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Il mondo dei sogni

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Inspired by the beautiful city of Venice in Italy
Il mondo dei sogni mean The world of dreams or dreamland

dedicated to 

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Lora-Vysotskaya 

Credit and Stock Thanks :

Basilica by  Overflo-stock
Building in Italy by  Just-Stocks
Canal - Venice 1 by  Lauren-Lee
Cloud Stock 9920 by  Phenix59
DSC 0017 Venice by  wintersmagicstock
DSC 0072 Campanile of San Giorgio dei Greci by  wintersmagicstock
plaza stock by  PowderedSugar-Stock
San Marco Campanile 3 by  Overflo-stock
Statue - Venice 2 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 02 by  halbtuer-stock
Venice 02 by  neverFading-stock
Venice 03 by  halbtuer-stock
Venice 3 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 5 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 09 by  neverFading-stock
Venice 11 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 13 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 15 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 17 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 24 by  halbtuer-stock
Venice 33 by  XiuLanStock
Venice Houses by  Overflo-stock
Venice in winter 22 by  LittleOph
rest is paint



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© 2019 PANJOOOLAll rights reserved.
My work doesn't belong to the public domain, don't claim my work as your own. 
It can not be reproduced, copied, edited, transmitted, plagiarism
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I am very grateful if anyone criticized my work ,I am also very grateful if there is a favorite and support my work

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1r0zz0's avatar
:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

as a whole your artwork is very powerful, visually speaking.
composition and use of colors make the scene realistic as they show a believable scene: for example the use of atmospheric scattering that follows the sunlight direction and position together with the bloom of the light gives "depth" to the picture and tells details of the atmosphere, the humidity and the temperature of the place we are seeing, making us "feel" the picture "physically".

but the work is also fantastical: with the complicated and huge cathedral (actually basilica) that would be very expensive to make in the real world(inspired by one of the most complex basilica cathedrals in Italy).

it's a "realistic fantasy".

now on the technique used. I do not dare to know how you work, but you seem to make separate elements from photographs( like towers, houses and so on) and then compose the picture with those, then add "lightning" and atmospheric effects.
and if the first impact is great, problem start to arise when seeing the picture in details.

for example a lot of elements are repeated in the picture while it's not a huge problem on the man made structures as architecture can be repetitive (except the towers and building on the side of the bridge that are very noticeably the same element) it is noticeable, at least for me, in the gondoliers (even if enough effort was made to not have that effect)

one big problem with the technique used is perspective and proportions. for example, if we see the picture the balaustre on the bridge is taller than 2 meters...
while arches, doors and cupoles can be "unproportionate" as they could be built with different proportions, windows cannot.
in the pictures there are square windows that are as big as a house seen in the at the side of the bridge in the mid-ground...

so the composition lacks realistic perspective and appear somewhat "flat" because of that, as depth is given by athmosphere.

unfortunately this clash very harshly with the percived realism of the picture (if you prefer, the mimetic quality of the art work).
NebulaFactory's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I'm not the best at critiques but I'll do my best here.

At a first look it doesn't really catch my eye, as it has "poor" colors, but once you watch it at full resolution you start to notice the incredible drawing this is.

Showing both good structural and human painting techniques, the background, sky, lighting really gives this a realistic touch.

Other small details like the birds and accurate reflections in the water also make me like this piece of artwork.

About the painting itself, I always liked photographs and paintings of cities from the distance, and this one does fall in there for me.

In conclusion, although this is just something personal, I didnt really like the time of day the painting was set, I feel like having set the drawing at sunset or a more clear daytime would have given this picture more vivid colours.
But thats just my opinion, and it still looks awesome as it is.
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

The image is amazing it should receive an award.

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roman08162's avatar
Impressive! Creative and well done scene!Thumbs Up 
panjoool's avatar
Thank you very much dear for your beautiful compliment  :hug:
SummerDreams-Art's avatar
Excellent details and amazing scenery!! :wow:
What an awe inspiring piece Panji, your :gallery: is so stunning, :love:
panjoool's avatar
Thank you very much dear Amber for your beautiful compliment  :hug:
SummerDreams-Art's avatar
You're very welcome Panji, the pleasure is always mine! Flower4You by poisen2014
panjoool's avatar
Thank you very much dear Stella :hug:
Just-Stocks's avatar
Thank you for using my stock to create this lovely piece.
panjoool's avatar
Thank you very much dear :hug:
Samsiara's avatar
Its stunning Panji!!!!Love 
panjoool's avatar
Thank you very much dear for your beautiful compliment  :hug:
stellartcorsica's avatar
woow Panji great work !!
panjoool's avatar
Thank you very much dear for your beautiful compliment  :hug:
Rowye's avatar
Pfffft xD
This is completely amazing man, I love how well you represent the atmospheric conditions, and of course the labyrinth of shapes that all seem to be in the right place. ^.^

Since you ask for criticism, if I may... The one thing that throws me off just a little is the lighting on the boats and most of all on the people are on the boats. While some of them have a very nice highlight, others just seem to have that classic photomanip sort of contour line that makes them look a bit flat. I know this is one of the hardest things to get right, especially on small elements, but just my two cents.

Regardless, the artwork is absolutely insane in a very good way. xD
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This is both of the idea and the implementation of ingenious high-quality art. Clap Love 
Cold-Tommy-Gin's avatar
keren om Panji :wow: 
panjoool's avatar
:happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce:

Thank you soooo much wesley :happybounce::happybounce::happybounce:

this is a big honor for me :hug:





Mr-Ripley's avatar
I love Venice, and you made this city even more mesmerizing in this work. This is my favorite artwork in your gallery, Panji. :love:
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