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Commission Atem x reader To be wed [1/3]

(You will be the princess of the niles. You are 15 years old, you have long [h/c] hair, and [e/c] eyes.)

You lied on your bed curled up on a ball crying.
“Why?... Why does it have to be me?.... And why now?”


“W-what?” You stood in front of your father not believing what he just told you.
“I’m sorry my dear daughter but I had no choice. In a few days you will be sent off in a few days to be married off to the Pharaohs son Atem. With this marriage we’ll gain more land.
“But father, I don’t want to marry for that. I want to marry out of love. Also I don’t want to marry someone that I don’t even know.”

~End Flashback~

“I don’t want to marry. At Least not yet.” There was a knock at your door. “GO AWAY!”
“[Y/n] It’s your mother.” You sprung up from you bed and watched at your mother entered your room.
“Mother.” More tears fell from your eyes. Climbing off the bed you ran to your mothers outstretched arms. “Mother I’m sorry. I didn’t know it was you.”
“Hush my child it’s alright.” you both sit down on your bed. “Mother I’m not ready for this.”
“I know you’re not. But do not fear my child you won’t be married right away. You will get to know the boy.”
“But mother I-i’m not good with getting to know people. Also I get nervous when talking to people.
Plus the prince might not even like me.”  Your mother smiled down at you and combed her fingers through your hair.
“You have nothing to worry about. I have met to prince before and he is a kind, and respectful young man. I’m sure that you will get along just fine. Plus both me and your father will be there so if anything goes wrong then you can right to me.” You looked down at your lap.

~ 3 days later~

You arrived at the Palace and your family was being led to  the Pharaohs throne room. Keeping your head down trying to keep yourself calm.
‘I can do this. I can do this. I can do this.’ Repeating it to yourself for so long you didn’t notice that you arrived in front of the Pharaoh. Looking up you immediately became extremely shy. ‘I CAN’T DO THIS!’  You slowly started to hide behind your mother. She looked over her shoulder at you and took one of your hands into hers.
“Everything will be just fine [Y/n].” she whispered to you. Nodding you take a deep breath calming down ever so slightly. But still stayed hiding being your mother. Meanwhile you looked at the boy that stood next to the Pharaoh. He had tri- colored hair of red, black and gold. He had a perfect shade of sun kissed skin, and her had crimson eyes. He also wore a pyramid pendant that hung around his neck. A small blush spread across your cheeks as your looked over to boy in aw. ‘He’s pretty handsome.’ Suddenly crimson eyes met with [e/c] eye’s. But as quickly as the eyes met you looked away. ‘This is not going to be easy.’

~time skip~

You lazily sat your head on the table as your father talked to the Pharaoh. Trying to muffle a yawn you looked around the room, not really listening to what they were saying. Looking across the table Prince Atem sat looking as bored as hell. ‘It looks like he’s not enjoying this either.’ Letting out a sigh.
“So what do you think [Y/n]?” You shot up in your seat.
“W-what?” Your father pinched the bridge of his nose.
“The Pharaoh asked you what you think about the theme of the wedding.” Your cheeks turned red and you lowered your head.
“Oh... yeah that sounds fine.” The two went back to whatever and you just leaned back into your chair. You then looked across the room seeing that the door was slightly cracked open. A small smirk came across your lips as an escape plan from boredom started to form in your mind. Looking around again your smile vanished when you see the prince was looking at you with his head sitting on his hand,with a bored expression, a brow raised. ‘Maybe he would like to escape too.’ You then looked to the door, then back, then looked to the door again. He looked confused. Letting out a sigh and pointed down and started to slowly slide out of your chair to hide under the table. Atem slowly followed, once he disappeared under the table he looks to you.
“Follow me.” You whispered, and began to crawl, and setting your plan into motion. Atem smirked finally understanding, and followed.

~time skip~

“Well I think that will cover enough of the wedding plans for now. So for now you’re free to go.” The Pharaoh and your father looked to where you were sitting to see a dotted out line of your body, and the Pharaoh looked to where his son was sitting to see the same.
“What where is [Y/n, and Atem]!?” Your father and the Pharaoh looked to your mother, who was only smiling innocently.
“Oh they both snuck out a couple hours ago.”
“WHAT!? Why didn’t you say anything?”
“Because probably what they were thinking, and I agree, this was boring.”

~Time skip~

Things have become awkward as both of you and Atem silently walked down the long halls.
‘Ra damn it [y/n]! Say something!’ You glanced at Atem to see that he once again looked bored.
“Hmm?” Atem looks down at you and you instantly lose all ability to speak.Your cheeks turned a rosy red and you averted your eyes to the floor again. Atem raised a brow. “You don’t talk much do you?” You shook your head. Atem let out a sigh. “Would you like to go to the palace garden?” Your head shot up and you looked towards Atem with wide eyes. Again you shook your head.

~time skip to garden~

You smiled at the various kinds of flowers.
“Th-this is a r-really beautiful garden.” You studdard.
“Thank you.” You knelt down to sniff a white flower. You paused when you felt something bump against your leg, looking down you see that it was a ball. When you picked it up a small boy came from around a bush looking at the ball in your hands. You smiled, standing and walking over to the child.
“Here this is your’s right?” The child smiled.
“Thank you Miss.” The boy took the ball and ran off. Atem raised a brow.
‘Interesting.’ Thought Atem.
Commission for :iconmomokitty27:

I hope you like it and sorry that it will take so long to complete. Also sorry to others who read my other stories I have been having writers block. But I plan on updating a lot this weekend so keep hopes up everyone.
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Tomomi24 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2017
Please update soon I want to read the rest
ImaGoneGirl Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Student Writer
GIMME MORE MAN!!!! Its been FOREVER!!!!!! I am ready to kill something here!!!!
avalonrb1214 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2015
More please!
KassidyofAsgard Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015  Student General Artist
Oooh I'm so curious as to what happens :D please update soon!
MarineSister6 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015  Hobbyist
please update this soon! i want to know what happens!
srena3100 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
Is there more coming because i'm very curious about this story.
Artaku1313 Featured By Owner May 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Will more be coming soon?
shadamy57 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015  Student Artist
i want 
HalfDemonBlairx Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Moooorreee please!!! I'm sooo curious!! Pleasee!!!
desteke Featured By Owner Edited Feb 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Please do more!!!!! I'm begging you!!!! please emote Bunny Emoji-80 (Pretty Please) [V4] 
crimsonblackrose1 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Is there more coming soon?!?!?!?!?!?!
Your0Average0Baka Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
this is awesome :D
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
worriorofdarkness Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014
When will part two be out
Xx-Neko-Pierrot-xX Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Student Writer
Part 2 !!!! Part 2!!!
KalishRalich Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Student Artist
The hell? Where did the kid come from?
HigurashiKagome15 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
PART 22222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 pweaseAlma Jinnai Chibi  (Shy) [V1] 
Phantomgirl17 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student Writer
part 2! Part 2!! PART 2!!! *Puss in Boots eyes*
sanubisgirl Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Artist
Yasmeeeen Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
more please
sanubisgirl Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Artist
I like this!
boohboohhgirl Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is my mom in real life, cool
QueenBrittStalin Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wow this is really good and it kinda reminds me of one of my own stories. At least the girl does who is Princess of the Niles, she reminds me of how my oc Brittania, Heiress of Anuket or as her family calls her Nile Princess is at first. Still it's a good story.
Panda-Otaku Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist
Thank you.
momokitty27 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014   Writer
This is cute! Thank you for writing this for me! I look forward to the other parts xD
Panda-Otaku Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist
Your very welcome. And to tell you the truth it was very hard to think of.
momokitty27 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014   Writer
I wouldn't have never thought so. It's awesome!
Yasmeeeen Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
please tell me there more
YamiJackson Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SEQUEL ! Heart Love Heart Love 
Astral-Song Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very cute
Panda-Otaku Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist
Pharaohslover14 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
kawaaiii!!Love   i am really shy with new people that sounds totally like me 
Starlig Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   Artist
Panda-Otaku Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist
Panda-Otaku Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist
No I haven't.
Starlig Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   Artist
I see
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