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Il mondo dei sogni by panjoool Il mondo dei sogni by panjoool

Inspired by the beautiful city of Venice in Italy
Il mondo dei sogni mean The world of dreams or dreamland

dedicated to 

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Lora-Vysotskaya 

Credit and Stock Thanks :

Basilica by  Overflo-stock
Building in Italy by  Just-Stocks
Canal - Venice 1 by  Lauren-Lee
Cloud Stock 9920 by  Phenix59
DSC 0017 Venice by  wintersmagicstock
DSC 0072 Campanile of San Giorgio dei Greci by  wintersmagicstock
plaza stock by  PowderedSugar-Stock
San Marco Campanile 3 by  Overflo-stock
Statue - Venice 2 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 02 by  halbtuer-stock
Venice 02 by  neverFading-stock
Venice 03 by  halbtuer-stock
Venice 3 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 5 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 09 by  neverFading-stock
Venice 11 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 13 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 15 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 17 by  Lauren-Lee
Venice 24 by  halbtuer-stock
Venice 33 by  XiuLanStock
Venice Houses by  Overflo-stock
Venice in winter 22 by  LittleOph
rest is paint



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© 2019 PANJOOOLAll rights reserved.
My work doesn't belong to the public domain, don't claim my work as your own. 
It can not be reproduced, copied, edited, transmitted, plagiarism
 or sold without my permission.


I am very grateful if anyone criticized my work ,I am also very grateful if there is a favorite and support my work

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I'm not the best at critiques but I'll do my best here.

At a first look it doesn't really catch my eye, as it has "poor" colors, but once you watch it at full resolution you start to notice the incredible drawing this is.

Showing both good structural and human painting techniques, the background, sky, lighting really gives this a realistic touch.

Other small details like the birds and accurate reflections in the water also make me like this piece of artwork.

About the painting itself, I always liked photographs and paintings of cities from the distance, and this one does fall in there for me.

In conclusion, although this is just something personal, I didnt really like the time of day the painting was set, I feel like having set the drawing at sunset or a more clear daytime would have given this picture more vivid colours.
But thats just my opinion, and it still looks awesome as it is.
What do you think?
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9 out of 9 deviants thought this was fair.

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as a whole your artwork is very powerful, visually speaking.
composition and use of colors make the scene realistic as they show a believable scene: for example the use of atmospheric scattering that follows the sunlight direction and position together with the bloom of the light gives "depth" to the picture and tells details of the atmosphere, the humidity and the temperature of the place we are seeing, making us "feel" the picture "physically".

but the work is also fantastical: with the complicated and huge cathedral (actually basilica) that would be very expensive to make in the real world(inspired by one of the most complex basilica cathedrals in Italy).

it's a "realistic fantasy".

now on the technique used. I do not dare to know how you work, but you seem to make separate elements from photographs( like towers, houses and so on) and then compose the picture with those, then add "lightning" and atmospheric effects.
and if the first impact is great, problem start to arise when seeing the picture in details.

for example a lot of elements are repeated in the picture while it's not a huge problem on the man made structures as architecture can be repetitive (except the towers and building on the side of the bridge that are very noticeably the same element) it is noticeable, at least for me, in the gondoliers (even if enough effort was made to not have that effect)

one big problem with the technique used is perspective and proportions. for example, if we see the picture the balaustre on the bridge is taller than 2 meters...
while arches, doors and cupoles can be "unproportionate" as they could be built with different proportions, windows cannot.
in the pictures there are square windows that are as big as a house seen in the at the side of the bridge in the mid-ground...

so the composition lacks realistic perspective and appear somewhat "flat" because of that, as depth is given by athmosphere.

unfortunately this clash very harshly with the percived realism of the picture (if you prefer, the mimetic quality of the art work).
What do you think?
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7 out of 11 deviants thought this was fair.

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Rowye Featured By Owner May 14, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
Pfffft xD
This is completely amazing man, I love how well you represent the atmospheric conditions, and of course the labyrinth of shapes that all seem to be in the right place. ^.^

Since you ask for criticism, if I may... The one thing that throws me off just a little is the lighting on the boats and most of all on the people are on the boats. While some of them have a very nice highlight, others just seem to have that classic photomanip sort of contour line that makes them look a bit flat. I know this is one of the hardest things to get right, especially on small elements, but just my two cents.

Regardless, the artwork is absolutely insane in a very good way. xD
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little-one-girl Featured By Owner May 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist


This is both of the idea and the implementation of ingenious high-quality art. Clap Love 
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Cold-Tommy-Gin Featured By Owner May 5, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
keren om Panji :wow: 
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce::happybounce::happybounce::happybounce:

Thank you soooo much wesley :happybounce::happybounce::happybounce:

this is a big honor for me :hug:





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Wesley-Souza Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Student Digital Artist
:hug: 
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Mr-Ripley Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
I love Venice, and you made this city even more mesmerizing in this work. This is my favorite artwork in your gallery, Panji. :love:
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce::happybounce:thank you so much Tom, really mean a lot to me :hug:
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no1intheworld Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2019  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow..stunning city! You are really amazing, Panji :wow:
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce:Thank you so much no 1 :hug:
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eegariM Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2019
Great scene once again!
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce: thank you so much my friend :hug:
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Mr-Xerty Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
Waoooou! one of your best imo! :ahoy:
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce: thank you so much my friend Hug
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da505 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2019  Student Photographer
I can't describe this piece. It's full of beauty and happy. Its show one perfect  world.
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce: thank you so much David Hug
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da505 Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Student Photographer
You welcome, my friend. :)
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Secretadmires Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2019  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful scene as always!:rose:
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panjoool Featured By Owner May 1, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce: thank you so much dear secret Hug
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Secretadmires Featured By Owner May 4, 2019  Student Digital Artist
Most welcome:rose:
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I feel honored with your praise my dear Agnes :hug: and I also admire your lighting technique dear, thank you very much for the compliment dear Agnes :heart:
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Silviene Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:heart:
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kimsol Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2019
I have been to Venice and it is beautiful ... as is your artwork! 
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, I 'm soooo jealous with you Cry forever 
I wish I have wings and go to all beautiful places in the world, 

LOL, :D thank you so much dear kim :hug:
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kimsol Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2019
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha, I'm trying to fix my deficiencies in making the title ;), and I'm glad you like this title Hazel
thank you so much for the beautiful compliment dear:hug: mean a lot to me :heart:
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WhimsicalBlue Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is it deficiency Of D or A? :lol:jk
Love your art so pleasures entirely mine, Panji^^
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VitaShuba Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wonderful work!Clap 
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much dear vita :hug:
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zfbaser Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Interface Designer
wtf . again a masterpiece from Panjoool .impressive  
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you very much my friend:hug:
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tZuB Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Student Traditional Artist
Superb is an understatement. Wow!
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much dear friend:hug:
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Echoes-Of-Aimee Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm always blown away by your work, it is just amazing.
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha, this is funny, i always impres by your art dear aimee, thank you so much dear :hug:
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SecretDarTiste Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
It's like a scene from a movie, or even from concept art! So beautiful! Nice work Panji! :love:
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much dear Eve for your beautiful compliment, :hug: 
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:happybounce: many thanks dear Wesley for this honor:hug: mean a ot to me :heart:
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Wesley-Souza Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Student Digital Artist
:hug:
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Pendragon-Arts Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
Absolutely divine... just superb!!!!! :love:
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much dear mom:hug:
Next i Will try something new, i think i'm doing a lot of same work with landscape, hahaha
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Pendragon-Arts Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2019  Professional Digital Artist
Landscapes are hard! buuut... keep following your muse and your passions!!!!
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Amliel Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome :clap: I like the Venice touch :giggle:
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much dear amliel:hug:
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Amliel Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're most welcome my dear :hug:
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Aramisdream Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2019  Professional General Artist
Awesome work, with italian title, I'm happy for this! :la:
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panjoool Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2019  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much dear:hug: i hope my title is right on Italian language ;)
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