Well the detail in the background is something to behold! Lots of sparkles <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>
The vision is very nice but in some places it seems you've had a lot of fun with the blur tool.
Originality is very nice, I don't have much to say on that
Technique is very nice as well! The collar around her neck is not the most noticeable at first but once I get a good look at it, it's very beautiful! Although she resembles Cynder(sp?) in a way, I've seen the resemblance with Blaze the Fire Dragon as well too. But that's besides the point.
Impact is nice as well, I don't have much to say about this either.
The body structure is very well put together and I am a big fan of your art <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/> but I can't help notice the back leg, it's confusing me a bit <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> although I can see what you're trying to make her do and I've got no ideas how to go about doing that either. Also if I might mention the wing. It doesn't, well, look like it could fold up into wings that could support your character. I guess these could be things for you to work on. Although I think I should work on these things myself too...