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This reads left to right.
Eeeekk...!! It's really big... I know... O_o
Click here to read chapter 1 of this story in a "novel" format: [link] That was written based off of the 1st oringinal story just to let you know, so it's a little bit different than this...

Q: What is this?
A: A story I wrote over a year ago... except this is the "rebuild" version. I plan on redoing the whole thing by changing the story, adding new characters, and making it longer. But I'll keep the concept and the main characters the same.

Q: Why's this all messy?
A: Grr, these are sketches... and the resolution's kinda bad, sorry. I'll ink and add the screen tones to make it all clean and pretty later...

Q: Um, this story is really short...
A: Shush! I'm only 9 pages into this story. It's hardly gone anywhere yet! I'll write more pages later...

Q: Wait, what happened to your other manga, Sinner Saga?
A: Let's just say that I don't enjoy writing it. I would like to, and I tried to make myself like it... but it didn't work. I thought that if I kept continuing with it, I would eventually accpet it, but I didn't, so...

Q: Will you ever go back to Sinner Saga?
A: I don't know.

*The next time I upload more pages of this, I'll be sure to actually post up the finished pages as a full chapter and not just a few like this... -_-
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:iconmarcelinexxx:
Marcelinexxx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Are you gonna finish this?
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:iconusaige:
Usaige Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hey why is it like lunar days sim date and you just add a K to arina to make it KARINA!!!
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:iconellygirl2809:
EllyGirl2809 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lunar Days was based off her manga
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:iconusaige:
Usaige Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, I know!
But why did amy made it Karina instead of Arina??
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:iconellygirl2809:
EllyGirl2809 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe she wanted to make it slightly different or just preferred Karina to Arina :D
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clovertail128101s Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Artist
very good lol keep doing stuff
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Ravette13 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
this
is
not
a
joke!
carry
on
reading!
or
you
will
die,
even
if
you
only
looked
at
the
word
warning!


ONCE
THERE
WAS
A
LITTLE
GIRL
CALLED
CLARISSA,
SHE
WAS
10
YEARS
OLD
AND
SHE
LIVED
IN
A
MENTAL
HOSPITAL,
BEACUSE
SHE
KILLED
HER
MUM
AND
DAD.








SHE
GOT
SO
BAD
SHE
STARTED
TO
KILL
ALL
THE
STAFF
IN
THE
HOSPITAL
SO
THE
GOVERMENT
DECIDED
THAT
THE
BEST
IDEA
WAS
TO
GET
RID
OF
HER
SO
THEY
SET
UP
A
SPECIAL
ROOM
TO
KILL
HER,
AS
HUMANE
AS
POSSIBLE
BUT
IT
WENT
RONG
THE
MACHINE
THEY
WERE
USEING
WENT
WRONG.








AND
SHE
WAS
SAT
THERE
IN
AGONY
FOR
HOURS
UNTILL
SHE
FINALLY
DIED.








NOW
EVERY
WEEK
ON
THE
DAY
OF
HER
DEATH
SHE
RETURNS
TO THE
PERSON
THAT
READS
THIS
LETTER,
ON
A
MONDAY
NIGHT
AT
12:00
SHE
KREEPS
INTO
YOUR
ROOM
AND
KILLS
YOU,
BUT
SLOWLY
AND
PAINFULLY
SLOWLY
CUTTING
DIFFRENT
PARTS
OF
UR
BODY
THEN
WATCHES
YOU
BLEED
TO
DEATH
IF
YOU
DONT
SEND
THIS
TO
20
PEOPLE
BY
MIDNIGHT
SHELL
BE
COMEING
TO KILL
YOU!
SEND
IT
SO
SHE
HAS
ANOTHER
LOAD
OF
PEOPLE
TO
GET
AND
FORGETS
ABOUT
YOU
DONT
BELVE ME
HEY?

EXAMPLE
1:
JENNY
DIDNT BELIVE THIS AND DELETED IT WITHOUT EVEN READING THE WHOLE THING! A FEW DAYS LATER ON THE MONDAY NIGHT SHE WAS WOKEN UP BYE LOUDE FOOTSTEPS AND HEAVY BREETHING THERE WAS CLARISSA STANDING THERE WITH A HUGE KNIFE AND WELL JENNY IS HISTORY NOW.









EXAMPLE
2:
TOM
ONLY SENT IT TO 5 PEOPLE CUZ HE THOUGHT HED BE SAFE AND IT WAS PROBLY JUST A JOKE BUT OH HOW RONG WAS HE! HE DIED THE NEXT NIGHT ON MONDAY AND ILL TELL YA NOW IT WASNT PRETTY(JUST CUZ HE SENT FIVE HE DIDNT COMPLETE THE TASK)

EXAMPLE
3:
JOEANNA
SENT IT TO 19 PEOPLE SHE THOUGHT IT WAS CLOSE ENOUGH AND WOULD DO BUT SHE WAS WRONG SHE DIED THAT NIGHT ON A MONDAY AND ONCE AGAIN IT WASNT
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Pokewarriorsegagon Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:icontoolongdidntreadplz:
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16kc16 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is her last name really Tsuki? because that's what I named her when I played I found the name fitting because I'm writing a story about a "wolf moon god kid thing" (don't know what to call him) Named Tsuki. I plan on posting it on here some time I would appreciate it if you would check it out then.
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YukiSnowShingami Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Filmographer
_ _" i want more to read
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menoux Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
MUST READ MORE!!!:iconomfgplz:
DAMMIT MORE!!!!:iconfrageplz:

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:ninja:
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XsunakoX Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Just press ctrl & scroll down your mouse to make it smaller. and to bring it back to normal press ctrl &scroll up
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anjinha24 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
umm, is it just me or everyone else had to click the green button several times to change the page??
Anyways, greay manga
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etherealWing Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
i write manga in one of my notebooks, i hate having to pro draw it though, so the while my friendloves it, i always go sigh, why dont i fix...tomorrow
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xXYui-chanXx Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009
Ah... No wonder i was so confused. I tried reading right to left like on a real manga...im a baka. Anyways, great story!
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:icontheebilbunni:
TheEbilBunni Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2010
So did I. We can feel stupid together. lol. and this manga is interesting and i wanna read more
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MiokiTsukina Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Well, so did i! At first, i noticed the description and began reading the 'left' direction. So when we three did read right to left that shows Triple Baka. XD
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IchigoK63 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
I would read more.
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:iconai-mikami:
Ai-Mikami Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009   Digital Artist
Can't wait until the next one!!
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2009  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks for reading! :D
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:iconpalition:
palition Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
COOL~ :heart: :heart: :heart:
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you! :D
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:iconpclarice:
pclarice Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008
whaddya use? manga studio??
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Yep. :) Manga Studio 3.0 EX Pro
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:iconpclarice:
pclarice Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008
oohhhh

my god it's nice!!!
i already have that program and i wanna try to use it, but i don't understand at all!!!! hee hee... :XD:
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
It's very similar to other popular drawing programs like Open Canvas, Photoshop, and Flash. But when it comes to drawing with panals n' stuff, it gets a little complicated. :noes: I spent 3 whole days reading the manual when I first got the program. :XD:
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:iconpclarice:
pclarice Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2008
still but.....

OKAY I WILL TRY TO LEARN IT!!!!

lol am i crazy???? XDD
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:iconcitrus-owl:
Citrus-Owl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
CHEESECAAAKE!

*clk*
*clk*
*bang*

:3
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Matt loves cheesecake! :noes: That's what he wanted for his last birthday... along with a motorcycle. :XD:
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:iconcitrus-owl:
Citrus-Owl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
Vrrrooom!

*boogie*
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:iconcitrus-owl:
Citrus-Owl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
*bites Xolgas*

Mmm..

Stuffing. :)
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Be happy. :D They'll keep on flying in forever just like the glitch in my Anime Sim Date 2.0 :noes:
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:iconcitrus-owl:
Citrus-Owl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
Nooo!

But wait..

I like Xolgas...

YESSS!! -opens window-
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
*Xolgas fly in* :XD:
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:iconcitrus-owl:
Citrus-Owl Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
Nnn..

FLYING EGG! :noes:

-duck-

I know what's going to be next..

A FLYING TEDDYBEAR! :noes:
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:iconpacthesis:
Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
... and flying teddys will invade YOUR window next! :noes:
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:iconpinkublu:
pinkublu Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Its good to see this again. This is technically the 3rd version? First manga, then short stories for English, now a manga again! Well, I think it looks cooler now, even if it is sketchy right now. :aww:
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Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
I remember that Zach liked this story the best out of all the ones I wrote when he was around. :noes: It's a nice story... just gotta fix it up a little and extend it...
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:iconpinkublu:
pinkublu Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What was the last story of yours he read before he left I wonder? Maybe he'd like one of the newer ones better...
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Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Rei Bot. :XD: I hardly even consider that one a story though. I don't even have a folder for it in my deviantART gallery. :noes: That story doesn't count. It was a load of crap and nonsense that didn't make sense.
He'd probably like Miracle though... maybe.
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pinkublu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like Miracle, but I dunno about him. Some people at school like your books just because they were by you. Like Rei Bot! :noes:
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Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
It sucked... EGGS! :fork: They were lying, I just know it... :disbelief: They can all smile and say that they like Rei Bot, but they all despise it... I can see it... :chainsaw:
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pinkublu Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You know how fans are though. They like something, and thn they don't care how bad the next thing is.
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Tired-Al Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
What'd the egg look like? Sunny side or? xD.. Oh dear. sketchy indeed, but no worries, just trialwork atm. And yeah! Glad you feel that way/have that mindset, to create what you enjoy/want to! :3

*high-fve* keep up the good work.
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Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
I'm enjoying this story a lot more than Sinner Saga. :D And thanks! I'll keep up the good work. :)
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Tired-Al Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008
Yeah! :3 np at alls. It reminds me when I stopped with a random comedy-comic which I only made 2 chapters of 20 pages worth involving a set group of friends which all lived in a dorm. Was meant to just be a comedy, since I thought... well why not start off with making something that has no storyline, just random short stories. Mmmm t'was bad.
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ZemnDragonheart Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconpkgaspplz: Toko Don't Bother Other People at School!
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Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
He'll come by your window next! :icongaspplz:
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ZemnDragonheart Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What! :iconpkgaspplz: Not my window the only window that I have the whole day is Sewing! He'll team up with the evil pins.
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Pacthesis Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Lol the only window I have is in art. :omg: Oh noes! He's gonna attack me with an army of crayons! :iconomgpanicplz:
:iconcrayonplz::iconcrayonplz::iconcrayonplz::iconcrayonplz::iconrunplz:
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