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Published: July 27, 2007
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EDIT 22 Aug. 2010: Updating cleaner file and better text with corrected dialogue.


This is something that I got stuck in my head some time ago, and it demanded that I'd do something to it. This was just a test, probably a prologue to a story I'm considering to make. It is actually three pages long, I finished the last page just about an hour ago, but I still have to make the texts to the other two. Don't have enough time right now.

I really need to hear your opinion, people. I will upload the other two pages within the next week or so when I have enough time to do so. But for now I'd like to know what you think about the mixture of "realistic" style and painted/hieroglyph drawings and is it easy to follow.

I could really use comments on this one.

Oh, and tell me if you can spot any grammatical error. I'm not too good in writing stories in English.
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MystYT's avatar

Do you allow dubs?

Wille450's avatar
Those dawgs looks like wolfies
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MochniStudent Filmographer
Ribbontail I think this kind of comic is something you'll enjoy, I've been reading it since around 2009 :3
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Hey thank you so much for the rec, Mochni! I'll definitely have to check out this comic someday, I love the style and am impressed by now long-standing it is. Saved to my read-list! =D
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MochniStudent Filmographer
Its very good and the world building that's gone into it is right up your alley!
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SoulKitty12Hobbyist General Artist
I've just come across this comic and I already love the style! Can't wait to continue reading, very well done
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Sweet-GemHobbyist Artist
You drew this very beautifully.
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I just realised that there is a seamonster/dragon/serpent on the map. Makes me wonder if there are other animals that can be effected by the BT besides the hounds and the monster rabbits. lol
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Omg omg omg omg omg I finally found it Cry forever 
Ive read this years ago (like 5 years ago I think) when it wasn't over 50 pages 
Im soooo happy Cry forever Cry forever Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] 
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WickedWormwood Traditional Artist
Wurr Durr

*autoshot*
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ElenaTheGSDHobbyist Digital Artist
This sounds interesting.And the art is just beautifullLove 
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KheelaiaHobbyist Digital Artist
hah, i have species called devilhounds!
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LinkandEponaStudent Traditional Artist
This is amazing! You are clearly very talented, I love your unique style!
Earthpatriot117's avatar
this first page says their dogs or hounds but clearly they look more like wolves in this picture. in fact, many of them look kinda like wolves, but most seem more dog like, so it's not entirely false. lol just messing with ya.
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ZoxynStudent Digital Artist
i am re reading this for it is epic XD
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GreyWilliamsNPHobbyist General Artist
This is awesome, so far good English~
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Keyoto-TheFoxHobbyist General Artist
I love this page, and the rest of the comic. One of my most favorites. Great job on it!
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perty
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InnuDoggy Traditional Artist
Tosi upeaa jälkeä!
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AlloraMoonLightHobbyist Artist
it's amazing. i like it
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Murasaki99Student Traditional Artist
Finally going back and putting the first page into my favs!
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Dj-LukaHobbyist General Artist
What markers did you use to outline this it's amazing!!! :omg:
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Chucha616Professional Artist
i read the 132 pages, and i liked so much, good job (sorry for my bad english, i read but no write :P )
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Wow, did you paint this by hand or on the computer?
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