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It takes a while to looooooaaaddd... :C

EDIT: Chapter twooo is now out: [link]

Whew, this took me a lot longer than I thought that it would... Well, I'm off to go work on chapter 2 now. I'm really behind in this story. I wanted to finish volume 1 by May, but it looks like I'm going to have to extend my due date. :faint:

This is very, very unprofessional. I write this stuff just for fun. Please refrain from clawing your eyes out from some of the terribly drawn panals and illustrations.

Oh yeah... here's the translation for when Mr. Toko speaks gibberish: "What real reason? That's the truth."
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LaniDraws Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2017
Dragon-Ball Z reference XDXDXD:happybounce: 
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BlackSummerDreams Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2016  Student General Artist
oh no veon's crying face is just too cute for me to handle
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JapaneseSakuraFox Featured By Owner May 27, 2015
hmmmmm. Nope, I just like Mr. Toko in this. Maybe Veon but mainly Mr. Toko
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marshmallowcharm Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
lol how did Mr Toko even became friends with Veon
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JapaneseSakuraFox Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2015
It's a long tale that most of us will probably never know and Amy will carry the secrets with her.
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jadeanimekitty Featured By Owner May 8, 2015
I love this Ariana is just like xolga lmao  btw love it ! :awesome: awesome smiley animated Rainbow awesome lick Whai hai thar :hai: :Portal: My Project :jumpingjacks: 182 : Dance Together Emoticon 
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ysa27 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
What did you use to make these? O-O Britney Spears Impressed Britney Spears Impressed Britney Spears Impressed Britney Spears Impressed 
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ysa27 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's like... INUYASHA! XDDD AWESOME LOL
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Cathymapleotaku Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Student Artist

WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!

Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.

Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death.

Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or im sorry

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Needsmorerainbows2 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i WALKED away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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CandyLPS111 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014
Is it just me or does this seem so much like Fruit's Basket?
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NinaLovesCandy Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD that dragon ball z reference 
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Apyian Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Kamekameha xD Lol~~~
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SilverSakuraA Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
her name is like my favorite anime drawer Arina Tanemura xD
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MiniPancakeDoggie Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Arina Tanemura drew Full Moon wo Sagashite, right? <3 Pancake <3
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SilverSakuraA Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
YESS !!! Exited PokeSpe - Yellow icon emoticon 
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BldElfPrince Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Student General Artist
I am so happy you made this! :D So before I found you I had played you festival days game. I saw he one part of the play (i try to get all of the ending :) ) and I was like OMG I HAVE TO FIND THIS :O I ended up searching online for a while before I gave up. After I found out you existed (sorry >.< :) ) I realized why. Super amazing btw :) (But of course all of you stuff always is :) )
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Tenku-chii Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
So THAT'S why Veon called the character in l.d.s. "princess" D': SAAD!!
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puga-chan Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013
this is so cool Wink/Razz 
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King-Kirby Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
WHY DID YOU CRY OVER SOMETHING SO- *next chapter* Ohhhhh...
NEVERMIND.
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InuGurl843 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
I had tears in my eyes at the start, it was so sad seeing veon cry also
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Marcelinexxx Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
VEOOONNNN NOOOOOOOO
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diablowizard457 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013
Veon-I don't think you're doing it right...
Arina-SHUT UP!!!!
Me- LOL!!!
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Usaige Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Lunar Days!!!

[link]
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AkiiShiori Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
serious Veon is adorable :iconrubcheeksplz:
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Lunuky Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
Kamehame =))
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Usaige Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
HA!!!!
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InsaneObsession Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Veon is so cool. Thats why I chose him first time! SO COOL IT HURTS! :iconsulkplz:
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ChessyKat01 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Sometimes, Mr. Toko reminds me of that one yellow round thing from Ninja Nonsense or Nonsense Ninja or whtevs!
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VocaloidGirl66 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
EVERYBODY LISTEN A WISE MAN ONCE SAID THIS
'Don't be a salad, be the BEST GODDAMN broccoli you can be'
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madeliefynana Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
brofist
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pinkee2901 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
WHEN DID A WISE MAN SAY THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Usaige Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hey!!!! don't you remember lunar days sim date on this one and i know there is just a few who does!
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ChloeLyn Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hHE LICKED HER.i thoh u liked muscular woman Mr.Toko
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Kokobutter Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Could it be that...

YOU'RE GETTING YOUR PERIOD?!!1!

Why does that person seem way too excited about the fact that another girl might be getting her period...?
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sisi4321 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Artist
seriously? "i veon strikes again"? realy?
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Lil--Fox Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
epic :O
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LycaonPictus14 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! i can"t believe you made her do a kamehameha!! that was soooo epically awesome!! >W<
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Marcelinexxx Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
YOU MADE HIM CRY WHY?!
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Nina14363 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol I love the trollfaces XD
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RandomNameIDont Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
anyone see the lesson they were learning?
There was something on the whiteboard saying "pg.76, SeinaxKoru" oh woooowwwww...
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mai8011 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
This reminds me of Lunar Days
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chiorihime Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
haha too funny that ka-me-ha-me-ha scene xD
whaaaaaat? Veon is crying? D: nooooo! D:
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pacthesisforever Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
WOW.............IT'S A BIG SCREEN
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Aveangeladarkangel Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Arina and I not only look alike but act alike... Ooooh Yeah =p. This is awesome, Can I just say that? You are awesome, I wish I had the guts to actually post some of my comics =_=
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ChibiChawn Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD IIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:O
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joscenty Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
not bad for a first try at manga debut, think u could publish it but, i've been meaning to ask, how didja get all the backgrounds? i know about screentones but, i just don't know how you got the spray background, the standard ones...
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angel498 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
cool^.^ love it
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angel498 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
cool!!love it^3^
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AnaNana00 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012   General Artist
JUST.
DO.
IT.


PFFFT. XD
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