P0nies

To start off, I would like to say that this is a very well done piece of work. It has various elements that really bring out the tired feel that you were trying to convey.

The shading done on this is great, and I love the way that you have shaded the body of the pony and the things surrounding her. The glint off of her eye from the computer monitor is also nicely done, and the compensation for the light from the monitor is also well done, but could have been a bit more faded. But since this is colorless, it is just fine.

The overall quality of what was drawn is magnificent. It really shows your own style, and shows how talented of an artist you are. It is a great piece, with a great artist behind it. The pony is drawn excellently, providing the viewer with a nice sense of who you are looking at, whilst also providing the emotion.

Now the emotion of the piece, as stated, is one of fatigue. You do a great job of making that apparent in this work with the use of lines under the eyes, the fraying of the hair, and the use of no color adds to the overall 'fatigued' feel. No color makes it seem like the person viewing this is fatigued to the point where colors don't even register in their mind (if that makes any sense.)

Anyways, this is a great piece of art. It shows the emotion that you were trying to convey fabulously, and shows your talent as an artist. Keep up the good work; I hope to see more like this in the future.

- P0nies

Thanks for yet another thoughtful critique Lupo!

*Cough* chapter 7 *cough*

Don't worry, I plan on going more physical with everything now, there is maybe only 4 chapters left for this fic.