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EDIT 22 Aug. 2010: Updating cleaner file and better text with corrected dialogue.

This is something that I got stuck in my head some time ago, and it demanded that I'd do something to it. This was just a test, probably a prologue to a story I'm considering to make. It is actually three pages long, I finished the last page just about an hour ago, but I still have to make the texts to the other two. Don't have enough time right now.

I really need to hear your opinion, people. I will upload the other two pages within the next week or so when I have enough time to do so. But for now I'd like to know what you think about the mixture of "realistic" style and painted/hieroglyph drawings and is it easy to follow.

I could really use comments on this one.

Oh, and tell me if you can spot any grammatical error. I'm not too good in writing stories in English.
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