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For some reason that episode disturbed me. I even shuddered at Rarity’s line about not knowing if the curtains are tacky and I don’t know why. Maybe something to do with the existential horror of slowly losing your identity?
Edit: Also, I didn’t think “Lesson One” was that creepy when I first watched it, though looking back on it the “Want It Need It” spell is pretty insane. Does someone on the writing team have some sort of fetish? What is it with that show and mind control?
Basically, a revised version of that one bit with Buttercup in the episode of The Powerpuff Girls, "Boogie Frights"
Hilarious, now that is something I would have done if I were Twilight, everyone in the show needs to stop being a wimp and actually do something. If I were a pony and my cutie mark was stolen, I would say something like "I am not gonna be called a blank flank today!" and just punch her right in the face! Just looking at this, it makes Twilight my second favorite pony out of the mane 6 even though I don't like her as an alicorn as much and I miss her as a unicorn. But still pretty good comic.
Twilight did the easy way,Look at Fluttershys Face! It is scared all the way through!! Rarity and applejack are trying to unsee what they seen.
The First Panel Actually Shows Starlight About to use her magic,But I Think that Fluttershys face looks a LITTLE bit weird.. So,Twilight might be Chrysalis Actually Because The Fourth Panel Is showing her with a Chrysalis Face Acutally.
It was Hillarious to see How Twilight Knocked out a Tooth and Had the other three Mortified For the rest of their days. By the way you Actually did Good with Twilights Mane! Twilights Eye got a Little Smaller In the Last Panel!
This Was Hillarious!!!
This was really funny and good!I wish that actually happened!I hope a lot of people like this.Applejack,Fluttershy and Rarity's reactions were really funny and totally something I'd see in their faces.
Nothing was really bad about this and it was pretty original.That awkward silence was really funny because I know Twilight wouldn't do something like that.I would most likely see Rainbow doing this but a change of character in a different pony is hilarious!I have to say this is the best MLP Fan comic I've read so far!I hope you make more comics like this. Awesome job! Keep up the good work!
This is a hilarious comic, I like how Twilight got out of character quickly. Although, this sounds like something Rainbow Dash would do rather than Twilight. Starlight looked quite evil and menacing. Well, before she got punched at least. I also love Applejack, Rarity and Fluttershy's reaction to Twilight's sudden outburst. I guess things got out of hoof. XD Overall, this is a very funny and original comic and I think you did a fantastic job on it. ^^ I hope you find this critique fair because it's my first one. It's just a way of saying well done. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> I hope you keep making more pony comics similar to this.
This looks like something HESHE Would make! (How it should have ended) They should have just done this in the first place. But it seems like something Rainbow would do. I have a perfect title! '' Cutie Markless/The Cutie Map Alternate Ending '' The situation would have been solved faster if Twilight had thought like Rainbow Dash and less like a less violent angered Applejack and a Fluttershy mixed together. Twilight could also make a plan to mute those speakers when they were stuck in that cottage room full of torcher.... Meh oh well. Hasbro ain't gonna add it in any time soon.
The artwork is out of this world, the characters look so realistic, the looks of the comic actions made me give you 5 stars for it all! Which makes 20 stars all #TOGEETHER! TOGRTHER!# (GITUAR SOLO) #TOGETHER!# (DRUM SOLO) #TOGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETHER!# OH YEAH! IF THEY HAD SOME MORE RATING PLANS, I WOULD THINK ON THE STARS! IF THEY HAD 20 CHOICES, YOU WOULD OF HAD 100 STARS! IMAGINE 100 STARS ON THIS CRITIQUE! (HISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS) KABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM! HA! HAHA! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! WHOOOO! #I BELIEVE I CAN FLYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!... # (CRASH) I'm okay! (DROPS DOWN DEAD BUT STILL ALIVE! THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER! BYYYYYYYYYE! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! HA HA!
So I saw this and decided to look at it and I am very glad that I did. This incredible comic brought some much-needed laughter to my day. I find it absolutely hilarious how Twilight acts completely out of character. I really wish that this had happened in the actual episode! Like, DUH you guys have HOOVES. I love how Applejack, Fluttershy, and Rarity are caught totally offguard and don't know what to do. And Twillight's reaction to that is hysterical. I'd have done the same thing. Like, DUR people! Get the freakin things BACK already! Overall I think you did a magnificent job. I hope lots of people enjoy this as I did. Great job!
I love your facial expressions- they're just perfect for the humor in the strip. Twilight's expression in the last strip particularly amuses me.
Twilight getting... hooves-on... might not be the most original concept, but I think it works really well for the scene you are referencing.
I think the use of the phrase "smart-flank" was amusing too, especially coming from Twilight.
The strip made me laugh both times I read it, probably because the comedic timing is good. It doesn't drag.
I like your artistic style in general- it's cute and stays true to she show, but is unique at the same time.
I agree that this is very funny, and it would have been great to see those faces on the show (especially Rarity's), but it's probably for the best since parents would complain about the outburst. The colours are accurate and actually don't hurt your eyes, the second and third panels are humorous with those crazy eyes, and the background is simple but effective. While the concept isn't exactly mindblowing or original (after all, who hasn't expected Twilight to have an outburst once in a while?) it's still a job well done! Did I mention: Rarity's face is simply amazing. Thank you.
a great cartoony feeling to it like the show, very good Looks to it. Its really funny i love it. Da best thing evur.
Nice joke in it and it really gets the characters looks perfectly especially in the last panel.
The hair on each pony i
S exactly like it is in the show so that is anither god thing, in panel three i like the lines in the background and the color, making its mood really clear and making it a better experience.the eyes are just like they r in the show however i think they could be a tiny bit bigger.
I wish they did that on the show. It would be so funny. But, then again it isn't child wise. I love this comic and the faces. The second panel was very humorous. This just might be the best My Little Pony fan made comic I have seen so far. So I hope a lot of people see this and laugh because it made me laugh a lot also. I think you should continue this work and everyone will enjoy your work and many other things ahead in art. It looks so cute and cool my sister just enjoys this.
This is hilarious, when Twilight acts out of her character and into another one, which would be like Rainbowdash or another pony, and she sucker punches the one that had stolen her Cutie Mark, along with her other friends. Her use of 'profanity' is what really tied this together and created an awkward atmosphere, but I found it funny.
Their reactions was the best part of this whole thing, Rarity, Fluttershy, and Applejack, being taken off guard by Twilights outburst.
I hope you draw more things like this and I can tell you put some thought into this, I absolutely loved it. 10 / 10.
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