois notices that Cat is starting to fall off the wagon after Clark's death, and asks Perry if Richard could drop Jason off with Jimmy and Adam for the evening while he takes Cat out for some dinner.

    13) Jimmy and Richard ultimately agree and it is agreed for a date between Cat and Richard. Lois sees the two off as she goes off to find Lana and meet up at Clark's apartment, but high winds and a storm are rolling in over the Eastern seaboard. An errant bolt of lightning strikes the Chrysler Building spire which is somehow powerful enough to weaken the support base of the spire as it begins to creak, bend and tumble downwards to the ground. Thinking quickly, Lois ducks into a revolving door to become Superwoman Lois and shoots up to grab the spire before it hits innocent citizens down on the ground. In ecstasy of having done good, she flies it back up and uses heat laser vision to secure it.

    14) Amazed and freed by the power of flight given her, Lois goes for a soar over the city to take in her powers as her night has only just begun to take flight. Lana sees that Lois has just saved the Chrysler Building and decides to take action of her own with her powers. Turning into Superwoman Lana, she then finds a pair of alt-Right spies scaling the 6th Avenue Bank of America skyscraper and catches them when they start to fall. She delivers them to the MPD officer on the beat and shows him what the two crooks might confess before flying off. Superwomen Lois and Lana meet up in the skies above Metropolis to discuss their achievements as Lois spots a cat stuck in a tree she flies down to rescue.

    15) Superwoman Lana then notices the big storm rolling in and suddenly senses that there is a bomb planted on the United Arab Emirates Ambassador's Boeing 747. She flies up and sees it detonate in the starboard outboard engine as the plane begins to dive towards Metropolis Harbor. Moving to catch the plane by the broken engine strut, Lana helps pull it up and level it out to serve as the new engine until the plane comes in for a safe landing at Metropolis International Airport where the Daily Planet and WGBS-TV Galaxy News staff are joining the reporters and photographers to welcome the Ambassador. It is here that Lois and Lana reveal the truth about who really saved the city and the people.

    16) The press and the world are shocked that Lois and Lana have chosen to honor the fallen Superman by becoming Kryptonians, but they declare their intentions to honor the two Superwomen's rights to privacy and to not burden them. Across the country at the DEO, Cyborg Superman has heard of the two Superwomen's deeds and detects the arrival of Quex-Ul and Mala and goes to meet them. He is paranoid and contemptuous toward the late Superman's legacy and seeks to tarnish it any way he can. He finds the two Kryptonian villains and tells them that the late Jor-El sent his son to Earth but Kal-El died protecting the planet. He now wishes to destroy every last legacy of Jor-El on Earth.

Act IV

    17) Fearing for her sister's life, Lucy calls Lois and tells her that Henshaw has turned himself into a Superman impostor and is on the loose ready to wreak havoc. Hearing that Lucy is in talks with Lois, General Lane confesses that he made the Cyborg Superman to be fueled by Kryptonite and is out to destroy Superman's legacy. Ashamed of himself for going through with this, he asks his eldest daughter how he can make things right again. Lois has an idea and relays a call to Lana, Perry, Richard, Jimmy and Cat - Superman's body must be exhumed and taken to the DEO where a mixture of yellow solar radiation filtered through a green Sunstone crystal could regenerate his cells and revive him.

    18) Having received the call from Lana and Lois, Metropolis' Mayor Fleming requests President Olivia Marsdin send a US Air Force C-137 plane to ferry Jimmy, Perry and Superman's body to Edwards Air Force Base where DEO personnel will take custody of Superman's body and attempt to bring him back. Marsdin is moved by the request and orders a C-137 take off for Metropolis at once. Cat and Richard are very curious and anxious about why Jimmy and Perry are leaving to go to Superman's burial place in such a hurry. Having managed to swipe the green Sunstone crystal from the Fortress of Solitude, Jimmy hopes that this experimental treatment can bring his closest friend back to life.

    19) The three villains prepare to make their start of destroying Superman's legacy by ransacking and laying waste to the Kent family farm in Smallville that night. Cyborg Superman, Quex-Ul and Mala use their heat laser vision to set the Kent farmhouse ablaze as they soon try to use the tractors and combine harvesters of nearby farms as projectiles to destroy the rest of the farm. What do survive are many old photographs of people Kal-El/Clark Kent/Superman has had close ties with over the years. Among these are of Clark with his friends from the Daily Planet and Smallville High School. Having a certain lust for the two Superwomen, Cyborg Superman desires to claim at least one of them as his bride.

    20) Landing at Edwards Air Force Base in California, Perry and Jimmy are welcomed by General Lane and his daughter Lucy as they take the body of Superman to a yellow solar radiation solarium where Jimmy unveils the green Sunstone crystal to filter the radiation through. In this time, Jimmy and Lucy attempt to confront the other and ultimately reconcile. Lucy confesses that she wanted no part in this bloody horror, but wanted to make her paranoid father proud. Jimmy notes that General Lane's paranoia has doomed the planet and his favorite daughter if Superman cannot come back in time. As these happen, Superman's body regenerates and is taken to a bed where he needs to build energy.

    21) As the morning sun breaks over Metropolis, General Lane calls Lois and tells her that he will be flying back that afternoon with Lucy, Jimmy and Perry to see what they can do to help when Cyborg Superman hijacks the television news feeds of the city just as the WGBS-TV Galaxy News morning broadcast is getting underway. He demands either Superwoman Lois or Superwoman Lana surrender to him and become his bride in order that the city be spared his wrath. Enraged that Cyborg Superman is willing to threaten Metropolis out of a petty desire to tarnish Superman's legacy, Lois prepares for the fight of her life even as she tells Lana she is needed to stay in case Lois fails to stop the trio.

Act V

    22) Superwoman Lois is ready to take on the trio of Quex-Ul, Mala and Cyborg Superman even if the odds are 3 to 1 against her. Just as she is ready to face off with them, Superwoman Lana appears and says that odds of 3 to 2 against them is better. Testing them with causing some havoc and destruction on the Bakerline elevated subway bridges, Cyborg Superman's trio watches in total derision at Superwoman Lois bravely does what she can to save the people of Metropolis and act as a damage sponge. This is all to give an opening for Superwoman Lana to begin a manic aerial chase against the villains. Weaving under Hell's Gate and Highvale Bridges over Metropolis Harbour, Lana closes on the villains.

    23) Lucy, Perry, Jimmy and General Lane keep watch and beg Superman to return in time to save Lois and Lana. But when Lucy goes to check on him, he sees his bed empty with a blur of blue, red and yellow shooting out towards the city of Metropolis. Seeing children in danger from Mala forces Superwoman Lois in a rage to grab her and fling her into the One Glenmorgan Square Jumbotron shooting out all the LED lights on it. A battle of freeze breath between Superwoman Lana and Quex-Ul turns Fifth Avenue into a giant ice skating rink - just what the people need in a citywide summer heat wave. The fight continues until Cyborg Superman grabs Lois and Lana, flinging them into the subway.

    24) Just when Cyborg Superman is ready to take them on again; a blur of blue, red and yellow knocks him right out. Superwomen Lois and Lana cannot believe it - their beloved Kal-El/Clark Kent/Superman has come back to them! Now it is a real battle - an evenly matched battle. Cyborg Superman is not about to let anybody take away his chance to dominate the Earth, and he loses all sense of humanity to channel his animalistic wrath onto his "inferior" progenitor. He, Quex-Ul and Mala charge forth as Kal-El, Lois and Lana prepare themselves. When Quex-Ul uses his heat laser vision to ignite the methane-filled sewers, Superwoman Lana inhales then exhales it at faster-than-light speed into the Sun.

    25) The battle rages through the skyline of Metropolis as Mala headbutts Superwoman Lois through a LexCorp Tower, Cyborg Superman and real Superman struggle atop the Emperor Building, and Superwoman Lana throws Quex-Ul into Sentinel Freedom's torch. General Lane calls up to Lois and Superman - telling them Superman has weapons of Kryptonite which should bring down the Cyborg Superman once and for all. With the lead-handled swords of green Kryptonite, Superman and the two Superwomen finally kill Cyborg Superman and cripple Quex-Ul and Mala. But the strain causes them to fling the swords out to sea in Metropolis Harbour and fall back to the ground in Metropolis' Centennial Park.

    26) Tired but triumphant, Lois and Lana help themselves and Superman to their feet when they hear cheers. The grateful public citizens of Metropolis rallies around to congratulate Lois and Lana the Superwomen as well as to embrace Superman and welcome him home. Jor-El's faith in humanity has proven justified - therefore, he was right to send Kal-El here as a child. Offering penance for his part in creating the Cyborg Superman, Sam Lane brings in a Phantom Zone projector to send Quex-Ul and Mala back to the Phantom Zone to continue serving their terms. Perry White tells Superman he expects him back at work next week Monday at 8 sharp which he embraces with satisfaction as they head home.

Epilogue

    27) Clark, Lana and Lois watch Jason head off to school and wonder what awaits them next, after reading about Lex Luthor announcing a doomed run for President of the United States. Confident that the Earth is in safe hands for now, Superman and his two Superwomen - Lois Lane and Lana Lang - fly up above the Earth, smile at us and shoot off to the unknown. Once again; they are faster than a speeding bullet, more powerful than a locomotive, able to leap tall buildings in a single bound. Being neither birds nor planes; they can change the course of mighty rivers, bend steel in their bare hands, and will continue to fight the never-ending battle for "Truth, Justice and the American Way"...
Superman Reborn: ROTS - concept movie treatment
Back into Sta.sh Writer I go, and what have I churned out this time? Another concept movie treatment, this time, based around the DC Comics characters of the greater Superman and Superboy family in creating an amalgamation of the DC Rebirth Superwoman titles coming off the heels of the classic DC Comics story "The Death of Superman" that I hope to write and (maybe) direct someday. The title of this potential live-action action-adventure superhero chick flick fantasy movie? Superman Reborn: Reign of the Superwomen - with the title taken from the spiritual title of archenemy Lex Luthor - "The Reign of the Superman".

If someday this movie of mine is made, it could be a nice breath of fresh air entry and a soft reboot in the greater Worlds of DC Cinematic Universe with it being a spiritual continuation of the Salkind and Christopher Reeve Superman movies directed by first Richard Donner (The Omen, The Goonies and Lethal Weapon), then Richard Lester (A Hard Day's Night and The Three/Four Musketeers), Sidney J. Furie (The Ipcress File, Iron Eagle and The Boys In Company C) and Bryan Singer (X-Men, Public Access and Valkyrie) in the overall DC movie pantheon.

THE STORY

As the title suggests, the two beloveds of the Man of Tomorrow's life - Lois Lane of Metropolis and Lana Lang of Smallville - become the two Superwomen and saviours of Earth in his absence. When he is killed destroying the evil known as Doomsday, Superman is mourned by two loves in his life at one point or another - two he trusts with his last request. Having proven the goodness and potential in them, Lois and Lana make the journey to the Fortress of Solitude and seek to continue Kal-El's mission. Undergoing a powerful transformation, Lois and Lana become Kryptonians and the two Superwomen needed to protect Earth. When the experimental Cyborg Superman threatens to destroy man, Lois and Lana must come into their own if they are to save Earth and revive their old Superman.

USUAL LEGAL DOUBLE SPEAK

This treatment written by yours truly, PeachLover94 :iconpeachlover94:.

Superman characters and situations created by Jerry Siegel, Joe Shuster and others for DC Comics (National Periodical Publications) and Warner Media, LLC ®, ™ and © 1938+.
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65,000,000 Years Ago - The Zaar Empire of the Akronians reigns supreme as the ultimate power in the Milky Way (once called the Olympus Galaxy, now the Near Universe), Hyperion (once called the Whirlpool Galaxy and NGC 5194, now the Middle Universe) and Denubian (once called the Diamond Galaxy and NGC 7610, now the Far Universe) Galaxies. The Akronian Zaars are a lavender skinned, red eyed humanoid race with a civilization versed in magic/sorcery as well as advanced science/technology that is a horrifying love child of the Roman Empire and Nazi Germany. King Drolmacht Dolmen I and his young general Kropper Kloppen rule over these galaxies and worlds with the fist of tyranny.

    A) Fed up with the persecution of the innocent worlds and their inhabitants; the goddesses Arcadia, Rhea and Denubia rally together to lead the charge in building up a massive underground resistance. Scrounging up whatever technology they could, they build a primitive sort of shield and laser defense turret network to push back the Zaar Blood Knights and take back their worlds. Hoping to stifle the rebellion, King Drolmacht fires a giant asteroid twenty kilometers in diameter at light speed towards one of the rebelling worlds. Testing their new wormhole generator, the rebellion flings the asteroid towards our galaxy toward the third planet in the Terran Solar System - Earth; killing the dinosaurs.

    B) The gods and goddesses of our Universe rally in support of the Rebellion spearheaded by Arcadia, Rhea and Denubia. With Earth being a small, out-of-the-way, backwater planet; it is mostly spared from the ravages of the war between the Rebellion and the Empire. A few stray asteroids, meteors and debris fragments flung through wormholes towards the Solar System manage to hit Earth, but most do not bring about extinction events like the one Drolmacht threw at the Rebellion. Advancing their science and technology levels while recovering magic and sorcery texts and paraphernalia, the Rebellion grows in power as they start jacking Imperial fleets and reverse engineering them for study.

    C) In the bloody Battle of Apophis - the first major battle of the Intergalactic Civil War; Arcadia, Rhea and Denubia charge with thousands of rebels against the largest base of the Zaars in the space between the Olympus, Whirlpool and Diamond galaxies. General Kropper and his Blood Knights fight back with all their might, leaving over hundreds of rebels slaughtered on the salt flats that day. In the end, however, the Rebellion pushes the Zaar Empire back and out of the Apophis system. Gaining control of the planet with access to the vast orbital shipyards and space stations, the Rebellion begins production of fleets of warships to push back against the mighty Imperial war machine of skull ships and tanks.


32,500,000 Years Ago - The Intergalactic Civil War between the Rebellion and the Zaar Empire has slowly started to become a war of attrition that sees neither side making significant long term gains against the other. King Drolmacht VII has ordered Project Daltanious to be put into action in hopes of crushing the Rebellion and bringing the galaxies under the Zaars' dominion once again. The Daltanious Project would see the creation of three giant mechanical fighting machines which would combine to form a giant humanoid fighting robot - Atlas a sentient humanoid robot, Beralios the intelligent robot lion, and the giant fighter starship vehicle Gunper would combine together as one giant machine of power.

    A) These first three robeasts would form a mighty weapon of unthinkable power and mass destruction called Voltron. But the Zaars would need to hurry in order to bring Voltron online and lay waste to the Rebellion's fleets and armies forever - for the once proud Zaar Empire of the Akronians (recalling the Galactic Empire of Star Wars) had also been developing and using weapons and powers related to nuclear, biological and chemical energy. The fallout of these would someday begin to mutate the Zaars from humanoid form into a rather vulnerable and primitive parasite de-evolution (recalling the devolution of the Kaled race into the Daleks of Doctor Who) which hastened their completion of Voltron.

    B) Hearing of the creation of Voltron, the gods and goddesses of the Universe send their best legion of espionage operatives to steal, if not outright destroy the mighty robot before it can be used for evil. When a few are captured and brought before the new King Drolmacht VII and General Kropper V, they try to warn the Empire that even they might not be able to control the monstrosity the Zaars will create if it and its components turns against their creators. Voltron comes online, and as soon as it sees the Rebellion operatives willing to die so that others may live in peace and freedom, a fatal error occurs - one that will ultimately spell disaster for the Zaar Empire of the Akronians' plans of domination.

    C) In the words of King Drolmacht Dolmen VII, their Voltron develops a "twisted and uncouth sense of justice" that was anathema and a dire threat to the Zaars. Having come online, a just born Voltron states that the ideal universe should be one of "freedom, independence, to feel, to question and to resist oppression in all forms". Desperate to bring their creation back under control, Drolmacht tries to re-corrupt Voltron with visions of absolute power to do whatever it wants and that its ideal universe is the one of "weaklings and spineless cowards" not fit to evolve and later inherit any power for themselves. Refusing to fight for evil and cruelty, Voltron escapes with the Rebellion spies to fight for justice.


1,000,000 Years Ago - Over the final millennia of the Intergalactic Civil War, Voltron and the Rebellion soon begins to overcome the stalemate that the struggle had been as a war of attrition on both sides. With the perfection of hyperskip (Faster-Than-Light space jump travel), Voltron and Rebel forces can enter a planetary system in need of protection from the Empire. Staying over the course of half a century, they will build up a system's planetary defense networks, armies, air and space fleets until they will be able to hold off a major attack by the entire Imperial war machine. Soon, only a few dozen worlds in any of the galaxies will remain steadfastly loyal to the Zaar Empire and King Drolmacht XIII.

    A) Doing research on a captured Zaar soldier and an eventual mutated Zaar parasite, the Rebellion desperately tries to find a process that will reverse the de-evolution process and save the Zaars before it is too late for any peace in the Universe. Some of the research is then able to decipher another source of this deadly mutation process - the addiction to the vast inter-dimensional energy known to them as Quintessence which is used in laser weaponry and antimatter bombs when mixed with vast quantities of the mineral hexamite. It is the level of Quintessence radiation that is mutating the Akronian Zaars. The Rebellion scientists scurry to develop an antidote in order to bring peace to the galaxies.

    B) Harnessing the abilities Voltron is equipped with; Arcadia, Rhea and Denubia pilot the mighty robot with quantities of the antidote to use on an encroaching army of Zaar Blood Knights in the Battle of Typhon. Stunning the Zaar army, the antidote is delivered into one of the Blood Knights - General Teles I. The antidote removes the tumors from the body that would begin to devolve the humanoid Zaars into the mutated Zaar parasites. With his mind cleared and his eyes opening up to the cruelty and tyranny that the Akronian Zaars rule with for millions of years, Teles rallies the Blood Knights that have been saved by Voltron and the Rebellion to begin a march on the Typhon castle of King Drolmacht.

    C) General Teles and his Blood Knight army arrives at the Grand Zaar Castle of Typhon where Drolmacht and General Kropper XI have taken up positions with Voltron seemingly as their prisoner. Once the High Command finishes congratulating Teles on his success, Teles soon turns on his masters and tells them he and his army outnumber them all and that Voltron has been delivered to Drolmacht and Kropper as a reluctant executioner. Enraged but not surprised by this betrayal, Drolmacht unleashes his latest magitechnological creations - the robotic dragons of Dracotron which slaughter dozens of Blood Knights to protect Drolmacht. Voltron and Teles' army barely escape with their lives off Typhon.


7,000 BC - Voltron, the Rebellion, and some splinter factions of the Zaar Empire who are freed from Drolmacht and Kropper, continue their long struggle as the ultimate battle of the Intergalactic Civil War draws nearer. Over the course of the Battle of Akron, many fleets of starfighers and space battleships are lost and armies of tanks and soldiers are decimated by Robeasts. One of those Robeasts is King Drolmacht piloting a self-modeled Robeast against his earlier creation turned archenemy Voltron. Escaping to his private star fortress in space, one mighty final battle between Robeast and Voltron ensues with Voltron's pilots Arcadia, Rhea and Denubia fighting alongside the Rebellion forces on the front lines.

    A) Voltron was designed to be invincible and with powers that exceeded those of the Universe's gods and goddesses combined, but even the mighty robot is barely enough against the power of a fully Quintessence-infused Drolmacht Robeast. Just as Voltron strikes the definite blow against the wicked king, Drolmacht chants and then screams out his mightiest curse in order to destroy his own creation. Swept off its feet and overcome by the deafening power, Voltron splits up into its component beings - Atlas, Beralios and Gunper - as they are flung out of the star fortress to fall towards the planet below. What happens to them next will shock the remaining Zaars and the Rebellion for centuries to come.

    B) Gunper is split into fifteen starfighter vehicles - five based on future Earth aircraft which combine to form Kurugger the Strato Fighter, five based on future Earth land vehicles which combine to form Rikurugger the Turbo Terrain Fighter, and five based on future Earth watercraft which combine to form Kairugger the Aqua Fighter. Together they form the mighty robot Dairugger XV (XV pronounced fifteen) - later known as Vehicle Voltron. The mortified Zaars and the confused then thankful Rebellion see that even though the first Voltron was defeated, it is able to regenerate and split itself up. But they know each of the Voltrons that follow will only be a fraction as powerful as the original Ancestral Voltron.

    C) Arcadia sees to Dairugger XV as it rises to prepare for another attack on Drolmacht when they see Beralios falling and then splitting into five pilotable robot lions - the Black Lion of Sky, the Red Lion of Fire, the Yellow Lion of Earth, the Blue Lion of Water, and the Green Lion of Forest. With Red as Right Arm and Hand; Blue as Right Leg and Foot; Yellow as Left Leg and Foot; Green as Left Arm and Hand; and Black as Body, Wings and Head, the five formed GoLion - later known as Lion Voltron. They rush over to Atlas who is regenerating and splitting up into three pilotable humanoid robot gladiators - the Black Alpha of Wisdom, the Blue Beta of Courage, and the Red Gamma of Compassion.


6,999 BC - The final year of the Intergalactic Civil War draws to a close as a badly crippled King Drolmacht Dolmen XIII creates an entire army of Quintessence-infused clones of himself fused with self-modeled Robeasts to try and finish off the Rebellion. He discovers that his own design, Voltron, survived his attempt to destroy it but was likewise crippled. The Black, Blue and Red Gladiators that were once part of Atlas come together to form Albegas - later known as Gladiator Voltron. Dairugger XV, Albegas and GoLion prove to be formidable foes of the Zaars and their Robeasts, but they are each only a third as powerful as their progenitor the Ancestral Voltron in fighting off the forces of their creators.

    A) Before the three Voltrons (Dairugger XV, Albegas and GoLion) storm his last underground stronghold on Apophis, Drolmacht XIII orders half of his Quintessence-infused clone army with General Kropper Kloppen XIII launched into space aboard sperm-shaped space arks which serve as sleeper ships to travel to compatible worlds where their mutated forms will be able to infiltrate, survive and later reestablish contact across the stars with each other. Activating their Blazing Swords and summoning Quintessence Void projectors, the three Voltrons tear a rift in Apophis small enough to banish the surviving loyal Akronian Zaars and King Drolmacht into another dimension which they cannot escape.

    B) In a last ditch effort to secure a potential future victory and escape, Drolmacht summons Dracotron to battle the three Voltrons and then destroy them forever. Trusting in the guidance and wisdom of Arcadia, Rhea and Denubia; Dairugger XV, Albegas and GoLion charge up their weapons with their Quintessence Void projectors to cast the five dragons of Dracotron into the Mirror Dimension from which few, if any, can ever escape. With the fall of the Zaar Empire of the Akronians assured for now, the Rebellion and the Voltrons go off to help the worlds of the galaxies heal themselves from the ravages of war and tyranny. In this time, the Voltrons become known as the "Defenders of the Universe."

    C) Over the course of their journeys across the stars away from the prying and vigilant eyes of the Rebellion-allied worlds, the Zaar space arks make their way to a few backwater planets in the Olympus, Whirlpool and Diamond galaxies. They each land in Quintessence-strong areas of the planets Galveston, Deram and Galra where the mutated Zaar parasites scout out for Quintessence pools to incubate and find eventual hosts to parasite off of to reestablish their rule. Traveling across the uncharted badlands in their armored humanoid shells (again recalling the Daleks) to these pools, they lay their nanoscopic ova in the pools to await hosts swimming and drinking to make their move against Voltron.

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I was born in 1994, so I am one of the 90s generation. In 2007, I heard about the game Super Princess Peach, where Peach has to save Mario and Luigi, and I developed a little crush around her.

Some of my art has revolved around Peach and the rest of the Mario gang, but I have shared other interests as well. I will be putting up some of my other art as well to showcase various interests, but I hope to later become a Video Game Developer, a Film/TV Director, a Manga Artist/Writer, and or a Voice Actor later in life.

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Thanks.

Also, I saw your meme pictures surrounding the Jurassic Park/Jurassic World movies and their scientific inaccuracies and the paleontology community’s reactions to them - and I agree with your arguments.

Did I enjoy the movies? Um... yes. Are there things about them which I would have done differently if I was making them? Absolutely! All in all, however, I enjoyed them for what they were and what they aspire to be.
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Aww, shucks. Thanks. How is everything across the pond (Atlantic Ocean) for you?
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