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Red Monika strikes from the past

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Another daily commission done.
One of the Icon of my comic-reader past

the Red is always fashinating

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Jirni issue#1 exclusive fan expo cover by pant Wolvie by pant Grimm Fairy tales hot Blondie by pant London Steampunk by pant Fathom by pant
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I've always been a big fan of your detail and skills, especially the hard angles in your hair and deep lines around the exterior. Your fathom picture is by far my favorite. Now for the critiques. I do like the shape and position of the character and the way the fabric and smoke flow, but the head is too small and the hair is too big. Her arms and hands are beautifully done, but this is where I have a conflict to my own critique. I like the shoulders, and they match the arms and head fine, yet are too small for the chest and torso. It's kind of confusing and I'll probably have to sketch it out myself to really know why. It might just be perception. So as a whole I like the piece. If the head was a bit larger and the shoulders a bit wider (just a tiny fraction), I think it would be perfect. Thank-you.