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It's been a while since the last dose of mild body horror, hasn't it? Let's fix that!

Speeeeeeeech!

Also, hey, I noticed I got Grimmon slightly off-model on that previous page (and totally forgot his earrings), but that's fixed now.

Wurr stuff © me stuff.
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You are an incredibly talented artist and story teller! The imagery you choose to include in your panels are interesting, engaging, and give your audience a true sense of movement and emotion. You have an uncanny ability to include comic relief in an otherwise serious and rather daunting plot; good on you!

My only recommendation for this page is a simple grammatical suggestion. At the beginning of the speech (in panel 4). I would suggest botching "all of you." You could change it to something like "None of you know war. None of you have seen it" or "You don't know war. You haven't seen it." I think that repeating the first part of the statement would give his introduction a bit more of a punch for the reader.

Other than that GREAT WORK! I love reading the WURR comics and I can't wait for the next page to come out!
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Yet another review of this amazing webcomic from me.

I have to say, the person creating this is not only an amazing artist, but is an equally great storyteller.
This page, which is part of a few pages, introducing a new antagonist character, not only gives a huge insight on his motives, but also helps to flesh out the history of the fictional world that this story takes place.

I find it interesting that the wolves in that world are the equivalent to an ethnic minority in the real world. It's a nice touch, considering that its a world being run by talking dogs.

As for this particular page itself, what I fins most stunning is the final panel, which is most likely a depiction of what the dog with the spiked collar has seen in his youth, during the war with the hellhounds. It is both a horrifying and well-drawn panel. It's a little too graphic for my tastes with the mauled dead dog near the bottom right corner, but the gore and anatomy is depicted well. It is definitely a well thought out panel just to illustrate how terrifying the hellhounds could be to the ordinary dogs, particularly during a war between the two.

They do a very good job of making each dog unique, with accessories, scars, facial features and distinctive markings. I quite like the faint mask markings on the dog with the spiked collar on this page (I apologise for calling him that, as I didn't really catch his name), as they make him look older and weary, which wouldn't be very surprising.

As usual, I would like to talk about the amazing expressiveness of the dogs as well. They're expressions are believable with the anatomy of a canine's face. From serious expressions, to worry, to even laughing or horrified.

For sure, I'll definitely be looking forward to the subsequent pages to see how the story develops.
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Slipping-Star Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Hmm... maybe there is something to this wolf talk....
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strong-1 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015
I feel the images on the bottom are exaggerated because of painful memories.  
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o0Risa0o Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015  Student General Artist
wait, does pine resin make manes grow bigger or silkier?
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Paperiapina Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2015  Professional General Artist
The opposite actually. It's like a mixture of hair gel and glue. 
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CaptYeger Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist
Jo pari vuotta seurannut Wurria.. Yksi mahtavimmista Suomalaisista sarjakuvista!
Pitää josksu päästä johonkin coniin (tai johonkin muuhun tapahtumaan) ja ostaa Wurr 1 ja 2.
Hienoa työtä, jatka samaan malliin! o7
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billaria Featured By Owner May 26, 2015
The last panel. Wow. *o*
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Z1aR0 Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Hobbyist
Oh the last panel is amazing. So beautifully done!
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Luniwenor Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist
so far i thought that the mane was the reason that the big not-wolf dude seemed like a wolf to everybody.
I mean i know wolves dont have manes, but that seemd to be the most different thing in him, when compared to other dogs
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CraftyCrab Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my god the hair gel joke though
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SueaNoi Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ooooh! story time!
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Nutcase9 Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Student General Artist
War sucks.
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leplizz Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
Wasn't Iacar a pup when his father went of to war? So that would mean him and pretty face are the same age 
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CallMeShaudo Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
Oh, crud. It happened within some dogs' lifetimes.

This has the potential to be so much worse than it otherwise could have been.
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FennecFyre Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm interested in the backstory on this war. Was there some initial conflict between the hounds and the dogs or were the dogs just like "AUGH EW OH GOD KILL IT KILL IT EW"?
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Just2Comment0821 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
lovin' that last panel
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
So pine resin is their hair gel?

Anyway, this was a great view into their leader. When one experiences horrors at such a young age, it'll leave a dark impact. Almost seems that there'll be no chance of him seeing Iacar and his pack as simply a group trying to survive.

Side note, the wording seems off in the last panel. "Is lost family members and comrades"? You mean "have"?
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flyteck Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I think it's fine; it's is as in that's what the war is, or represents to them.
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Tephra76 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
A minor critique: The fourth panel should really be more like: "None of you knows war." or "None of you has known war."

That being said, the nightmare-ish depictions of the hounds are fantastic! I can imagine seeing this through a terrified pup's eyes. And it's good to see this in-depth development for the Chief, we have a better idea of why he loathes the hounds so much.
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Mustang890 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Has anyone noticed how in the last panel, there was a young pup who just happens to be the main character in the last panel?
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Fluff-Kitten Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Pretty sure that was the point, but yes.
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Silver-Dreamer-Mist Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
Yay! I can't wait to see more! I don't really like or trust Soo though...
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Viergacht Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Professional General Artist
Poor traumatized baby Prettyface. 
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Superrad1337 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I read that and said, "Oh, come on, what do you mean...?"
>scroll scroll scroll up
"I mean, he doesn't have a--oh gods..."

He's like the Ken of dogs. Dat jawbone.
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S-betatti Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student Artist
Tuossa toiseksi viimeisessä puhekuplassa ei ole englanti ihan kohdillaan, mutta muuten taas loistava sivu =)
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SilentAngelsWings Featured By Owner May 24, 2015
You've got a G on the end of resin, there. Otherwise...man I've never really sat down and thought about how truly bad the mutations can get. Though I must wonder, do we ever find out what Black Touch IS?
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harukoyamada Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
The way you draw canines, and give them such varied looks and emotions is amazing!

Also, panel 1, did you mean 'pine resin'?
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TildenWolfGirl Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome :la:
but I just realised that we clashed somehow; my demons and your hellhounds are really similar. Mine are considered randomly and strongly mutated while yours are something else altogether, but... you know... ^^;
hope you accept my apology since i created demons after you created hellhounds ^^; but I promise I didn't copy - i honestly don't know where i got the idea :shrug: guess it just popped out of nowhere. idk xD
i thought of this similarities thing when I saw this last panel and I was like "OMG THERE ARE DEMONS IS THIS COMIC"
then... well... no xD
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Zs99 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Iiiii don't think you need to apologize for that x'D She's not the first to use the demon/hellhound concept and won't be the last owo
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TildenWolfGirl Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heehee ok xD
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Firetear501 Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm really suspicious of Soo.....
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GSimonC Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Student General Artist
Lovely page :) I love the drawings in the background of the last panel :D
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