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Wow, that is so awesome. Almost afraid to Critique this as it's just. So. Good! not much to Critique on to be honest. Great pose, nice twist to the Spiderman theme, awesome colouring and style.
Though, I feel as the hair is a little let down, for me. As, there aren't any dark tones as far as I can see, which makes it lack depth, even with the strong highlights. If you'd darken the shadow on the hair behind her head, it'd make the face "pop" even more and draw more attention to the face. The hair could use a little more shadow all 'round too.
But still, that is so amazing and I absolutely adore your image, and her. Fantastic work.
The way the hair flows in this picture truly signifies that there is indeed a sway from wind. Speaking of which, the hair is magnificently colored, shaded, and lighted, as well as the Spider-Man outfit, her skin, and even her top and panties. <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Eek)" /> I love how her expression easily conveys that she might have been caught in the moment. The shading and texture done to her eyes truly make the face even more believable. The background also definitely holds a nice touch to the overall piece without it stealing all the spotlight in the process. So overall, you both did an exceptional job on the coloring procedure. This really stands out as true professional work on both your parts.
Wow, just wow. I simply love the design of this picture from the proportions, to the soft colouring, to the thin but precise line art.
A few things I notice are although the lighting goes well with the background, the background is really simplistic compared to the rest of your work. The colouring in her is so detailed, I would love to see that pushed more in your background as well <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
I love her hair to pieces but it's really...not so much how hair behaves. Especially the bottom curl on the right side, see how part of the curl kinda dips off but looks like it's not connected to anything? little changes like that would make the hair look better.
But wow...I love your work, it's amazing. I hope my critique helps and fyi, Mary Jane never looked sexier <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" /> nice job!