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Drawing this Again
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Published: September 21, 2012
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Entering the contest now : D here's the template, hopefully it's good improvement.. it's... 6 years anyway. Whoa.

Somehow I feel like I would have expected more improvement for 6 long years... but oh well.

I also tried using the very same media and tools I used back then, even some of the same pencils too.

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sthephanymel's avatar
sthephanymel|Student Digital Artist
This is amazing!! One of the only drawings that actually improved. More expressive and beautiful than the first one.
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Parororo's avatar
Parororo|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot <33
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ThaVrisco's avatar
Super nice, but you could have kept the swamp.
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Jowe10torsion|Hobbyist General Artist
That's super awesome !! 


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tomytieneblas74's avatar
tomytieneblas74|Student Traditional Artist
Awes !!
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CypherRahl's avatar
Well, this proves that you've been at maximum level for awhile. Small variances don't change a thing.
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Parororo|Hobbyist Digital Artist
I.. really feel really far far away from maximum level, it's more like I've been a bit stuck with certain things... hnng...
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Lightninging63| Traditional Artist
The old one is pretty simple. Girl sits on rock, eats fruit. One sole fruit hangs above her head, drawing attention up. Rock with face draws attention down. Not much going on in the background.

Then you've got the new one. This has the girl in an interesting pose, smelling the fruit perhaps instead of just nomming it. There is more shine in the dress, and the hair running down the front draws more attention to Mr. Rock. The tree trunks from the ground curve up from the ground, bringing the eye up to see the other background trees and the fruit hanging above the girl, who we focus back on.

The new one is a massive improvement over the old one. Yes while the old seems less human in a less human-like world, the new one has a new degree of elegance, and the format is far better.

So.. Great work :)
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pyararin|Student General Artist
I like the old one better, just because her expression seems more interesting to me. She seems more human, less perfect and elegant. The old girl has a tummy on her, some messy, wispy hair, and you were less shy with the shading it seems. Your technical skills with the materials have improved, but I just like the personality of the older one better ^^;;
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liefsixther's avatar
I love it both :) but preferred the old one.. maybe because of the background and the ambience of the picture.. :) Good job by the way! keep it up! :D
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playerlove|Hobbyist General Artist
The old one is my personal fav, but the new one is awesome too!
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Parororo|Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much c:
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OoOdanaOoO|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This reminds me of a darker version of the nina ricci fantasy perfume advert, I don't know if you've seen it or not... I like the drawing style and the shiny apples, yum!
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carla-ng|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me encantan ambos!! :lol:
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theendofmyworld|Student General Artist
the first one is my favorite personally. although i like the coloring you used on the second one...
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murphysmate's avatar
Beautiful! Its a shame you can't see the whole frames on either of them though, I think the foot over the border on the first one and the oval shape on the second make them even better!
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BlahBlah109|Hobbyist General Artist
xD i <3 the 1st pose, but the 2nd drawing had better shading... i also like the 1st mushroom :3
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Nisai| Traditional Artist
Of course you improved but... I like the first one as well... ;w; it's not bad at all, to me they're both amazing :heart:
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myeyesinthemirror|Hobbyist Photographer
i really love your art, both versions are great
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grisarayas-x3's avatar
son preciosas las dos, y se nota el cambio, pero ojo que tambien la actitud del personaje cambio
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Koyanna|Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love both of them!
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kizZuna's avatar
las amo a ambas :iconholyshitohmygodplz:
y así una al lado de la otra,casi siento como si fueran parte de un mismo dibujo y se complementaran o algo asi
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jeruki|Hobbyist General Artist
la mejora es notable, yo si me quedo con la segunda :D aunque la primera tambien me gusta la profundidad de la escena
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roslina's avatar
appreciate how your technique improved, but i too would vote for the old one :)
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