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TFOD - Carolinus, The Green Wizard WIP1 by paulrich TFOD - Carolinus, The Green Wizard WIP1 by paulrich
My fan-art model of the Carolinus character from the animated film, "The Flight of Dragons".



Created in MakeHuman and Blender.  
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lady-die Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
I know he has that big, droopy nose in the animation, but it doesn't look quite right in 3D for some reason. Other than that, the only thing I could suggest is to add some more aging to his skin texture. Like wrinkles, sagging skin, visible veins, and age spots. And definitely put in some muscle tone to his arms.

Check out this image for a good idea: tn.clashot.com/thumbs/2848969/…
The arms of a boy, man, and grandfather.
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paulrich Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the critique.  I think I'll stick with the nose and arms.  I think it's poorly lit. I put a lot into the skin and wrinkles but it's not really coming across here.  I'll do some more work on the skin.  Also need to fix a lot of things with the hair.
Thanks again!  :-)
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lady-die Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Hah no problem! You got some good stuff going on here.
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