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Wedding day

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My entry for THE SOUNDS OF MUSIC Challenge  
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Update :
Winner thank you so much for love, vote, support, and critique from all my lovely DA communities HugWinner
I win the contest 

The Sounds of Music. WINNERS!Hello friends!
I’m happy to announce the winners of
our last challenge
THE SOUNDS OF MUSIC

I remind they were determined by summation of the public vote and the independent jury’s vote.
The judges for this contest were
Lora-Vysotskaya, Dani-Owergoor and Wesley-Souza 
Every vote from the community vote equals 1 point.
The independent jury's vote was counted as:
Choice 1: 7 points.
Choice 2: 6 points.
Choice 3: 5 points.
Choice 4: 4 points.
Choice 5: 3 points.
You can look at the public vote‘s process HERE
And here are our winners:


Credit and Stock Thanks :


BRIDE STOCK Behind by  Theshelfs
Piano PNG 1 by  Jean52
Piano PNG 3 by  Jean52
Bob And Stalker Wedding 52 by  Falln-Stock
Cutains 02 by  PCU-Stockage
dani241 by  dani-stock
Dove by  hano22
Dove 1.6 by  mocking-turtle-stock
Piano 08 by  116802
Wing stock 14 by  rewston-stock
PNG (pre-cut) STOCK: White dove by  MAKY-OREL
Arches and Light by  fetishfaerie-stock
Model City 2 stock pack by  dierat-stock
rest is paint




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© 2019 PANJOOOLAll rights reserved.
My work doesn't belong to the public domain, don't claim my work as your own. 
It can not be reproduced, copied, edited, transmitted, plagiarism
 or sold without my permission.


I am very grateful if anyone criticized my work ,I am also very grateful if there is a favorite and support my work

Image size
7714x3000px 8.96 MB
IMAGE DETAILS
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS5 Windows
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JosefLayugHobbyist General Artist
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
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It's a great peace of work and all, but I can't help but feel distracted when I look at it. The pages and the blank space behind the piano feels distracting. The direction of the wind is eastward so the illustration should follow the general trend (her veil and the pages). The space beyond the subject needs to be de-emphasized, the lighting distracts you from the focal point. In this case I am assuming that the focal point is the woman playing the piano. Maybe I'm looking to much into this, but I don't see the story behind this illustration.
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panjooolProfessional Digital Artist
Thank you so much for your beautiful compliments and criticism, I will keep it in mind and this is really useful for me Hug thank you so much again dear Heart
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FrostyVegaHobbyist Digital Artist
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You continue to leave me breathless!

This piece, like all your others, is absolutely gorgeous! I love the touch of the papers flying around, and the birds really add to the 'serene' feeling of the piece as a whole. Under normal circumstances, I'm not a fan of singular colour compositions, but you've managed to make the different shades of neutral colours blend effortlessly and seamlessly, making the entire manipulation look calm and warm.

To add to this, your lighting is absolutely flawless, and the way the city just casually lies in the background really adds to the impact of the picture.

I see no real flaws, and if there wasn't a long list of stock references, I would've most certainly have said it was either a picture taken, or a painting, because this is certainly one of the most beautiful pictures I've seen this year!

Flawless, beautiful work!
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panjooolProfessional Digital Artist
hi dear Razzle Hi 

I can't say anything, I am very grateful for your praise, for me this means a lot, once again I am very grateful and grateful for your great appreciation, :hug::heart:
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FrostyVegaHobbyist Digital Artist
You are honestly one of the artists who deserves it most, so it's nothing but a pleasure! :hug: 
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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This large-scale digital painting is picturing a young bride at the center playing the piano on the balcony of the city's castle, as we may guess by the top view of the city's buildings as well as the Corinthian-Columns which decorate the perimeter of the balcony. The artwork emits a tranquil feeling due to the use of cold colors and the light blue hue, a fact that agrees with the title of the creation, as the wedding is supposed to be a joyful occasion which symbolizes the new beginnings.

The straight lines of the piano and background forms contradicts the curvy smoother lines of the woman's figure, something that renders her the prime focus of the artwork. Accordingly, the white pigeons surround the young bride in order to make her the point of convergence. Their open wings as well as the flying piano pages, the light wind that curves the soft curtains in the background and the whole musicality the scene demonstrates, they are representations of freedom, making us understand that the girl does not see the marriage as a life-ending scenario, but as a beautiful new chance and hope.

I believe that the color balance emits successfully the peace of environment the artist was trying to compose, as also the movement and contrast assist the mentioned purpose. In regard to the painting of the wedding dress, however, the fabric's perspective along with the black/white contrast do not flatter the bride's figure and possibly undo the previous achievements that want her the center of attention. It seems like a sketchier technique that's more similar to the image's background buildings than the rest of the woman's figure.

At this point I have to re-emphasize the amazingly serene sentiment your style of painting emits through your selection and blending of colors. It gives us a different view of your drawing themes and exhibits the flexibility of your art skills.

(The first glimpse I took of your creation made me think it belonged to <img class="avatar" width="50" height="50" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/w/l/w…" alt=":iconwlop:" title="wlop" /> . Also I voted originality not among your own artworks, but among the similar artworks I've recently seen)

Amazing job!!
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I've been an admirer of your works for quite a while, and I have always been quite fascinated with how you compose scenes from what I could call "non-conventional" angles. These angles give the impression of being snapshots taken during the sweeping camera motions done in movies and TV shows.

This piece in particular showcases your signature ability to create gorgeous, sweeping landscapes from much simpler stock images. There is a clear attention to detail, light, color, and composition, with an emphasis on motion and, oddly enough, implied sound.

There are, however, a few components that I feel could still be improved or adjusted. After looking at the image for a while, two things in particular caught my attention. The first is the woman's dress right around her "behind" where it meets the seat. The fabric feels almost too painted and thus, strangelt enough, less realistic than the rest of the piece. In conjuction with this, her proportions feel a bit odd because of it. From the angle you've chosen, it feels as if she either has no butt whatsoever, or she is missing her right leg. I believe making that adding a bit more dress to the space between the seat and the bottom of the piano will help fix this.

The other thing I noticed was the sheet music flying in the wind. While I understand what you were going for, the effect feels slightly cartoonish compared to the movie scene-like quality of the rest of the piece. Because paper catches wind very easily, it often curls and folds very easily. If one sheet had been flat, and the other more curled or folded, it would have helped the illusion that they are flying away.

Ultimately, however, these are just personal nitpicks in what is otherwise a stunning achievement in photomanipulation. You've once again captured a breathtaking scene in precise detail, and shown what a powerful medium photomanipulation can be.
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panjooolProfessional Digital Artist
hi miranda,Y Hello THAR 

I am very generous about your praise, and I also admire your work, because dark arts is something very complicated for me until now, haha, but I am very honored that you want to pay attention to criticizing my simple work,

at the point you say, I am very agreeable and right, like a little odd to me, I want to do a lot of this work, but I am running out of time, haha because this is my fault, but there is no reason for me to justify my mistake, and I am very grateful that the artists I admire pay attention to my simple works, and this is very good for me to increase my knowledge of logic, and to develop my abilities, Thank you so much Miranda, I will save your criticism in my mind and I will use it to improve my work in the future:hug::heart:
Love in the Air 
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mirandaadriaProfessional Digital Artist
You're very welcome, my friend! :tighthug:
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Divine.
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Beautiful Creative Artwork, Brilliant composition :+fav: revamp !!!
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Kiwi-R Artist
This is gorgeous! I love the atmosphere you set for this. The lighting and shadows are very well done! :clap:
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RowyeProfessional Digital Artist
The lighting on this is just perfect. :o
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Amethyst-PhoenixxHobbyist General Artist
This is absolutely stunning :love::love::love:
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RainireiHobbyist Traditional Artist
Great work!!! Smiley: Heart eyes 
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HustonCinematic Filmographer
interesting sense of wind and movement
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stellartcorsicaProfessional Digital Artist
Featured here Panji :hug: Friends feature
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panjooolProfessional Digital Artist
:happybounce: thank you so much dear stella :heart:
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stellartcorsicaProfessional Digital Artist
You are welcome Panji ^^
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Renata-s-artProfessional Interface Designer
Congrats for your winning!:clap: Well deserved!:D
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panjooolProfessional Digital Artist
thank you so much renata :hug:
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Very welcome!:D
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NaouriRedouane1998Hobbyist Digital Artist
MY GOD ! this is amazing 
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panjooolProfessional Digital Artist
thank you so much naouri :hug:
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