ToT - Team Black Flag Application (Updated!)

So I've decided to update the application since I've got a better Idea of where I want to take Reef as a character. Not really meandering on characterisation anymore now! So do read the updated written section if you're interested! I think I've done just a little bit better with this new one then the old one. Thank you so much for taking an interest.

Don't forget to leave a comment if you can. I'd be more then happy to hear your thoughts on the update. Do you think I did better or did I do worse? Let me know!^^

Resin is owned by
Reef is owned by me
Pokemon is owned by Gamefreak and Nintendo respectively.

EDIT: caught a spelling mistake or two in the writing. Decided to try and fix it up. Probably still a few bits of grammar and selling errors, but it's a little better then before.