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Right, Thiolas, I'm suuuuuuure that's the first time he's ever heard that joke.

I totally had something in mind what I was supposed to say about this page, but I forgot what it was. Ah, well. Enjoy!

Wurr stuff © me stuff.

(EDIT: Okay, what's with the broken link code? My sub ran out, and I lost the auto linking thing again, but now coding it manually doesn't work either? What's up with that? It seems to be missing the < / a > ending to the tag, but every time I add it, it disappears. o.o)

EDIT2: Okay, I think I got it now. Need to copy-paste that autolink from an older page and edit that, not code it myself. Self-coding doesn't work.
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brushtail-thegreat Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
The line "No one will still mistake you for a veteran with that face." Does not sound right to me, I think it will sound more like how people talk if you have it, "Still, no one will mistake you for a veteran with that face." I am most familiar with English as it is spoken in California, so other parts of the English speaking world may construct the sentence the way you did.
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CallMeShaudo Featured By Owner Edited May 13, 2015
I don't know... I'm from Texas and it flows very well for me. However, I'm reading it as a continuation of the last sentence in the previous panel (since it's not punctuated).

I would switch around some of the words in the first panel, though, so that it reads, "The scars almost make you look like a warrior. But don't worry - no one will mistake you for a veteran with that face."
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inidis Featured By Owner May 12, 2015
No, I'm Australian and I agree with you.
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
So dude's first mission? Too bad it's to fight a group that doesn't need to be fought.
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Tephra76 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Even though these dogs still did something terrible (killing Isaan's group, and robbing Niavel of those who basically saved her life!), it's good to see this kind of depth to their characters.

And it makes it all the more tragic what they did, because they honestly believed they did the right thing, and still think they're doing the right thing.

(did any of that make sense? :?)
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D-Rock92 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
It does. A lot of stories have obviously selfish, evil antagonists. Here, it's one big misunderstanding. They're the villains, but they don't know what they're doing. And there's the inevitability of their meeting again. No matter how it goes, it'll be tragic.
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Rubicon-art Featured By Owner May 9, 2015
God, I just adore the expression in their faces. Especially five. You give them personality and movement without making them look like cartoons. It really is stunning.
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Naeomi Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
Would you ever do a kickstarter for a nice big volume of what wurr story you have so far? I'd love to buy one :>
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wolfian Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
Nice touch with the ear-piercing tool in panel four! Clack-clack! XD
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fruitbatslyra Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Weapon upgrade!
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Bloodwolf-Xx Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Gotta love the satisfied look on his face in the third panel.
Can't wait to see what happens next.
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dying-here Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
I can practically hear the suspenseful music tone playing in that last panel.
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Dediggefedde Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist
Well, looks like you were able to solve the issue!
However, if you want to be able to edit also the source, I recommend using Easy Plain Text Button by electricjonny . With that userscript you will be able to switch the rich editor on and off with a click.
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BluePawProductions Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Student General Artist
That last panel is amazing! I love the feel of it. 
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GreekCeltic Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
I really love the last panel. It makes me eager to see more of him!
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TessuDraws Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Kaksikolla on hauskat naamat! :'D
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EvlonArts Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
I find DA to be a terrible pain to code on or with.  I generally put all my code up on notepad and then copy/paste it here and then just don't touch it or it'll break :|
They need a way to turn rich text editing off, as that seems to be the cause of the problem.


In more relevant commentary, yay Wurr is progressing :D  I still forever love how the paws can function like hands, but still look like canine paws c:
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auraboreale Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I love your character development!
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Berk-shire Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'm starting to like these characters, they're so charming.
Even if they're against our heroes.
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Leopardheart16 Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But that's the best part! Even though they are technically against our heroes, they aren't really bad guys.
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Cogaidh Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I noticed that the default coding of DA tends to add in excess characters into the code that a user types. I get around this by pressing ctrl+e before I start to type, removes all the excess coding.
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Devildart Featured By Owner Edited May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You dont need a sub for it to autolink. All that happened is you attempted to link an autolink without realizing it.

In order to change the title of the auto just erase all but one letter put the name you want and then remove the letter you left previously.
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JadeRavenwing Featured By Owner Edited May 8, 2015  Student Digital Artist
You don't have a < /a> (remove the space) after 'Wurr page 214', I think that's why it won't work.
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Revonsusi Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
viimeinen kuva~ CURSE YOU! 
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kitvor Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Something has been up with the coding in general. The code I used to center images on my front page won't work in my journals. And sometimes the strike tag works in my journals, but not in comments lol. I think it's just dA being buggy.

is that "southern blackwood" petrified wood? :o
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VLaSierra Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
I think you missed the closing code "</ a>"

Lovely details as always :)
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